EW'S 5th Annual Comic Con Party

I decided to make my first ファン fiction about 城 and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." 城 発言しました looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" 城 stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." 城 whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." 城 発言しました turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't あなた sleep with...