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HELP: wrinting a editorial for english needs to be 300-500 words i got 200 need もっと見る ideas.
The 質問 is:
Assume あなた are Brinker Hadley, the editor of the Devon Gazette (the school newspaper). Student risk taking and therefore accidents areon the rise and then Phineas not only falls from a 木, ツリー but dies after falling on the school stairs running away from the Inquiry to his accident. In an editorial, discuss the even as a sample of the outrageous risks that students in the summer of 1942 are being allowed to take whil in school.
This is what I have so far:
In the summer of 1942 lack of supervision resulted in the death of a well respected student. Should someone be blamed?
It all started one 日 with the decision to do a double jump out of a 木, ツリー that ended badly with Phineas with a broken leg. After some time ホーム Phineas returned, shortly after he returned he was questioned about his injury with all the confusion of what happened, Phineas ran out of the building and slipped on the steps. This soon leads to his death in surgery. Would もっと見る supervision have prevented this tragic accident?
Tragedies like these happen too often when we think people are in a 安全, 安全です place but things still happen. Some things that can be done to prevent tragic accidents from happening are もっと見る supervision, teach students to be 安全, 安全です and responsible and have a curfew.
There should be もっと見る teachers/ supervision in the school and a もっと見る structured lesson plan so there is not so much time for students to fool around and get hurt または into trouble. If this is done it will assure that things are getting done and students are safe. This will also stop them from doing risky things.
Assume あなた are Brinker Hadley, the editor of the Devon Gazette (the school newspaper). Student risk taking and therefore accidents areon the rise and then Phineas not only falls from a 木, ツリー but dies after falling on the school stairs running away from the Inquiry to his accident. In an editorial, discuss the even as a sample of the outrageous risks that students in the summer of 1942 are being allowed to take whil in school.
This is what I have so far:
In the summer of 1942 lack of supervision resulted in the death of a well respected student. Should someone be blamed?
It all started one 日 with the decision to do a double jump out of a 木, ツリー that ended badly with Phineas with a broken leg. After some time ホーム Phineas returned, shortly after he returned he was questioned about his injury with all the confusion of what happened, Phineas ran out of the building and slipped on the steps. This soon leads to his death in surgery. Would もっと見る supervision have prevented this tragic accident?
Tragedies like these happen too often when we think people are in a 安全, 安全です place but things still happen. Some things that can be done to prevent tragic accidents from happening are もっと見る supervision, teach students to be 安全, 安全です and responsible and have a curfew.
There should be もっと見る teachers/ supervision in the school and a もっと見る structured lesson plan so there is not so much time for students to fool around and get hurt または into trouble. If this is done it will assure that things are getting done and students are safe. This will also stop them from doing risky things.
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