My first poem, enjoy! Might be sad. コメント and tell what あなた think!

Tears rolling down my cheek
Eyes red, fighting to breathe
Alone in a room
Dark and sound
In despair for a long time
Something あなた can't escape
Something unbearable
Words seem to slip
Body feels so weak
Windows down, curtains closed
Alone, dark, thoughts race
Memories fly
In despair for a long time
Again, eyes closed
Skin cold, ready to walk away
Leave behind despair
Be free to make choices
Forget despair
Ignore those who ignore you
It hurts to think
about despair
Complications, frustrations
Leave them behind