This sounds like it could be fun :). All right, well for the first arc, we could use the same "Forbidden Six" story we used last time. For those who weren't involved, it was about a group of forgotten, banished warriors who have broken free and were wreaking havoc upon the Soul Society. Also, we could have some people create new captains, and there could be some of the old captains as well. What do you think?

I like the notion, honestly. Now we just need people.

i'll join.

Name: Teiko Spirit

Age: ACTUALLY 16, like litterally 16, not 400, not 750, but real age is 16.

Height: 5'1

Weight: 105 lbs

Bio: He is half hollow, and a liutenant shinigami, otherwise known as a vizard. He has no family and belongs to squad 10. Not much is known, other than he mysteriously appeared one day, and they eventually accepted him. His zanpakuto is worn on his back.

Appearance:
-hair color: Blonde, spikey, some hangs in front of is face' much like Toushirous does/did.
-eye color: Electric blue
-Skin tone: A light, sort of 'desert' tan.
-build: Lean but has a good build for his size.
-clothes: he same shinigami clothes, but with a silver lining. He also has one ear(his right one) Pierced, with a lightning earring.

Personality: Kind, funny, serious(when nessecery)and willing to protect his friends no matter what. Also strong and charismatic.

Zanpakuto:

Name- Kinuzuma-"Gold Lightning"
Release: Split the sky
Bankai name: Densetsu Kinuzuma-"Legendary Gold Lightning

Normal: Just a regular katana with a lightning bolt carved onto the scabbard. The hilt and guard are gold with onyx inlay. It's the most powerful Lightning based zanpakuto.

Shikai: the blade turns all gold and the gaurd becomes like tensa zangetsu, but its lightning bolt instead and its black too.
Abilities:
-1. Kaminari-'thunder wave': He releases a blast of sound from his blade, and when he says release, it will explode into lightning.

-2. Denki-suta-'Electro-star': He slashed in the shape of a star, and it leaves streaks of lightning, which he can then push towards them as one big lightning star thing.

-3. Renningu-no-ken-'Raining swords': Teiko stabs the blade into the ground and duplicates will fall from the sky until it is removed.

Bankai: It looks exactly the same, but the weilder grows Metal Gold wings, and golden armor on his wrists, legs and feet, and...hips... along with his shoulders. It is an elemental zanpakuto, and the most powerful lightning-based zanpakuto.

Abilities:
-1. Gigasutomo-'Giga storm': His blade is engulfed in lightning and gains power equal to 2x his own for the amount of time that he uses it.

-2. Jigoku-no-kaminari-"Infernal Lightning": He summons lightning from hell, and uses it to attack three times. Whatever the lightning hits will wither,apart from people, and zanpakuto's.

-3. Saiga-kenjou-'Blade of Storms': The blade is engulfed in lightning, and is not ranged, he must get in close to use it. The size of the lightning varries according to the amount of spiritual pressure that is poured into it.

Zanpakuto's spirit form: It looks just like Teiko, only they are complete oposites.

Reiatsu color: Gold with black outline.

Hollow name: Perno Osscuro-"Dark Bolt"
Mask appearance: Below, only the white part is black

Looks good, Link. Welcome aboard! :) Your character is a lieutenant, right? If so, what squad is he a lieutenant of?

I ask because I think we're going to go with Randomfan's idea, which means we need some captains and lieutenants.

I think he's in squad 10.

ya squad 10, says in Character Bio. Thx for the welcome!

Name: Hunter Cabel

Age: 25

Squad: Captain of squad three

Hair: Short brown hair that is spiked.

Eyes: Brown

Height: 6'1

Appearance: He is a husky muscular build with tan skin. When he is traveling around the world of the living, he wears Blue jeans and a black shirt with black shoes. He wears the traditional Captains out fit when he is a shinigami.

Personality: He always tries to lighten the mood by changing subject of a conversation, He is a well respected captain because of the kindness he show to his subordinates.

Zanpakuto/shikai: Raikou Arashi( Lightning tempest)
Release command: Begin The Storm

Appearance: In its normal form, it has a yellow hand guard and a white hilt. In shikai, it becomes a double bladed sword staff. One half is yellow and the other is white with the middle being black.

Abilities: Raikou Dageki(Lighning Strike) The yellow half's blade becomes consumed in an electrical charge.If the attack makes contact with the enemy or their blade, major electrical damage is dealt to them, and possible temporary paralyzes.

Baribari Arashi: The wielder begins rotating the white side of the staff for about three seconds. This is the appropriate amount of charge time needed for the full effects. The wielder then jabs the end, and a large burst of wind explodes of the edge. If the enemy is caught, they are trapped unless they have the necessary strength to leave it. The wind then precedes to cut the enemy for about five seconds. the initial hit from the blast can collapse a lung if the opponent is weak to moderately strong.

Bankai:Makai Raikou Arashi(Hell of the Lightning Tempest) The zanpakuto has two double bladed sword staffs combined to form a cross looking weapon. Everything on the weapon is silver.

Tatsumaki Raikou (Tornado of Lightning) The weilder spins the zanpakuto around in a circular motion until it is moving at a rather good speed. When the attack is launched it is a large Tornado with lightning coursing through its entirety. If the enemy is within five feet of the attack, they will be sucked in. The damage that is dealt is massive burn scars, major internal damage, and possible broken bones. The attack last for ten seconds from the moment it is launched. The wielder can move the tornado but it takes it three seconds before it will move. The time it takes for the attack to end is also its downfall. The tornado can not be ended until the time limit is up.

Raikou Kuruma(Lightning wheel) The wielder spins his zanpakuto and the outside of it becomes surrounded by lightning. The wield then throws his weapon but one part stays because it separates and stays connected by a chain of lightning. But when the weapon is thrown, it works like a boomerang,even if it misses, it comes back. Same effects as lightning strike except more potent.

Arashi Shouhek(Tempest Barrier) The wielder spins in a circle while spinning his zanpakuto,a barrier of wind forms around him. The barrier works like a tornado. If a person attempts to attack head on, they are sucked into the spinning the barrier and the wielder who is free to move about the barrier, can attack the enemy.The enemy can only be trapped for five seconds before being launched out. It also has the ability to disperse kido abilities that are launched at the barrier.

Interesting, Onix. Welcome, Captain of squard 3.

I edited the Post of the char, so now it has all of the zanpakuto abilities, and a few xtra details, like his new name, which is Teiko Spirit

Name: Saiko Rindu
Age: 34
Occupation: Captain of the tenth squad.

Appearance: Black hair that falls to his shoulders at the back, and to below his mouth in two well groomed bangs to the outside of each eye. He wears the shinigami kimono, but has sewn a large crimson snake on the back. He is also very lean.

Personality: Very sadistic. He loves to fight, and will constantly laugh during a battle, regardless of how it's going for him. He also hates it when people talk too much during fights, claiming "The only time my opponents should talk is when they're on the ground, begging for death." For his sickening attitude towards his opponents, he is openly despised by his fellow captains. He also likes to start small disputes with them.

Zanpakuto Name: Orai Domamoshi (Blade Viper)
Sealed Appearance: A white bladed katana that curves to a pointy elbow at the tip, then continues down about half the blade's length.
Release command: Utsu! (Lash!)

Shikai description: The blade triples in length and hangs slack, as a whip would. At any time, the blade can lengthen significantly. The blade is also controlled by the wielder and moves like a snake would. For instance, the wielder can have the blade coil around him like a shield without moving his arms. In addition, each time the opponent is hit by this blade, a docile toxin is applied to the wound. That toxin can be used for certain abilities later on in the battle.

Shikai ability 1: Sasu-Kamukoto (Stinging bite). When activated, this ability causes the toxin in the wounds to create unbearable pain.


Bankai Name: Sokkyo-Adatsu Orai Domamoshi (Death Striking Blade Viper)
Bankai Description: The blade falls off the hilt and comes to life as it burrows itself into the ground. Five other blades also spring out and tunnel underneath the battleground. The wielder can then command them to attack from beneath the feet of his/her foes. The blades are also flexible. In addition, the blades apply twice as much poison, causing the activation of Sasu-Kamukoto to cause twice as much pain.


Bankai ability 1: Yaiba-Shuku (Bladed Constriction). When activated, five of the blades come up from underground and form a coccoon around the victim. The sixth then comes out and slips through the coccoon to the target, stabbing him/her and usually resulting in a killing blow. Using this ability requires an immense amount of focus and energy, and so is mostly used as a last resort.

Bankai ability 2: A passive ability that is active throughout the bankai use. The toxin applied through the blades causes the wounds made by the blade to be twice as lethal, as they bleed more profusely, and cause the opponent to become flushed and exhausted at a quicker rate.

Name: Harken (no last name)

Age:mid 20's

Freshly graduated from the soul reaper academy has yet to be placed in a squad. (u can put me where u like)

Appearance: athletic build ( much like ichigo or hisagi).Red spiked short hair. wears a sleeveless shinigami kimono with a hood on the back. He wears the hood most of the time when not in the presence of commanding officers(unless placed as captain). always has a close to emotionless face.

Personality: a very honorable man who understands the call of duty but i will defy any order to protect what he beleives making him seem defiant in most cases and maybe unreliable to an imediate task.enjoys a fair fight.

zanpakutou:

Name:Kuro girochin(black guillotine)
sealed looks like a normal katana with a point on the end of the hilt.

shikai: release is Gyakusatsu(slaughter).

Appearance: becomes a crescent shaped blade(about 4 feet long and 2 feet wide in the the thickest par, extremely heavy but u wouldn't know by how i wield it) attached in the middle of the curve to a very long chain that connects to the top of a dagger.

Abillty 1: at any given time the two ends of the chain can instantly change positions.

Ability 2: kido attacks are channeled through either end of the chain enhancing there power significantly.(dagger makes attacks twice as fast, and crescent makes them twice as strong)

Bankai: (name pending)a full suit of spiked armor is created around me lowering speed but enhancing strength and defense greatly. armor is immune to energy based attacks but fragile too physical attacks.

Ability: Kido is amplified 4x from the other affects instead of 2x

Notes: in shikai form heavily reliant on speed and lacks strength, mostly using the momentum and weight of the swinging guillotine to give a false sense of huge power. Bankai form relies on keeping opponents at range using swinging attacks and tricky strategies with the switching ends to keep opponents guessing.

From my own observations the crescent shape and constant curve of the blade will make it almost impossible to block the blade being straight at you due to that it will roll over or under depending on where the weight distributed( unless blocked perfectly in the center of course)all parts of the blade itself are sharp.(meaning only the little handle thing on the bottom isnt)

Picture of shikai for of one end.

Zordaik, maybe your character should be a captain, so it fits within the story. :) I know he hates shinigami, but I am sure you can modify that. Your character seems cool, though. I think it might be best to keep some old captains, so Byakuya, Shunsui, Unohana, Yamamoto, Mayuri, and Kenpachi are still captains. You can take an empty seat. Gecho, since your character is fresh out of the academy, maybe Zordaik, if he chooses to become a captain, can have you as his lieutenant. :)

Oh, squads 2, 5, 7, 10, 13 are open. Onix is captain of squad three. And link's character is lieutenant of squad 10, so he needs a captain. :D

I'll introduce my villains for everyone. Randomfan will introduce his in following posts.

Again, this arc will consist of gotei 13 (with your characters in the forefront) and the forbidden six. The forbidden six are outcast shinigami that were sealed away by the gotei 13 at different times throughout the history of the seiretei. In the present, the seal has been weakened and broken. It enables six figures to escape from their transdimensional prison. These six characters, related only in respect to their dispicable crimes, decide to work together and bring down the Soul Society. They were sealed away, individually, as I mentioned above, and their crimes are unique to them, which make them legendary in their own right. So, attached to each of my characters is their "legend bio." Oh, and when they were sealed away, they were separated from their zanpakuto, so they could never unleash them again (which is some insight into how insidious they were)Enjoy.


Name: Ronani
Zanpakuto: Espelho Kyatchi
Appearance: Ronani is a tall, thin, but heavily muscular male. He has long reddish-black hair with a strange, arcane language tattooed on his forearm, back, and neck. He wears a shredded grey and red kimono, where the sleeves are removed. His zanpakuto is kept at his side, covered by his kimono, with only the hilt peeking from beneath.
Personality: Ronani is hot-headed, head-strong, and extremely violent. The only thing that worsens his violence is when he becomes angry, which is when he is most merciless. Characterized for his quick temper and tremendous strength, Ronani makes for a dangerous opponent. Ronani’s ill-temper, deadly strength, bestial instincts, and merciless attitude present a lethal combination.
Legend: Over 500 years ago, Ronani was banished for abhorrent crimes against the soul society. Legend has it that he killed over 1,000 shinigami in his time, garnering him the title “The shinigami slayer.” He was opposed by the gotei 13, but managed to kill two captains, but was finally immobilized and sealed away by two powerful captains. Stories describe his ruthless and arcane talents, which were a product of his zanpakuto’s unique abilities and strength. Many found themselves powerless against him, saying that once they opposed him they felt substantially weakened.

Name: Anahel
Zanpakuto: Eien (eye-AIN) Shansatsu
Appearance: A tall, beautiful, and youthful female with long, silky black hair that that drapes over one shoulder. Her long hair is pulled back on one side, and her deep green eyes are completely visible. She wears a beautiful form-fitting , silvery, white kimono that is said to be made from the finest silk and fabrics. Her zanpakuto is kept along the front of her waist, which is atypical for most shinigami.
Personality: Though she may be beautiful and appear harmless, she uses those misconceptions to her advantage. She is manipulative, perceptive and intelligent, making her a dangerous adversary. Those characteristics combined with her cold-blooded attitude present a problem for anyone courageous enough to challenge her. She will not hesitate to exploit her opponents vulnerabilities, seizing her prey quickly, brutally, and viciously. Though she is conniving and pernicious, she is calcucated and calm.
Legend: Over 200 year ago, Anahel was believed to be a bright new addition to the gotei 13, representing a royal family within the soul society. Her strength and intellect were beyond what many expected from someone so young. However, beneath the pleasant exterior resided a demonic intent on assassinating the captain-commander and dismantling the gotei 13. Anahel believed that the right to rule was something you were born with, not presented by consensus. Before she could confront the captain, she mercilessly slaughtered her entire division, only to be confronted by her captain, Ginrei Kuchiki. She presented a difficult opponent, even for the captain of the 6th squad. She severely wounded Ginrei , prompting Captain-Commander Yamamoto to bind her with a powerful kido. She was stripped of her sword and sealed away, like many others. People still speak of her fearsome talents and ruthless nature. Ginrei was the only person to ever survive the release of her zanpakuto, and a written document said the ferocity of her zanpakuto was like nothing he had ever seen, and all you see is a piercing green before that demon zanpakuto strikes.

Name: Naamah
Zanpakuto: Osorenu Shisen
Appearance: Long blond hair that is is pulled back on the sides to form a large, draping pony-tale. The rest of her hair gently drapes across her forehead, slightly covering her piercing blue eyes. Her appearance is often kind, but there is something sinister in her gaze. She is dressed in white kimono with strips of deep blue fabric around the bottom and arms.
Personality: She appears relatively kind, but that is far from her actual personality. She is the most demonic and cruel of all the three. She adores watching people suffer and finds peace in the desperate cries from others. Her preference is to play with her opponents, leading them into a false sense of victory and then destroying any chance of hope. She belives that opponents should be savored and is nourished by the pain of others.
Legend: She loathes everything that she does not deem “beautiful” or “elegant.” She believed the soul society was a reached, ugly environment, populated with uninspiring and unintelligent individuals. Therefore, she decided that she would use her abilities to reconstitute the soul society and erase all that was undesirable. She used her infamous zanpakuto to meet her goals, and during her tirade, killed many innocents. Her last two opponents were the captain the squad nine and eleven, who struggled to eliminate her as a threat. However, she bested the captain of squad eleven, sealing him with her own method. When the two captains confronted her at her manor, they realized that they had discovered the whereabouts for hundreds of missing shinigami. Before she could add the ninth captain to her unique collection, she was ambushed and sealed away by the remaining captains. Her zanpakuto was recovered and was hidden far from her reach, for fear if she ever possessed it, she would destroy the soul society.

Aren't there supposed to be six of them?

Mmhm. As I mentioned above, though, Randomfan will post his soon. He can be a tad bit lazy when it comes to being prompt. Right, randomfan?

Correct. It also doesn't help when I find that those Legend files I was going to re-make weren't exactly...remade.

qustion: can i add more than one character? or just tell you a character i have come up with that u can add to the story as a villain or otherwise?

Yeah, of course you can! If you want more than one captain or lieutenant, that is fine. :) You can even have a captain and lieutenant in the same division, it depends on how you feel. Although, I recommend two, three at the maximum. What were you thinking you were gonna do, gecho?

Sorry it took me so long to reply. I fixed my character, so go have a look if you like. Also, I was thinking of doing another character, if that's good with you.

Name: Rosuko Iraka
Age: 18
Occupation: Lieutenant of squad three.

Appearance: Long brown hair which he likes to keep in a ponytail. The ponytail hangs down to the middle of his back. He also has a bang, like Kira's, that covers all of his left eye. His attire is nothing special. He wears the standard black kimono. He keeps his sword on his back.

Personality: He looks to his captain with unnaturally high regard, and likes to stay near him as often as possible. He is also very shy, especially when it comes to women. When in a battle, he may be a formidable opponent, but, in the case of a victory, often refuses to kill his opponents, and if he does, become very upset.

Zanpakuto name: Kyuryu Rashingu (Rushing rapids)
Sealed appearance: The hilt wrap is a dark blue, and the hilt guard is in the shape of a diamond. On the base of the blade, there are five sapphires, each one inch higher up than the last.
Release command: Furadofuro! Kyuryu Rashingu! (Flow forward! Rushing Rapids!)

Shikai description: The five sapphires explode into turquoise water and engulf the blade. The blade then disappears, leaving only the water, which begins churning. The water can cut, but inflicts wounds as though the opponent put that body part on a grinder, instead of cutting like a normal sword. The blade can also blast out at the opponent, mush like Shinso.

Shikai ability 1: Kawa supure (River spray): By harnessing the moisture in a particular spot in the air, the wielder can create a blast of water, with the same cutting capabilities as the blade, to attack an opponent's flanks straight from the air.

Shikai ability 2: Sasupendopuru (Suspending pool): The wielder point the blade at the target, and the blade shoots out like a geyser at the target. Instead of blasting the target, the water gathers around them, trapping them in a sphere of water. However, there is a small air bubble at the middle. Also, the flow of the water in the sphere can be manipulated to push the target back into the middle, should he try to escape, making it difficult to escape from. The water can be evaporated by an exposure of reiatsu.

Bankai: Not achieved.

Really interesting zanpakuto. I like it :).

Thank you!

That zanpakuto is so cool, Zord! Also, I am fine with having more than one character. :) A captain and a lieutenant for each person is ideal. We should start. I can post the introduction to randomfan's and I's characters, as soon as he posts their bios.

Ok, a bit late, but here are mine.


Zanpakuto: Ciulaeve
Description: A small gold ring with a intricately cut sapphire. Markings run all around the edge of the ring.
Shikai release: Bask in the warmth, Ciulaeve
Shikai description: The ring floats off her finger and attaches itself to her back. Then, the sapphire shatters, and 8 sapphire tendrils, each about the size of a tree, sprout from the ring, and drift around aimlessly.

Bankai: Ceruosavrae
Bankai description: The tendrils wrap around her entire body blocking her out from view. When she reappears, her entire appearance has changed. Her once chocolate brown hair has turned snow white, he eyes have changed as well. Her pupils became white, while the rest of her eye is sapphire blue. The tendrils have disappeared, and now her body is outlined by a dark blue glow.
Character: Seriende
Age:Her age isn't known, but she has been around since Captain Yamamoto first took over as Captain-Commander.
Hair: Chocolate brown, and down to her waist.
Eyes: Dark green
Sex: Female
Personality: She despises all shinigami, save the members of the Forbidden Six, due to reasons unknown. She is notorious for leaving all enemies in her path unconscious, with 2 identical cuts on either side of their face.

Zanpakuto: Bariadreve
Appearance: Gloves and shoes that are as hard as steel.
Shikai release: Reflect, Bariadreve.
Shikai appearance: Green reiatsu pours out of the gloves and shoes, and hardens in to a thin green layer around them.
Bankai: Bariadreve Adreidis
Bankai description: The green layers surround his entire body and then grow up to a much larger form of his body, which moves at the same time and speed as his real body.
Character: Kundras
Age: 537
Hair: Short brown hair
Eyes: Hazel
Sex: Male
Personality: Kundras is extremely loyal to Seriende. He has vowed to follow her no matter what the cause, and will not let anything get in the way of his assigned mission. He is also a very quiet, calculating person.

Zanpakuto: Ekoujia Mezeiskin
Description: A slightly curved sword with the tongs of a tuning fork around the hilt.
Shikai release: Ring, Ekoujia Mezeiskin
Shikai description: A slightly longer than usual conductor’s baton that is made entirely of crystal.
Bankai: sutaaraito Ekoujia Mezeiskin
Appearance: The baton shatters in to crystal fragments, which the absorbed by the user, and they gains a light pink glow
Character: Luresa
Age:625(Looks like she's 20)
Hair: Blond, in a long ponytail
Eyes: Light blue.
Sex: Female
Personality: The most carefree one out of the group. She joined Seriende out of her desire for revenge, and because she simply enjoys killing shinigami. She may act carefree outside of a fight, but while she is battling, she can be extremely sadistic.

Ok, I'll add their legends in a little, but now since thats out of the way, I'd say we can start pretty soon.

i just have a bunch of zanpakutou on the other page and i was hopin to put em to use, ill gather em up and post em and you can tell me what u think.

Name:Tsukisasu yōna kyōi (piercing menace)

Shikai: release is strike(Sutoraiki)

appearence:dual axes. with a long blade. about 4 feet long.

abilty 1(and the only one): when the axe strikes a target it sends out a kido like frequency that attempts to shatter or break apart whatever it strikes. on in-animate objects this is almost 100% effective on one strike. The real power is that with each consecutive strike it hones in on the particular frequency that will cause the thing it is striking the break apart. This takes 10 consecutive strikes on a zanpakutou.( notes this takes full on attacks...i cannot tap your zanpakutou like kiras zanpakutou wabiske, also the axes are not connected, it takes 10 strikes on one axe to shatter a zanpakutou and another 10 if i use a seperate one, ALSO this is probably the most important part to make this less overpowered is that u must hit the same thing consecutively if i have 9 strikes on your sword and u throw a rock at me and i block it with the axe with 9 strikes it begins to find the frequency of the rock and forgets the sword making me have to start over).The closer the frequency gets makes the thing it strikes vibrate making it harder too block consecutive strikes.

Bankai: Name: Kyodaina, sasu yōna kyōi(giant piercing menace)

appearance: the 2 axes combine to make one large battle axe the handles length is increased by a foot and the blades increase by 25% in size.

Ability: the same effect as shikai but it only takes 5 strikes however this form only has one axe so the strikes are lost easier and it makes you much slower.

Notes: in shikai for this character is of only average strength but is very fast..he has focused this so he can get strikes of quickly and disable his opponents. However in bankai this changes dramaticaly, he loses his speed and gains tremendous power. bankai would mostly be used for taking down someone heavily armored or something like komamuras bankai.

Please feel free to review or criticize. :D
i have another zanpakutou, havent been around in a while.

Name:Tsukisasu yōna kyōi (pi



Name:(dont know yet)

Release: Piasu (pierce)

appearence: two very long slender blades(pic below) and a cape simalar to ichigos when he rescure rukia from the sokyoku.

Ability 1: the blades can phase through solid objects when stabbing and only when stabbing, the sides of the blade are mostly dull haveing little slashing capabilty.
Ability 2: the cape acts as protection much like chain mail...blocking the person from slashing attacks but still feeling the concussive force and more permeable to stabbing attacks. Is also resistant to some kido attacks.

Ability 3: there is a 1 cm diamater tube through the center of the blade. when attacking while phased the user can fill this tube with spiritual energy to damage damage andything the blade is passing through.This is only a flash of energy and i cant say drag it through a person once ive activated it.

Bankai:a large lance about 6 feet tall. the blade being curved and 2 feet long at the top. he loses his protective cape.

Anility 1: Sweeping the lance around creates large energy attacks like getsuga tensho. these attacks are very strong and large but are very slow.

Ability2: is a weaker version of the previous attack only a beam shot when u stab.

notes: the real tihng i liked about this was the shikai idea and didnt put much though into bankai. Bankai's main purpose was to make up for his lack of abilty versus people like komamura, who has a giant bankai and my little stabs would be next to useless against. This character is very smart like captain kurotsuchi but is very calm and cold, is not angered like kurotsuchi is. He aims for vital points with his zanpakutou and only resorts to bankai when absolutly necessary.


Zanpakutou: Hebi-maki(winding serpant) large curved sword sort of scimitar like but with a wide blade.Ribbon attached to the back.
Release: Shūshuku-sa, hebi o maki(constrict! winding serpant)

Ability 1:when released the ribbon on the back raps around the users arm and slowy winds its way up his arm eventualy covering his entire body. This takes 15 min(subject to change) regardless of the swords other affects. After this time the user is instantly switched into bankai.(meaning this is both the maximum time that the user can mantain only a shikai state and the amount of time the user must wait to go into bankai).

Ability 2: the ribbon will move quickly to the location of an injury on the user acting as a bandage and stopping bleeeding with its spiritual energy.

Ability 3: the ribbon can leap out and attatch itself to an object this is not damageing it just gets stuck on it. The end of the ribbon will than look like a vipers head stretching out and biting on to something.

Bankai: This is mostly based off of ranso tengai( the ability uuryu uses while fighting mayuri kurotsutchi to enable him to move while being affected by mayuri's paralyzing poison) THe bandages that coat his body now turn into a black hooded cloak. In this state he loses all sense except for the goal he was trying to acheive at the time. Once this goal is acheived he will exit bankai. The scimitar becomes a lance.

Ability 1: the users body no longer truly exists, the cloak is a manifestation of the will of this character. Any damage receieved by the cloak will affect the user once bankai has been deactivated.( this allows the user to die but still complete a task, once that task is complete he will die)

Ability 2: the strength,speed, adn spiritual pressure of the user are increased drastically making him an all around better fighter.

Notes:the way his bankai works if he was fighting somone and that was his goal, and a friend of his enemy showed up, this character would practicaly ignore this other person, he would defend himself against oncoming attacks( he is not stupid) but will simply knock the friend away and continue pursuing the focus of his will.


Name: Kiseichū (parasite)

Shikai:

Appearance: 2 arm blades with a pinsir shaped front.

ability 1: any wound inflicted by there blade will syphon life from the enemy healing the user.if the user has no wounds he gains an aura that acts as a shield to future injuries of the same damage as the wounds he has inflicted.

ability 2: the blades can be used to absorb spiritual attacks if they touch the blades.( the arm guard is sharp but only acts as a blade and does not apply any of the abilites of Kiseichū )

Bankai: Yōsha no nai kiseichū(relentless parasite) the two arm blades can turn into into 2 different things. either blade can be either type at any given time(there is a transforming period of about 2 sec when the blades change form, during this period none of the abilities of Kiseichū take effect.

Sheild form: the arm blade turns into a spiked sheild, losing all syphoning abilities (life force or otherwise) but gaining the ability to absorb energy attacks from any part of the blade.

Sword form: the arm blade turns into a dual pointed sword(looks like an energy sword from halo) The sword has no abilities to absorb on coming energy attacks but life force syphoning is increased drasticaly. it also gains the ability to syphon spirtual pressure from anything it touches giving this energy to the user.(this is not permanent, once bankai is disengaged this extra energy is lost. The area between the two points is filled with extremly focused spiritual energy cable of breaking fragile blades and if in contact with another shinigami will sap the life force and spiritual pressure from you at twice the speed.

Notes: in bankai if the 2 forms are not used together( if you are using sheild and sword rather than 2 swords or 2 sheilds)the abilites of both are diminshed, still greater than that of shikai but significantly less than them used together.

the character weilding this sword is very reckless in his figting style due to his swords affects, he acts much like kenpachi loving battle and uses very little defense. using attacks that leave him vulnerable makes enemies use attacks that make them vulnerable, hopefully allowing him to do damage and heal.

this character has little physical strength but is very fast and has exremely high spiritual pressure. this allows him to move around and cut any fighter( dont want any Kenpachi/Nnoitra moments if you know what i mean)

all life force stealing or the healing affect heals as much as the damage done, the spirit energy absorption from being would be about .5% per cut from the blade meaning 200 hits would lead to you haveing no spiritual pressure. in the center of the bankai blade this affect is 1% per second of contact.

being stabbed by this blade is very very bad :D

comments apreciated and suggestions if seems to over powered. the percentages i just kinda made up on the fly. thanks for reading! :D

Name: Kiseichū (parasite)

Shikai:

Appearance: 2 arm blades with a pinsir s

sorry if its a bit confusing...and the pictures didnt go with em but im sure u can get the idea. i have personalities behind the characters who wield the swords but no story line in mind so wherever you need people any of em can be placed.

Well, this forum really isn't to critique zanpakuto, but they seem fine. It is okay if you have more than one character, but not more than three. So, it is your decision which captain-ship you'd want to fullfill and which characters you want to be a lieutenant.

However, since you've provided three characters, if you want you can do this:

Captain of squad 13: Tsukisasu yōna kyōi-Use this zanpakuto, but come up with a name for the character and edit your original post with the necessary information)
Lieutenant of squad 5: Use the parasite zanpakuto (again, make up a name for the character and edit post)
Lieutenant of squad 2: Harken

Okay? And hopefully we'll get some captains for those squads.

If Gecho takes on those roles, we still need the following (if people want to make more characters, unless you already have 2-3)

Squad 1: Lieutenant
Squad 2: Captain (If this can't be filled, i'll just put soi fon back in it) :P
Squad 5: Captain
Squad 7: Captain
Squad 9: Captain

Well I personally liked all of those zanpakuto. My only question is for the ribbon one. Is there a time limit on how long he is in that mode? After all, if his goal is to kill someone and he does that, than the enemy really can't harm him, making a battle pointless.

Name: Ryden Itami
Occupation: Captain of squad nine.
Age: No one knows his true age.

Appearance: He wears the traditional captain's kimono overtop his shinigami uniform. He has also sewn a hood on his shinigami kimono, which he usually always wears up, preventing anyone from seeing his face.

Personality: He is usually very calm and quiet. He has a strong distaste for battle, although very skilled in zanjutsu. In a battle, he is still quite quiet, though he has a habit of telling the opponent their flaws. He also holds his sense of honor in very high regard, and in the case of him entering a battle, prefers to fight solo and will not bring any tricks into the fight with him.

Zanpakuto name: Jigoku-keibi (Hell guard)
Sealed appearance: A black bladed katana with a short black chain hanging off the bottom of the hilt. The hilt is also black, but with a crimson string wrapped around it. The blade is also spotted with patched of dark red dried blood.
Release command: Hikiorosu! (Drag them down!)

Shikai appearance: The blade heats up until it is a bright red. Flames then light on the edges.

Shikai ability 1: Akainetsu (Red heat). This ability activates upon release and stays active throughout shikai. Each time Jigoku-keibi hits something, it increases the temperature of whatever it hit by five degrees farenheit.

Shikai ability 2: Hakunetsu (White heat). When activated, the flames on the blade leap off Jigoku-keibi and onto the target, whatever it may be. These flames heat the target up by ten degrees a second. This ability can be countered if the user's concentration is broken.

Bankai name: Dai-heru Kaen (Grand Hellblaze)
Bankai description: The blade is engulfed in flames. The chain on the hilt becomes red hot and wraps around the arm holding the sword, not burning the weilder of course, and merged with the shoulderblade of that arm. The other arm is also engulfed in crimson flames and turns a bright reddish-yellow colour, like hot metal. This bankai also greatly increases the strength of each strike, and heats things up by ten degrees per strike. The flame arm also acts like a sword, and can be used to block a strike or burn the opponent.

Bankai ability 1: Shinigiri (Deathgrip). The user plunges his flaming arm into the ground. A much larger fire-hand then shoots up out of the ground beneath the target and grabs him/her, burning them severely.

Bankai ability 2: Kaenhosuteki (Great flame blast) The flames around the blade shoot out at the target, causing a massive explosion wherever they hit.

Bankai ability 3: Kyu-heru Kaen (Final Hellblaze). The user plunges the blade into the ground, and a ring of crimson flames appears around the target. The chain on the hilt then disconnects from the weilder's back and shoots up into the sky, and a massive blast of white fire falls from the sky and onto the opponent. This attack is usually utilized when no other options are available, as the cost of using it is so high in energy it usually results in coma.

Zord, you have a remarkable talent for unique zanpakuto. I like it. Now, I am gonna post the introduction of Randomfan and I's characters. Ready captains and lieutenants? Also, Onix, you can make another captain or lieutenant, if you want.

Name : Ryuken Shihōin

Age : 1200 ( looks to be about 20-25 )

Height : 6'0

Muscle build : Meduim heavy detail

weight : 200LBS


Rank : Second squad captain, 23rd head of the Shihōin Clan ,Commander of the Onmitsukidō, Corps Commander of the Corrections Corps, Corps Commander of the Executive Militia.


Realitives : Yoruichi Shioin ( Elder sister )


Apperance : Ryuken wears the standard second squad Attire his Haori is longer than most allowing him to conceal and hide weapons , he wears Arm and hand gaurds his Shihakushō is sleveless but has it's Back. his hair is a Dark purpple like his sisters but it's down to his mid back to witch he commonly has it in a Braid. his skin is also of a Tan complextion. his eye's are a deep grey color with his Iris shaped like a Dogs .




Zanpakuto : Ryuken is a Spcail shinigami because he has a Dual set much like Shunsui and Jushiro.



Shikai Name(s) : Ikazuchi Nushi Senshu ( Thunder gods bow )

Karasuhebi Gaidoku Kougake ( Blacksnakes Posion Gaunlet )



Bankai names : Tenrai Ikazuchi Nushi Senshu ( Divine Thunder gods bow )
Krasshu Ryujinn hebi Yaiba ( Black Dragon King Snake Blade )



Apperance : both swords of Wizakashi's and are kept behind Ryuken being hidden behind his Haori the blade's look the same in terms of sealed state apperance.




other abilties :


Shunko ( Flash cry )-when Ryuken activates his Flash cry it looks as though he is being encoated by a Bunch of Tinted flames.



Backround storey : not much is known about Ryuken seeing as he kept him self concealed and away from his family but when he did Join the Goeti 13 and passed his exams with flying colors. he was taken in by soi-fon because of his Herritage . he was quickly put into the third seat of the second squad attending to alot of his dutyies on his days off he'd spend his time training with his Zanpakuto and mastering Shunko. he has also been said to be a master hand to hand combant as well as one of the fastest shinigami in historey.

Name : Kiroku Sakku

Height : 5'9

weight : 200 LBS

Age : 210

Muscel build : Meduim build heavy detail

Body type : Long and lanky ( like Gin ) with a athlectic tone to it

Rank / occupation : Captain squad 5

apperance : Kiroku has long dead staright white hair that comes down to the back of his neck he has always has a strand of hair coveing his left eye his Iris is a lifeless grey color and his pupil and faded black color a strange feature that he has is much like Gin he's always smileing. his Haori has extended sleeve's and he wears a normal soul reaper uniform. over his arms he wears black hand gaurds that go from his fore arm to the top of his hands.


Persnailty : Kiroku is proabily one of the most creepyiest people you'll ever meet he is very playful despite how he get's to play he is always looking for the "perfect playmate" he also use's very dark humor and has a nack for makeing people who are worrying about a loved one worse he does show a bit of kindness towards his divsion also he isn't scared to say what he thinks of people he is also head strong and very Opinative he never hides his playful side he is also always laughing or giggleing he also refurse everything to a game or rules. but like any captain in combat he's a force to be reckond with to most enemyies they are often intimdated by him and what he is capeable of. he also like's to play jokes on people in soul soceity and enjoy's like the prevouis captains before him takeing long walks around soul society is also very Charismatic and enjoy's the little things he also adresses every one in soul society by there propper tittle or he sais miss or mr.




Agilty : 90




Stamina : 90




Bio : not by choice Kiroku was enrolled in the shinigami acdeamy when he was 5 and graduated and was put into a seated spot when he was 9 he didn't get along with any of the other soul reapers mostly because he slacked off and was a nice little kid not capeable of Violence until when he was sent on a mission with the asstaint captain and 3rd seat of his squad the mission went horrable the captain showed up to see his asstaint captain his 3rd seat and a bunch of hollow dead with a little kiroku with a crazyied smile on his face covered in blood repeating "those who never hide there playful side." as well as crazyied laughter after that indcident Kiroku was never the same he was classified as Mentally insane and Pysopath however the captain commander didn't want to kill or dispose of Kiroku so he was placed as the asstaint captain and later captain of 3rd divsion and within a few years he earned the tittle Dream master Kiroku and is qulified as one of the most deadlyiest captains in the historey of soul society.

now before I start his zanpakuto this is another Ideal Idea on what I would have for a Zanpakuto :P.


Zanpakuto :

Shikai name : wan Izure sezaru chi ( one who has many )

Bankai name : wan Izure sezaru chi tai ( one who has many reailtyies )

Release phrase : play around a little

Sealed state description : in it's sealed state Wan Izure seazru chi is a meduim legength Katana so about 4 or 5 inches longer than a short sword and 2 or 3 inches shorter than a Katana it has a light blue wraping around it's hilt the blade is also a faded midnight black the sheath is a pure ghostly paleish white color.


Shikai description : before the blade enters it's shikai the blade glows a bright white color almost blinding the oppent when it transforms the blade color is a spectrum blue makeing it appear transparnt the gaurd gorws a bit more triangular the blade stays the same legength.


shikai abiltyies :

Shugi hi ikko ( Rule of one ) when this abilty activate feathers made of Kiroku's Reistu glitter off the blade and around him and the oppent for a 4 meter circular raiduis when the feathers touch the oppent it enters there body that is how the abilty is activated. the abilty is like Koga Kuchiki once the feathers enter the body he can now mainipulate the oppents sense of perception such as incereaseing distanceing makeing things appear further way than they really are makeing things appear closer to than they really are. the feathers can be blocked by Bakudo level 10 and up this abilty lasts for 5 minutes and has a 3 minute cool down time .

gi hi ni ( Rule of two ) the user feels like there whole world was just turned upside down than back to right side up once that sensation happens they are now in the backwards reailty where everything is oppsite so if Kiroku cut's your left arm a cut appears on the right side, if you block you get hit if you attack you block only kiroku know's the rule's leaveing his enemey to figure it out them selves this abilty lasts for 5 minutes and has a 3 minute cool down time. Also how this abilty starts is a soft song plays from Kiroku Zanpakuto the song take's up a 5 meter circular raiduis.

Sono soudai Junjou ( the grand rule ) this abilty is going to sound over powered for a shikai abilty however there are great restrictions on this abilty. this abilty starts when the oppents use's there Zanpakuto's abilty a mirror appears and gives a flash than Kiroku is seen with his enemeyies Zanpakuto note the enemey still has there's of wich now Kiroku can use that same abilty to attack his enemey and that abilty only and the enemey can no longer use the abilty he used to attack Kiroku with if the user keeps attacking Kiroku with diffrent abiltyies Kiroku can only keep absorbing and useing them however he must give up the one he is currently copying. this abilty lasts 2 minutes and has a 5 minute cool down time the mirror that appears is a little 3 feet long 3 feet wide circular mirror this abilty can be easyily avoided you litterly don't use your zanpakuto abiltyies the mirror stays for the same time peroid as the abilty does the mirror can also be destoryed by Kido of level 10 and up also he can only copy captain level and lower zanpakuto.

Bankai description : once Kiroku enters in his bankai his sword seems to actually turn into that of a spectrum blade

Bankai abiltyies :

Sono Sacchi shiai ( the sense game ) how this abilty activate is four birds made of Kiroku's Reistu appear and bolt toward the enemey at kido speed if the birds hit the enemey the 4 major sense's are now gone for 3 minutes ( sight , hearing,touch,smell ) so it's a survial game you can counter this abilty like tosen you have to catch the blade or touch it however the moment you let go back to the game. the bird can be blocked by level 20 bakudo.


Sono Gyaku emono ( the Opposite Game ) this abilty is a strengthed version of the second shikai abilty only now you see everything upside down and even the way you move is backwards now so you go left you appear right.how everything get's turned upside down is a little 5 foot long barrier and 5 foot wide appears over Kiroku and the user an image of what they where they are fighting appears upside down within this barrier people can't escape from the barrier they have to wait the whole 8 minutes your in the backwards reailty. this abilty has a 4 minute cool down time.

Sono Genkou shiai ( the Copy Game ) when this abilty is activated a Gaint Rectangular mirror that is 5 by 5 ( five long and five feet wide ) appears in front of Kiroku when the enemey attacks the mirror with one of there Zanpakuto's abilty the mirror remains unscratched but the user can no longer use that abilty if the user keeps attacking they loose all there Zanpakuto abiltyies the real power of this is that Kiroku gains each abilty lost an an image of the person's Zanpakuto makeing the enemeyies Zanpakuto look like a fake this abilty lasts for 5 minutes and has a 5 minute cool down time. Kiroku can use up to 3 Zanpakuto abityies of another Zanpakuto and nun of his own when useing this abilty again he can only copy captain level and lower Zanpakuto.

Crazieone:

Thank you! I truly appreciate the compliment!

[Deadness falls upon the air of the soul society]

(voices come from within the secluded forest. Within the brush, citizens from the soul society gather around a fire, their laughter filling the forest. Suddenly, a heaviness falls over them, and they cease their laughter.)


Kogo: What was that?

Mariae: Nothing…it was nothing.

Kogo: Didn’t feel like nothing.

Choje: (he stares behind the others. His face appears baffled, he is not grasping what is transpiring)

Kalay: What, Choje? You look stupid, stop. You’re trying to make this eerie feeling worse (he continues to stare, without a response).

(They all turn around and see that deeper within the forest, a dim light glimmers amidst the darkness).

Kogo: Should we go look?

Mariae: ARE YOU NUTS?! Let’s go back to the village.

Kalay: Maybe we should, it could be someone in need of help.

Mariae: Oh, please! We’re not shinigami, it is not our purpose to aid the helpless.

Kalay: And if it were us? What then? You’d take the same position (suddenly the area brightens and, to the effect of thousands of shattering windows, a sound wave rumbles past them)?

Choje: …I think we best leave….now!

Kogo: I’m with Choje! (They gather their stuff when suddenly figures, bathed in blackness, emerge from the distance).

Kalay: People do need our help!

(The shadowy figures halt, and stand, silent in the darkness of the woods. Suddenly, the air is drenched with spiritual pressure and the four citizens fall to their knees, clutching their chests.)

Voice 1: I wonder how long it’s been…

Voice 2: It’s unimportant. Our goal is simple, regardless of the time frame.

Voice: 3: Oh? We’re being welcomed…

Voice: 4: They look petrified.

Voice 3: How appropriate (What appears to be a female silhouette, begins walking toward the four individuals).

Mariae: Oh, god…(she begins stumbling, grabs her basket and turns to run away, but the figure is already behind her).

Voice 3: (her piecing green eyes, illuminated by the fire, gaze upon Mariae). Your reaction is, again, quite appropriate. I can sense your body growing colder already. I’ve never known what it was like to experience fear, and so I experience indirectly through my victims. Fear, of course, is the most potent weapon there is.

Kojo: Mariae! GET AWAY FROM HER (he charges toward them, the mysterious woman’s green eyes ever-so subtly fixating on him. As if their senses were dulled, they did not see it happen, the lethality of her speed is inspiring).

Mariae: Kojo….Kojo?! Ahhhh(she screams violently as she sees the woman’s hand strung through Kojo’s chest. Without hesitation, the figure smacks the Mariae across the face, sending her flying into a tree).

Voice 3: Your shrieking is absolutely deafening, my dear.

Voice 2: I doubt you’ll need to worry any longer, you’ve broken every bone in her body.

Voice 3: (she chuckles softly, taking her palm and striking the corpse that lies on her arm. It flies off, landing in the distance. The other two villagers have begun running, but before they can make any significant distance, blood is spilled, soiling the dark green grass). Messy work, isn’t it?

Voice 4: Absolutely. Thankfully you don’t mind.

Voice 3: Hah. I don’t, you’re right. The more, the better (she giggles).

Voice 5: Can we go now?

Voice 1: Yes, we wouldn’t want to lose our advantage. I don’t believe they’ve discovered us yet, so keep suppressing your spiritual pressure.

Voice 2: Correct. It’s vital that we begin searching for our zanpakuto, otherwise this won’t be a very…

Voice 5: ….sweet revenge?

Voice 2: I was going to say, “productive use of our time.” However, both apply. I can sense them, even at this distance.

Voice 3: …I can hear his words, they echo , even though we’ve been apart.

Voice 4: We are bonded, we can always sense them. I bet they are dying to be reunited with us. Despicable, removing a zanpakuto from their master.

Voice 6: Let’s go!

(they all vanish, leaving only the smell of vengeance in the air).

Two soul reapers can be seen looking in the woods for something.

Teiko: "Oi! Are you sure you left it here? Not in your room or something?"

Rosuko: "I'm pretty sure..."

Teiko looked back at him, and studied him thoroughly. Rosuko was bent over a bush trying to find the scabbard to his zanpakuto. "Remind me again how on earth you ended up losing that?"

Rosuko turned to look at him, wiping sweat off his brow. "I dunno. I got a call about a hollow in someones village, and went to go and kill it. When i came back to this exact spot, it wasn't here anymore."

Teiko turned toward him, about to say something, when he heard screams coming from somewhere much deeper into the forest. His blood froze with fear, and his eyes widened, as did Rosuko's. They both turned in the direction of the screams, and looked at each other. They felt the intense spiritual pressure from a very great distance, meaning it was someone very powerful. They began to cautiously make their way toward the screams, but by the time they arrived, they had stopped. Teiko heard muffled words, and felt enormous spiritual pressure emanating from all of the figures. Teiko peeked from behind a bush, and saw a tall woman with blond hair, and a man who looked absolutely crazed. He quickley drew his head back, and listened as one of them said something, he really wished he hadn't heard.

???: "And then... we can kill them ALL."

Teiko, before he could stop himself, took in a slight gasping breath. He covered his mouth as Rosuko looked at him in dismay. He turned his ears once again to the conversation, but he realized too late that it had stopped, and that someone was walking towards them.

"Run!" Teiko hissed in Rosuko's ear, "Get away from here!"

Rosuko looked at him with pure horror in his eyes. "And then what are you planning to do? DIE?!" Teiko shook his head.

"I have an idea," he said, "but you'll have to trust me. Now go! And tell the head captain that i have been captured." He lightly shove Rosuko in the direction they had come, and then lie down, pretending to be asleep, in order to hide his spiritual pressure. He peeked through one half open eye, and as he saw the bush shudder, closed the eye. He could hear them whispering, and then one of them picked him up by the end of his robe. Teiko pretended to be shaken awake, and looked around, to see all of their faces.

[[Deadly encounter]]


[Play music]


Voice 3: (she gazes into Teiko’s eyes, his body a -shudder) You’re fear isn’t as pronounced as the other. You must be a Shinigami.

Voice 4: Did you think hiding your spiritual pressure would sufficiently hide you?

Voice 2: Stop! Kill him, now! We can’t afford to deal with this garbage! He’s already beckoned for reinforcements!

Voice 3: (her eyes, remain fixated on him. She cops a grin, and without hesitation, he reaches for his blade, but she grabs his hand on his grip). Ah, ah, ah…let’s not get too crazy, now. We should keep this…very…simple (her grin widens and before he can react, her finger touches his chest, and a beam of energy pierces his flesh, exiting through his back. His eyes lose their glow and his pupils dilate, resembling large pieces of coal. There is an emptiness within them, but he remains conscious, gripping onto life).

Voice 2: COME! There have already been far too many distractions. We don’t need to be preoccupied by anymore Shinigami, especially captains. Without our Zanpakuto…

Voice 6: Yes, we know.

Voice 3: Let’s hope the fun doesn’t stop here, though. (They all begin to vanish, but she glances back at Taiko, and whispers a few words that herald immense light around him). Be sure to show your superiors the redecorating. Blood certainly is a vibrant shade (he hones in on her eyes, when suddenly, she vanishes).

Well, I'm no author, but I'll give it a shot.

[At the first squad's barracks]

Rosuko: (Crashes through the door to Yamamto's private quarters)

Yamamoto: What is the meaning of this?!

Rosuko:(Panting) Yamamoto-sama! There has been an incident in the forest! Lieutenant Teiko Spirit is in grave danger!

Yamamoto: Calm yourself, boy! What has happened?

Rosuko:(Still worked up) In the forest... We heard screams, but when we went to check it out..... (He puts his hand to his face)

Yamamoto: Spit it out! This is clearly of importance, and we can't afford to have you stalling like this!

Rosuko: There were six figures... Each of them had an immense reiatsu... Teiko told me to inform you that he had been captured...

Yamamoto: Very well. Go, and inform as many as you can of this incident!

Rosuko: Yes, Captain-Commander! (Runs out the door)

Yamamoto:(To himself) But it couldn't possibly be...

[[In the forest]]

[Play music above]

Voice three: Behold, soul society lies just ahead.

Voice two: Finally...

Voice six: (Laughing) Though it's a pity we couldn't torture that shinigami a little longer.

Voice one: Bah! There will be plenty more in seretei!

Voice six: That I cannot argue with.

Voice three: Then come, and let us take our revenge!!!

Teiko watched as the six of them vanished. His eyes were very blurry, and he was bleeding profusely from the wound. He could tell he was near death, and that the Forbidden Six had something awful in mind for the seireitei. He tried time and time again to get up, but he was to exhausted, and all he wanted o do was sleep... yes, go into a deep sleep... No! Teiko thought. Just then, he heard Captain Commander Yammamoto's voice over the loud-speaker.

""Attention all on duty shinigami; I have just been informed that the Forbidden Six have escaped from their holding places, and now seek to destroy all of Soul Society. Please take all of the necessary precautions, and be prepared to fight at any moment. All civilians please get to a safe place immideatly. And to all of squad four; I have also been informed that Lieutenant Teiko Spirit has been captured and possibly killed or wounded by these despicable people. Please dispatch to the forest immidiatly and bring him back for examination.""

Teiko was relieved to hear that the message had been passed on, and that help was coming for him. But if they didn't get there soon, he would already be dead. He lay back,. and relaxed, looking at his hands, and feet, watching all of the forest creatures go wild and run around in fear and despair. He was drifting through a world of wonder and violence, he felt like his soul would detatch at any moment...

???: "Teiko!!!"

Teiko's eyes were closed, but he automatically knew that it was Rosuko, here with squad four to help him. He was tired, and all he wanted to do was sleep. He tried hard, but he couldn't force his eyes open. He felt his body being lifted onto a stretcher, and prepared for transportation back to the barracks.

[At the fourth squad barracks]

Teiko:(Manages to slightly open his eyes)

???: Ah, you're finally awake, Teiko-san.

Teiko: Who..? Captain Unohana! (Sits upright suddenly, then winces in pain and slumps back down into his bed)

Unohana: You shouldn't move so quickly, Teiko-San. You'll reopen your wound.

Teiko: Ros... Where's Rosuko?

Unohana: He was very worried about you. We had a hard time convincing him that we could take care of you. As of right now, he should be busy helping captain Calbel to make sure the citizens are safe. Now, get some rest, you'll need it if you're to assist in the coming battles.

Teiko: Yes... (Falls to sleep)

[In the thirty-seventh rukongai district]

Voice two:(Laughs softly) I can almost feel it.

Voice three: In due time.

(A group of six shinigami run through the corridor)

Voice three: Hmm. How convenient. Perhaps we can "persuade" them to give us some assistance? Luresa!

Voice six: On it. (Confronts the patrol squad)

Patrol shinigami: Hold it! What squad do you belong to?

Luresa:(Laughs gently) This'll be fun! (Leaps at the group)

(After a series of sickening crunches and the splattering of blood, only one shinigami remains)

Luresa: Now, why don't you come meet some of my friends?

Shinigami: No... No!!! (Pain explodes on the side of his head, and he loses conciousness.

[Rising threat level]

(Blood pools at the corner of the hallway, deep in the catacombs of central 46. At the very edge of the corridor stand the six mysterious individuals).

Luresa: There is something to be said about the lack of precautionary measures…I mean, nothing is protected around this place.

Anahel: They have established a defensive line, we just haven’t encountered it yet. It’s likely beyond these doors.

Naamah: (she steps toward the door, craving the strength of her zanpakuto) I can feel her. She continues to call my name.

Kundra: I cannot wait to wield my Zanpakuto again. It has been far too long.

Ronani: Those cowardly Shinigami separated us from our Zanpakuto. If it hasn’t been for that, they would have never been able to seal us (he walks up to the door and with one punch, shatters the mighty structure).

(they walk into the room and several barriers burst to life, in response to their presence)

Seriende: Looks like we’re trapped, my friends.

Naamah: These are fairly weak barriers. I cannot imagine who constructed such poor Bakudo, but it won’t be standing for long.

Anahel: No, it won’t! (She sports a mischievous grin and raises her hands, reciting the words) Hado 59: Gurando aidorurappu (ribbons of energy burst from her hands striking the barriers, the ribbons begin resembling chains. She waves her hands inward, and a focal point, coalesces the chain).

Naamah: I’ve never seen this Hado before?

Kundra: It’s not doing anything, Anahel.

Seriende: Look, you fool.

Anahel: (her eyes dance across the barrier, as it begins to collapse, the chains anchored in this kido focal point. The barrier cracks and is pulled downward, finally shattering, and the remaining pieces being dragged within the vortex, vanishing.) You have such poor insight, Kundra. You really should be more patient.

Luresa: What was that?

Anahel: A hado spell, of course. Ginrei Kuchiki taught me that spell, as a matter of fact. It’s not forbidden, but seldom taught within the academy. It was primary used to do deconstruct barriers, but people learned it could be useful with forms of torture, especially if you have can master focus and control over the Kido.

Ronani: Enough of this kido lesson! I want my Zanpakuto. Plus, that obviously tripped off some alarm system.

(They see a large chest, protected by thick, barrier-like kido).

Anahel: Oh, please!

Naamah: I’m so sick of this Shinigami crap! HADO 69: Fierry torrent! (a massive cascade of flames erupts from her hands, filling the catacombs with light. The blaze incinerates the barriers).

Seriende: The chest! (she opens the massive chest to discover all of their Zanpakuto).

Anahel: Let me get this straight…they hid them all in the same area? These are not the Shinigami I battled.

Ronani: Be thankful (he picks up his Zanpakuto.

(They all take a meditative stance, and lay their Zanpakuto across their laps. Within seconds, they have activated a Jinzen, to commune with their Zanpakuto).


The air is quiet, their minds in sync with their Zanpakuto…when suddenly.

Anahel: (in the dead silence, one of her eyes bursts open, staring at low-level Shinigami). How are you interrupt an individual when they are communing with their Zanpakuto (she calmly states. She begins to rise, places her Zanpakuto on her waist).

(the others glance forward, and suddenly a huge explosion erupts from the catacombs, rumbling the entirety of central 46. In an instant, they are gone, nowhere to be found).

ummmm can you not use my charcters agaisnt my will .......I am the one too introdouce them in the event someone would like too use my charcter or charcters please notifey me first

Then I apologize for being so quick to incorporate another's character without their consent. I'll be sure to give you a heads up first next time. I will remove my previous post.

-5th divison of question able orgin THE New Captain of squad 2 arrives-




-a litte before the current attack & battles-




-5th divison barrack-


-Kiroku was looking around his newly found office he gave a smile- "wow some fancey stuff in here eh Momo-chan" -momo looked depressed with her new captain , she only nodded in agreement- "i've..shown where the captains office is...anything else captain Az..I mean Kiroku" -she laughed aqwardly at her mistake, as to wear Kiroku just plain out laughed- "you almost called me Captain Azein, Momo-chan" -Momo's eye's became teary- "I Applogize captain" -she said sniffleing- "oh my now now don't cry momo-chan" -Kiroku's voice sounded menaceing as he got the wave and felt the disruption of soul soceity- "OH MY , did you feel that spirtual pressure Momo-chan !!" -he sounded Excited- "Momo-Chan Go see what that was " -Momo nodded and ran out the door-



-Kiroku got out of his office him self and stood atop one of the buildings- "Oh my such high Spirtual pressure has been unleashed I hope Miss Momo-chan will be able to handle such strength, by her self....I wonder if the spirtual pressure I just felt was only one person" -Kiroku laughed at himself-




-second Divison barracks-



-some members were seen running through the woods until the stopped at a soul-reapers who was wearing the second Divison Haori his back was turned too the soul reapers & they were on a cliff ledge that pointed out toward soul-society- "CAPTAIN, DID YOU FEEL" -the man cut them off- "that spirtual pressure a moment ago the Seretti it's self Shook But if felt as thoug hthe spirtual pressure was Linked too or rather from the same body, but that would be impossable go check it out and come back with full resaults I will remain here for now" -the two ninja's saulted- "YES SIR !!, CAPTAIN RYUKEN WE SHALL RETURN " -they shunpoed off, as Ryuken sighed- "oi quite the pair those two, I guess I myself should Moblize and start a Deffensive Barrier , guess it's time to head to the captain-commander's office"


-Ryuken disappeared-




End !

All right guys, now that we're really getting in to the story line, I suggest that you guys talk over your plans together through the IM or messaging, that way, you can keep your plans secret from us, and make the story even more interesting. Also, I've noticed that some of you have referred to the Forbidden Six as if you have known of them before. For future reference, the only people alive in Soul Society who know of them are the oldest captains, such as Yamamoto and Unohana. There aren't even any records of them left over, as they were all destroyed. With that out of the way, good luck, and I can't wait to see all of your other posts.

Ukitaki and Shunsui would too they were the first captains

I'll try to post something tommorrow introducing my captain.

"In front of the 1st Squad Barracks, Lieutenants Chojiro and and Izuru stand guard. All seems well until they hear the sounds of footsteps walking towards them"

Izuru: Who's there?

"No response can be heard"

Chojiro: Should we sound the alarm?

Izuru: No, not yet. It could just be our ears playing tricks-.

"Izuru is interrupted as a shining gold chain shoots out of the darkness, and pulls him out of view"

Chojiro: Izuru!? Damn it, The captain must be warned!

"Chojiro runs to sound the alarm, but before he can he hears a male voice"

Kundras: Bakudo 9. Horin.

"An orange tendril quickly wraps itself around Chojiro, and brings him back towards them. He is wrapped around an already-unconscious Izuru, and quickly joins him as he is struck over the head."

Seriende: That should hold them for a while. Quickly Naamah, hide them out of view. We wouldn't want to give them any premature warning.

Naamah: Yes.

Seriende: Now then, Bakudo 26. Kyokko.

"She slowly disappears from view, and the others soon follow her example, suppressing their spiritual pressure as well. They travel in to the heart of the barracks."

Seriende: Time for the shinigami to learn just who they're dealing with. Hado 33. Sokatsui.

Naamah: Hado 30. Shakkaho.

Luresa: Hado 58. Tenran.

Anahel: Hado 32. Okasen.

Ronani: Hado 63. Raikaho.

Kundras: Hado 4. Byakurai.

"The kido spells rip through the buildings, destroying everything in their way and slaughtering many shinigami. Soon, everything around them has been burned straight to the ground."

Seriende: That should be enough.

"Not a moment later, Captain Yamamoto appears among the ruins of his barracks."

Yamamoto: You 6! I thought I had seen the last of you hundreds of years ago!

Seriende: That seal was a nuisance, but it could not hold us indefinitely. And this time, we intend to stay free.

Yamamoto: I do not know what prompted you fools to attack, but I shall not allow this to continue. I shall defeat you here, and throw you back in to your previous jail!

"Ronani draws his zanpakuto": We will not go quietly!

Seriende: Calm yourself Ronani, you shall not have to worry about that. He will have bigger problems to worry about. Such as this one. Hado 73. Soren Sokatsui!

"A large burst of blue reiatsu crashes down from her hand and barrels straight towards Captain Yamamoto."

Yamamoto: Bakudo 81. Danku!

"The wave of reiatsu collides with the large barrier, and is stopped in its tracks. The resulting explosion blocks out all view. When it clears, a small crack can be seen in the barrier."

Yamamoto: You impudent fools! I shall destroy you before anymore harm can come to Soul Society! Reduce all creation to ashes, Ryujin Jakka!

" His cane is stripped away to reveal is zanpakuto, and flames spew from the blade like water from a fountain, setting everything around them aflame. The 6 of them have to jump back before they too a burned."

Yamamoto: The years spent in your prison has obviously dulled your senses. Even with your zanpakuto you stand no chance.

Seriende: We shall see.

"Seriende appears behind him, and aims a sharp kick to the back of his head, but he catches it with his hand, and throws her forward. While she is in mid air she aims a hand at him."

Seriende: Hado 30. Shakkaho!

"The red orb of energy shoots toward his face, but he easily blocks it with the side of his sword. As he does this, Seriende shunpos above him, and slams her leg down like a guillotine, which Yamamoto barely dodges, leaving a small scratch on his face."

Yamamoto: Surely you don't expect to win with that level of power!

"He waves his sword and a wall of flames sweeps towards them, and while they dodge most of it, they acquire a few small burns."

Yamamoto: You have talent, but you are still far too early to be facing me. You were foolish to have come here. Your freedom shall end as quickly as it began.

"Yamamoto creates a circle of flames around them all, and creates a large sphere of flames over his sword"

Yamamoto: Now, burn!

"He launches the orb at them, and it causes an explosion that can be seen from across the Soul Society. The only thing left where they used to be is a large crater, and some small fires that are slowly consuming the ground."

Yamamoto: That takes care of that.

"He sheathes his sword"

Seriende: Not quite Captain.

"He whips his head back, and sees all 6 of them, very much alive, only sporting a few scratches and burns from his attack."

Yamamoto: How is this possible!?

Seriende: Perhaps I'll explain sometime. But for now, I know a lost battle when I see it. We shall take our leave now.

Anahel: You know it won't be long until we find what we need to do away with you and all your captains. Its only a matter of time.

"They all disappear, leaving Captain Yamamoto looking worried and angry."

[go to youtube and look up" United we stand; Divided we fall and lick on the top result]

Teiko was woken by the sound of a sudden explosion. He slowly rose from his resting area, and looked around. He finally spotted a faint orange glow through the window. He walks over to it, and realized that the glow is a flame, coming from first squad barracks. He spotted his zanapkuto a few feet away, and grabbed it, also putting on his robes. He strapped the zanpakuto onto his back, and ran outside. He saw many dead shinigami, and cursed himself. But when he looked up, he saw a flash in the sky, and felt a sudden rush of air as the figures from before whizzed above his head. He instantly spotted the one who'd nearly killed him, and anger flared up in his gut. His thoughts turned to the people they'd all killed, and it flared even more. He yowled and lunged at her, knocking her away from her group. They both rolled on the ground, and by the time Teiko had stood up, the other five were already there, at her side.

Ronani: "You fool!"

Anahel: "Shut up!" She then turned toward Teiko, and smiled devilishly. "You're from the other day. I'm surprised that you didn't die. However, I will make sure you do this time." She placed he hand on the hilt of her zanpakuto, and waved for the others to go.

Teiko: "You've killed alot of my friends. You nearly killed me, and Captain Commander Yamamoto just a few minutes ago... you're gonna pay for it one way or another." He placed his hand on his sword grip, suddenly tightening his hand. "Split the Sky, Kinuzuma!" He pulled the blade from it's scabbard, and it turned gold with a black handle.

Anahel: "Well, well. A lightning zanpakuto? This should be fun then." She unsheathed he sword, and charged at Teiko; their zanpakuto's clashed, over and over. He was suprisd at how strong she was. Her eyes were deep green, and mezmerizing...

Ronani: "Anahel! Stop! We need to get away from here, or Yamamoto will find us again."

Naamah: "Ronani's right, Anahel."

Anahel just snorted. "Another time, boy." She spat the last word like it was rotten on her tongue.

Teiko was surprised to see them one by one vanish. "Wait!" He called out in anger. "Shoot!" He muttered under his breath. He sheathed his zanpakuto, and looked at the seireitei, sighing in frustration. It would be a very long battle ahead of them.