美女と野獣 Article: Princess Neilla

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posted by BookWorm26

あなた have heard the story of Belle and the Beast, but あなた haven't heard of their daughter.

Belle: She is so beautiful!

Adam: She is a diamond in the rough!

Belle:I want to name her Neilla.

Adam: I 愛 her name

*Mrs.Potts comes into the room*

Mrs.Potts: She is such a beautiful child! She has her fathers eyes, and her mother's face.

Belle:Her blue eyes are spell bounding!

Adam:I want the best for her!

Belle:I will take care of her until I die!

so they hugged their child in their arms.

HoltNLucy4Ever, Iishba and 3 others like this

Beastlysoul25 (chuckle) That is adorable!!!!

BookWorm26 Thanks! I an adding a second part.

Takuya Eh....No offence but you could have done a better job... I am not trying to be rude so please don't take it that way but can't you try again and makek it a bit longer? I mean this feels like the teaser for a longer and much more interersting story that could be told in 2 or maybe 3 chapters instead if just these short sentences and do you know what a "Diamond in the rough" is? Again please don't take this as me being rude I just want to give out helpful advice to people who seem like they have talent.

BookWorm26 It's ok. I'll try to brush up.