Okay, this is my newest fic. For anyone who's 読書 Iris, it will be finished, I promise, but I really need some input on this one. If あなた think it's OOC または anything, please tell me. I beg of you
Chapter 1
によって time Thirteen entered her apartment she was exhausted. The only thing on her mind was making her problems go away, even temporarily. She entered the キチネット, 簡易キッチン and reached for the bottle she kept on 上, ページのトップへ of the refrigerator. Once her fingers had closed around the neck of the bottle she leaned back against the refrigerator and slid to the ground. She lowered her lips to the bottle.
“Mom?” The voice was quiet, afraid, worried.
Thirteen looked up. Her eight 年 old daughter stood in the narrow doorway, her hair falling out of the ponytail she had hastily pulled up in the car that morning.
Thirteen knew why her daughter sounded so afraid. She had long since learned that when 音楽 was blaring and voices could be heard it was better just to stay in her bedroom, but tonight there was no music, and there were no voices. That was probably why she had figured it would be 安全, 安全です to come out.
“What’s wrong?” her daughter asked nervously.
“What makes あなた think there’s something wrong?” Thirteen asked, trying desperately to paste a smile on her face.
“You’re getting drunk at two in the morning alone,” the girl pointed out. For the umpteenth time this year, Thirteen was struck によって how smart her daughter was.
“It’s nothing,” Thirteen answered.
“Obviously not,” her daughter replied. She went to sit beside her mother. “Did your patient die again?”
Thirteen smiled and shook her head. She knew her daughter was remembering during the game when she had single handedly caused the death of a patient.
“Did あなた get fired again?” she asked, lowering her voice slightly. Thirteen had ロスト her job twice, but both times she’d been hired back.
“No, it’s nothing like that,” Thirteen answered.
“Is it going to be okay?” the girl asked.
“It’s not something あなた need to worry about,” Thirteen lied. Now that she thought about it, her daughter may very well need to worry about it. She looked at her daughter, a carbon copy of herself. She hoped it was only that way on the outside.
“I’ll tell あなた when you’re older,” Thirteen sighed as she reluctantly pushed herself into a standing position and placed the unopened bottle back on 上, ページのトップへ of the refrigerator. I won’t tell あなた until I have to, she silently thought. I want あなた to live for as long as possible without this burden.
She took a deep breath, left the キチネット, 簡易キッチン and started through the living room.
“Goodnight Mom,” her daughter called.
“Goodnight Bo.”
Chapter 1
によって time Thirteen entered her apartment she was exhausted. The only thing on her mind was making her problems go away, even temporarily. She entered the キチネット, 簡易キッチン and reached for the bottle she kept on 上, ページのトップへ of the refrigerator. Once her fingers had closed around the neck of the bottle she leaned back against the refrigerator and slid to the ground. She lowered her lips to the bottle.
“Mom?” The voice was quiet, afraid, worried.
Thirteen looked up. Her eight 年 old daughter stood in the narrow doorway, her hair falling out of the ponytail she had hastily pulled up in the car that morning.
Thirteen knew why her daughter sounded so afraid. She had long since learned that when 音楽 was blaring and voices could be heard it was better just to stay in her bedroom, but tonight there was no music, and there were no voices. That was probably why she had figured it would be 安全, 安全です to come out.
“What’s wrong?” her daughter asked nervously.
“What makes あなた think there’s something wrong?” Thirteen asked, trying desperately to paste a smile on her face.
“You’re getting drunk at two in the morning alone,” the girl pointed out. For the umpteenth time this year, Thirteen was struck によって how smart her daughter was.
“It’s nothing,” Thirteen answered.
“Obviously not,” her daughter replied. She went to sit beside her mother. “Did your patient die again?”
Thirteen smiled and shook her head. She knew her daughter was remembering during the game when she had single handedly caused the death of a patient.
“Did あなた get fired again?” she asked, lowering her voice slightly. Thirteen had ロスト her job twice, but both times she’d been hired back.
“No, it’s nothing like that,” Thirteen answered.
“Is it going to be okay?” the girl asked.
“It’s not something あなた need to worry about,” Thirteen lied. Now that she thought about it, her daughter may very well need to worry about it. She looked at her daughter, a carbon copy of herself. She hoped it was only that way on the outside.
“I’ll tell あなた when you’re older,” Thirteen sighed as she reluctantly pushed herself into a standing position and placed the unopened bottle back on 上, ページのトップへ of the refrigerator. I won’t tell あなた until I have to, she silently thought. I want あなた to live for as long as possible without this burden.
She took a deep breath, left the キチネット, 簡易キッチン and started through the living room.
“Goodnight Mom,” her daughter called.
“Goodnight Bo.”
okay i was new a few weeks 前 i havent been able to write my stories now i am continuing my dragon story enjoy.
cynder.... u have been very bad u must resurect me don't fall in their hands. nooooo! i will never free u i 愛 spyro so i dont need my old life. listen cynder... he just tells u he loves u so u can put ur guard down. no he loves me. he dosen't ..but i will treat u fairly like i mean it u will be クイーン of compleat power again. nooooo NEVER IN MY WHOLE LIFE NOOOO NOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOOOO! (gasps) ohh it was just a dream. she turned around to se spyro but he wasn't there. spyro... spyro? SPYRO!? WHERE ARE U!? ohh finaly ur awake. she saw spyro coming into the room and 発言しました where were u? just getting some water for u. u were starting to sweat alot so i went to get water. wat's wrong u seem tense. well... i had a bad dream war's it about this time. the dark master again.
cynder.... u have been very bad u must resurect me don't fall in their hands. nooooo! i will never free u i 愛 spyro so i dont need my old life. listen cynder... he just tells u he loves u so u can put ur guard down. no he loves me. he dosen't ..but i will treat u fairly like i mean it u will be クイーン of compleat power again. nooooo NEVER IN MY WHOLE LIFE NOOOO NOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOOOO! (gasps) ohh it was just a dream. she turned around to se spyro but he wasn't there. spyro... spyro? SPYRO!? WHERE ARE U!? ohh finaly ur awake. she saw spyro coming into the room and 発言しました where were u? just getting some water for u. u were starting to sweat alot so i went to get water. wat's wrong u seem tense. well... i had a bad dream war's it about this time. the dark master again.