marski Article: Accidentally In 愛 Chapter One

posted by kowalskig

It's finally here my Marski Fanfic![Well, Chapter One]

Kowalski:Hello Marlene, why do あなた look so sad ?

Marlene:Oh hi Kowalski, Skipper asked me to go on a 日付 and after only one 日付 he broke up with me he 発言しました "You are defiantly not the one for me あなた are to girly for me".

Kowalski:Oh so that was what Skipper was doing last night.Well, I..I..I um...

Marlene:Don't be shy Kowalski.

Kowalski:OK, I.. *tapping his flippers nervously and blushing*I.. like あなた there I 発言しました it.

Marlene:You..you mean like as a friend?

Kowalski:No I mean like you..like you.

Marlene:That's what I hoped*smiles and blushes*.

Kowalski:*smiles back and blushes*Well... Skipper is probably wondering where I am. Meet me at my lab for lunch if あなた can ?

Marlene:OK meet あなた there.

Stay tuned for Chapter Two!

winkies77, MsKowalski99 and 1 other like this

Icicle1penguin Oh my gawd, so corny. XD I'm sorry, but I keep seeing Fanfics like this, I HAVE to criticize. This could've been good if you wrote it better-ish. But, ya know, the reason why it was corny was because you rushed into it. XD I mean, that moment...when the sad Marlene tells Kowalski her problem, he admits he liked her...that only took 2 minutes. I was hoping for a confession like that would take two chapters! I mean, Skipper going out with Marlene for 1 date and decides to break up with her, even though they weren't boyfriend and girlfriend yet. X) And saying it like THAT. That made me Lol. Then IMMEDIATELY after that...(Seriously, immediately) He admits it. So that...happened...in that same minute. Sorry for being a critic and all, but the fact that this is a Marski fic kinda got to me. XD (And how is that "Accidentally in Love" Oh, I love that song!) And don't think because I'm a Skilener that I'm criticizing this fic! I mean, jackandjill's Marski fic was epic! ...I'm fanning it anyway. XD

Icicle1penguin I wish this was longer. X) That picture up there (which is perfect for the setting) looks as if they were having a long conversation.

Icicle1penguin Sorry about that, I was in one of my moods...

kowalskig Well, This is my very first fanfic and I wrote this Chapter months ago when I just joined Fanpop. I promise the next Chapter will be better and much longer.

Icicle1penguin Horrah! :D Omg, if Kowalski can compliment Marlene, it should be "pulchritudinous" (Wait, look it up first) XD :D

Spi_Kat_Penguin It's shortly awesome! ^-^

MsKowalski99 @KowalskiG I LOVED THIS ARTICLE THAT U MADE! It Was Really Really Really Good! Make Chapter Two Tomorrow!

kowalskig Im Rewriting It