愛 Article: 愛 poem

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posted by irena83

What do あなた see when あなた look into my eyes? Do あなた see the emptiness
またはあなた see remorse?
Could あなた ever be able to feel the depth i’ve been hiding from you,
so あなた couldn’t laugh,so あなた couldn’t laugh...
What do あなた do behind my backs,out of my sight,
what do あなた hide,are あなた a coward?
And i’m still here but あなた don’t own me,you can’t have me
the way あなた want,you can’t,just see it in my eyes.
I froze my heart,so あなた can’t hurt what is dead for a while,
but あなた don’t know that,don’t you?
あなた think i’ll be so happy seeing あなた again,oh あなた think
あなた could make this right,but your touch tears my heart.
I don’t want this,so be gone,i’ll choose the best lies for you
so あなた could believe it,oh あなた will believe it,finally,you’ll be gone,
far away from my sight,far away from my heart.
But i wander,sometimes,does it hurts when you’re all alone,
covered with the emptiness,tortured によって the thoughts...
Oh あなた left me there before...

elizasmomma, ervinasaade and 16 others like this

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Vixie79 I have felt this so many times before. I loved it! I love these lines the best; "But i wander,sometimes,does it hurts when you’re all alone, covered with the emptiness,tortured by the thoughts... Oh you left me there before..." I have wondered this and always hoped for it too.

irena83 Oh yeah,i know,me too... Sometimes when you're lonely you think about things like those. Wondering,hoping... Thanks for the comment.

Vixie79 No problem, it was a pleasure. I would love to read more if you have more, I love your style. There's a poetry spot, you should join, you would be a great addition to it. http://www.fanpop.com/spots/poetry

irena83 Oh thank you honey. Sure,the pleasure is mine. <3

maribou oh loved it!!!!!!!!!

irena83 Thank you.

ilovekud wow thats beautifully written!!

irena83 Thank you. I devoted this poem to my ex boyfriend.

teamian awwww it's so deep ♥♥

irena83 Oh yes it is... ♥

MasterOfFear I don't know about the feeling this poem portrays, never gotten close enough to feel that way, but the poem is very articulate.

starxdreamerxo 10000000 is my rate! :D amazingg! i had a poem but it got erased on my fone :( but i love yours! your a poet and ya didn't even know it! hehehe

irena83 lol Thank you so much. <3

shivers-zimmy You're Really Deep! You Could Probably Write A Whole Book On Little Love Sayings And Stuff! That Would Be Cool. . .

irena83 :) Thanks a lot. Probably i could. I love poetry and i like the depth in the poems.

juicyjossy9 Irena,this is beautiful, deep and soulful. Very well written. The emotions are palpable. Gave me the shivers. To ease the reading though, I would suggest you cut in paragraphs every four lines, leaving the last line alone with the suspension points...

reneemonique Oh myy.... Very well written!! I'm screaming right now..i just adore well written love poems! :) This bit,for me..is the very best! : 'You think i’ll be so happy seeing you again,oh you think you could make this right,but your touch tears my heart. I don’t want this,so be gone,i’ll choose the best lies for you so you could believe it,oh you will believe it,finally,you’ll be gone, far away from my sight,far away from my heart.' So much much emotion,that many people can relate too. Write more!! Your Very talented. <3

irena83 Thank you so much! What a beautiful and honest compliment. ♥

Lovetreehill One more time your feelings fill this poem with so deep emotions :) I love it !!!!

booklover13 beautiful!!i think i can relate to it :)

clanbillr I know we've all felt like this or something like this at times!! The emptiness inside, the hiding from someone, the walls of protection inside and all the different stages we go through during these times of sadness and hurt!! The vicious cycle of thoughts that keep getting worse in our heads and the wondering what or even if they are feeling anything inside of them!! And in our final stages of healing; helping us by telling ourselves what we know inside, and hoping that they do too!!! Although in reality we know they have no idea or even a clue what we've been through. Then this light comes to us and were finally ready to heal and were ready to move on with our lives!! Our hoping and repeating of giving them another chance and letting them truly know how much we love them!!! But after so many times we find out this is truly not what we want or deserve in life!!!

irena83 That's right Bill. :)

irismess Irena, you makes me wanna fall in love. I don't know why.. you are such a romantic person.

irena83 :* Oh yes,I am. ;) ♥

elizasmomma i love it it's very dark and that's what i love about it

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A poem my wonderful now boyfriend wrote me

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The Easter Card:

あなた are sweet, sweeter than candy,
When I'm around あなた I feel so dandy,
あなた are delightful あなた are kind,
Your pleasant image is always in my mind,
If we ever depart I shall weep,
So your beloved friendship I wish to keep.

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あなた are an extrodinady girl.
あなた are awesome and sweet.
あなた make me feel liked as a person.
Thank あなた for being such a wonderful friend.
God Bless Love, ( name withheld)

He is very sweet and if any guy wants a chance just be yourself.
Tip: if あなた have known them for a long time boys/girls just tell them. If あなた need any tips just send me a message. または if あなた need halo choosing the "one".