Creative Outlet Here's a ランダム poem i wrote just tell me if あなた like it ok?

jacob4ever57 posted on Feb 21, 2009 at 08:36PM
Ok i'm kinda new to writing poetry so this might not be the best...


Dreams

A dream is something that can't be seen
A dream is something that may not have meaning
But a dream is magic all the same
No matter how horrible or tame

A dream is enchanting to all
A dream can be about anything at all
Love, play, fights, or fears
A dream is something to keep close and near

So keep your dreams close to your heart
And don't let anyone tear them apart.


hehe yea kinda new just tell me whatcha think.

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1年以上前 raknaff said…
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I thought it was really cute! I love it!
1年以上前 Ovybo said…
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I loved it! I don't think you should rhyme all with all in the 2nd paragragh though. Maybe you could put "A dream can stand tall" if you wan't to listen to me.
1年以上前 RaineChild said…
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Cool. I'm new to the poetry thing too, so your not alone.
But for the beginners start that was great.
1年以上前 sweet_n_silly said…
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oooo, that was fantabulous! great job!
1年以上前 _Blackhearts_xx said…
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I Love It <3
1年以上前 whitelion said…
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great
1年以上前 Myf_1992 said…
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Aww that was sweet <3
1年以上前 KristinaDawn said…
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i thought it was really good :D
can you reply to my songs?
1年以上前 876tyuh said…
Good job!