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I NEED help with my fanfiction! Please help! I'll give props!

Okay, so I have an idea for this TOTALLY EPIC fanfic where Zim and Dib find out they're half-brothers. The problem is... I have almost no ideas! This is literally all I have: Zim and Dib find out they're brothers and they have to go to battle against... someone. I was thinking maybe the Massive's under attack and they call in Zim and Dib...? Here's an exerpt. Oh, and I forgot to mention, I got the idea for this fanfic based on "It Ends Tonight" によって The All American Rejects, so... just wanted to say that. XD It's just a great song. Anyway...:
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"I don't want to depend on あなた at all. I can do this on my own," Dib 発言しました pulling away. "I'm on my own. I don't need your help, Zim."
"Dib, can't あなた see? あなた don't know what you're getting into. あなた don't know what you're fighting," Zim said. "Don't do this, Dib. あなた don't know what you're doing."
"I'm on my own, Zim."
Zim looked at Dib. Dib could see true worry in Zim's ruby eyes.
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So, in case あなた weren't listening, this isn't a ZaDr! I hate ZaDr! Zim and Dib now know they're brothers and Zim has brotherly feelings towards Dib. I need もっと見る ideas and a beginning! Again, I'll give props!
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yay! i have a plot! anyone who' answered still gets a prop!
123moo123 posted 1年以上前
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dude wheres your pilot または is it not online
Longrange posted 1年以上前
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link But something happened and, long story short, somone else is publishing it now under my permission. I only wrote the first chapter.
123moo123 posted 1年以上前
 123moo123 posted 1年以上前
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BlondieLizard said:
Well for the beginning, あなた could start it as a normal 日 where dib and zim are bickering about usual things. When Dib gets ホーム from school Professor Membrane could tell Dib that he had an affair with an alien in Roswell (happens to be Irken, Zim's mother または something)((If he has one o.-)) and thats all i got C: good luck
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posted 1年以上前 
zgfangrl said:
あなた should decide if あなた want them to battle the resity または the massive あなた could choose either one i think having them fight against the massive(even though im all for irk) it would mix it up
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posted 1年以上前 
Diblover111 said:
OMT This is how it should begin, kinda...

"Hey Dib! Could your head grow a little smaller, please! You're in my light!"

Dib tried to ignore the taunts that were thrown down the hall at him. After all, he was now in Junyor Hi and he might have もっと見る of a chance of popularity if he kept his mouth shut.

He sighed, and ran his hand through his hair. As he did, he felt a bump. No, two bumps, evenly spaced apart. He knew this wasn't natural, and he was pretty sure who was behind it.

"Zim," He muttered.


Anway, yeah, those things are the beginning of anteannea. Epic, huh?
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posted 1年以上前 
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that really is good. あなた gets a prop!
123moo123 posted 1年以上前
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I LOVES THIS ONE! USE IT!
lola641 posted 1年以上前
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I COMAND YOU!
lola641 posted 1年以上前
Invader-Tak said:
Well... I'm not quite sure either but this is all I've got:

Maybe Professor M (Dib's Dad) has to go somewhere important and sends a baby-sitter to take care of Dib and Gaz. The baby-sitter is really nice and treats the two like her own children. Then Dib starts to wonder: 'Who was my mum?!? How come, I've never met her?'

Umm... Then eventually Dib's Mum can be like Zim's Mum, which makes them half-bros. I dunno, use some ironic awkward twist. Hope I helped! :D
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posted 1年以上前 
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nice! あなた gets a prop!
123moo123 posted 1年以上前
StarscreamFan said:
Ooooh I have an idea! (if あなた haven't written it already) It goes like this- An elite Irken invader named Vee was traveling through 宇宙 on a special mission when the controls on her ship failed and and her ship was being pulled into a 星, つ星 によって its gravitational field. She was saved when Prof. Membrane's ship pulled her ship inside the crew thinking it was 宇宙 junk. In return for saving her life, she begins to assist the Prof., and very soon falls in 愛 with him. Of course they later end up having an affair and Vee becomes pregnant with Zim. After Zim is born, the Tallest get angry and accuse her of breaking Irken law #987: never reproduce with any race but your own. After that they place her on trial and she is executed. Afterwards the smeet is sent to the nearest smeetery and not long after that the Prof. returns to Earth to continue his research, eventually having another affair, spawning Dib. As for how they found out, I pictured it going like this- the Skool is doing a blood drive and Zim and Dib's samples are shown to share some DNA. Horrified, the pair conducts a series of tests to prove the 前 results false. But they end up with the same data. That's all I have. I apologize for it being so long.
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