I just finished 書く a novel a few months ago, and im trying to get as much feedback as possible on it :) it's fiction, ファンタジー in particular. here's the summary for it! I'm not great at 書く summaries, but i tried :) Please comment!!!
Its placed in older times, with magic and stuff like that, just fyi!
Ash and Anna are two ordinary girls, living two seperate lives in a world where magic is abundant. But when their prophecy brings the twin sisters together, and they learn that they have a long-lost triplet brother, kidnapped at birth, their worlds are turned upside-down, and every choice they make will affect the fate of the entire world.
When the two girls learn of their exceptional magical ablities, they also learn of the terrible price that comes with it- the prophecy that tells them that they will one 日 save または destroy the world. Minds heavy with this newfound knowledge, the girls strive to get settled into their new lives. It does not last long. When Anna is kidnapped によって those who wish to see her dead, Ash knows she must go and save her sister, whatever the cost. She sets out on a journey to save Anna with both new and old friends, and Anna forms a suprising allience with an ususpecting ally. Both girls face challenges never before imagined, while fighting to keep thier lives.
Okay, like I said, I'm not the best summarizer, and i have much もっと見る faith in my story than in the summary. Please check out the actual story chapters in the arcticles section of my club- "The Triplets によって Booklover13". Thanks, and please, please, please comment!!!
Its placed in older times, with magic and stuff like that, just fyi!
Ash and Anna are two ordinary girls, living two seperate lives in a world where magic is abundant. But when their prophecy brings the twin sisters together, and they learn that they have a long-lost triplet brother, kidnapped at birth, their worlds are turned upside-down, and every choice they make will affect the fate of the entire world.
When the two girls learn of their exceptional magical ablities, they also learn of the terrible price that comes with it- the prophecy that tells them that they will one 日 save または destroy the world. Minds heavy with this newfound knowledge, the girls strive to get settled into their new lives. It does not last long. When Anna is kidnapped によって those who wish to see her dead, Ash knows she must go and save her sister, whatever the cost. She sets out on a journey to save Anna with both new and old friends, and Anna forms a suprising allience with an ususpecting ally. Both girls face challenges never before imagined, while fighting to keep thier lives.
Okay, like I said, I'm not the best summarizer, and i have much もっと見る faith in my story than in the summary. Please check out the actual story chapters in the arcticles section of my club- "The Triplets によって Booklover13". Thanks, and please, please, please comment!!!
