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posted by Elizabeth90luv
I, Stella Bonasera, criminologist from New York’s crime lab have to inform あなた that due to a severe medical problem I won’t be able to present on today’s court and testify against Antonio Vasquez, the primary suspect for Anne Blaire’s murder. Responsible for my absence is Mr. Vasquez, who shot me with a machine gun right outside the back entrance of the crime lab. The video of the security cameras can 確認 it.

As a matter of fact, I want to present through this letter all the evidence that I have collected with the help of my experienced team. I swear to the bible that I will tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but truth. For further information, the other crime investigators who are present on this court can answer all your questions.

On June’s 16th, a left arm was found in a rubbish bin on the east side of Central Park. At first place, the victim’s DNA didn’t have any hits in CODIS (Combined DNA Index System) and its fingerprints weren’t in IAFIS (Integrated Automated Fingerprint Identification System), so we weren’t able to identify the victim. The only thing that we were able to learn out of this arm was that it belonged to a white female. The other hand was found in a recycling bin in Chelsea University. Finally, after searching the whole building, the rest of the body was found in a cupboard inside the university’s library. The victim was identified immediately after finding its ID card in one of its pockets. The official cause of death according to the lab’s forensic surgeon was asphyxiation due to strangulation. The two arms were cut after the death of the young lady with a special chain saw. The defensive wounds and the bruises on the victim’s arms were post mortal too. Also, traces of saw dust were found on our crime scene and drops of blue paint were found on the vic’s clothing. However, any of our evidence indicated that the cupboard was the primary crime scene. In addition, some drops of paint were found in all the way from the library’s entrance to the cupboard. Also, the door’s lock was broken and all those evidence showed that the body was transferred to the library. After processing the evidence found, the team realized that only the “MNYL Furniture factory” was using the specific chain saw, paint and saw dust.

In the factory, everything was normal except for the president’s office, where drops of the victim’s blood were found, as well as the chain saw, perfectly cleaned but positive for blood. The president had a strong alibi, but on the chain saw, we found a fingerprint of our suspect, Antonio Vasquez. The security cameras can 確認 the fact that he was on the factory on 02:30, near the time of death. The security camera inside the president’s office confirms that our suspect met the vic but it was destroyed によって Mr. Vasquez, just before the victim was killed. The suspect was an employee in this factory, so he knew how to use this chain saw and as the family of the vic said, he was recently dating with the victim. The fingers of our suspect were a perfect match with the bruises on Anne’s neck. The dead body was transferred to the としょうかん, ライブラリ with a red truck which belonged to the suspect, that was found positive for blood. However, we couldn’t find out how the dead body was transferred to the cupboard without leaving any blood on the corridors of the library. One of the arms was found in the garbage bin and the other one in the Central Park, just because the killer wanted to trick the police. “Without a body there is no crime, so no punishment” 発言しました the suspect. Here in New York’s crime lab we take this as a confession.

I hope that my testimony will be helpful for the dispensation of justice. The 動画 from all the security cameras and all the evidence will be 与えられた to the court によって other crime scene investigators, who can 確認 what I have just 発言しました and of course they can answer to your questions.


Yours faithfully
Stella Bonasera
CSI:科学捜査班 Level 3
CSI:科学捜査班 Assistance Supervisor
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posted by edencharles
Eden Brolin enacts an 18-year-old cruddy, somewhat unbalanced pixie, who along with her friends, turns out to be the target of a sorcerers’ cult. She doesn’t seem whom あなた would call a strong woman and its refreshing we get this in horror movies. She seems 次 door normal unruly girl. Her character has no outstanding characteristic, the artist somehow gives her depth. We see it in her eyes and body language.
Blood Bound plot. No it is not cute, it’s not simple; it’s pessimist and frightful. The story is suggestive of Rosemary’s Baby, which does not seem accidental.
It is 2019, and we’re still exploring age-old subjects like Wicca, human sacrifice and sects. Somehow, those subgenres stand the test of time. Horror stories built around pregnancy never get old either, for obvious reasons. As saturated as these themes may be, in horror cinema these days, Blood Bound manages to impress and surprise. It’s its own thing.
posted by Firewriter
This is a new book I've been working on to help channel my PTSD. Any feedback would be much appreciated.
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Chapter One
Underground

"Get back up to South Sector now!" A man's gruff voice boomed from the walkie-talkies clipped to the belts of the grey and オリーブ green camouflage uniforms of the handful of guards. The harsh command reverberated in the deathly silent area as an individual stealthily crept through the heap of lifeless corpses which gazed emptily at him as he reached for one guard's static walkie-talkie. Sighing heavily in exhaustion from the fight he had to put up, he kicked at...
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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a マント, 隠す walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When...
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posted by zanhar1
It’s raining. Not like a hard rain または anything. Parker makes his way downy the highway with determination and a degree of speed that might not be exactly legal. But he isn’t going alarmingly fast. He maneuvers his car–a rather stylish Dodge Viper–into the fast lane. It isn’t the latest model but he has it painted a sleek purple some shade in between light and dark. After successfully making his pass he get back into the right lane. He’s behind a Chrysler Pacifica with a collect of bumper and window stickers.

From this he deduces that the driver is probably a サッカー mom または an unfortunate...
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I looked at Chantal in a slight mixed feeling of confusion and fear. My confusion was towards everything that just happened about five 分 前 and the fear was also towards the fact that there is now emerald-green 火災, 火 currently emerging throughout my entire body. I then asked Chantal for clarification. "What's going on here?" Chantal stood up, reached into a satchel, which I didn't notice she had with her until now, took out a spray bottle and sprayed the both of us with it. "Whoa! What are あなた doing?" Chantal smiled at me and then responded to my question. "I sprayed both of us with...
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posted by FURRY
Coughing, struggling for air, this, this is life, always trying to find the 次 thing to sate your interest never sitting back to relax always trying to find something new to do. This is the story of one young man destined to find something greater then life itself, greater then anything he had ever come to know または ever will know, our hero's name is Kindred Alphonz Maniker. Kindered had always been and adventurous boy, at a young age he found what seemed to be a crystal, no one in his village had seen such a thing before, it bore no resemblence to any gem they had seen before, it had an odd...
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posted by Rae-Ash
I felt them start to build up
As soon as I saw him
I put on a happy face for my mom
Because she doesn’t know
That he broke my heart
She didn’t know that I balled my eyes out
She hasn’t realized that I’ve withdrawn

He says he wants us to be friends
I could barely hold them back
He asked if I understood
And I do
But that doesn’t stop the pain and anger
I blink back the tears
And realize that I was starting to put a shield up
My shield of anger

I feel the tears
As I pray
That God will help me this time
So I don’t isolate myself again
And don’t lose myself

Tears……
They come and I can’t stop them
I hate them
They are a weakness
and I can’t stop them
posted by hgfan5602
Together, at last,
We sing in unison,
As the eagles zoom past us,
Symbolizing true freedom now.

We are together,
Not just our country,
But all the countries of the universe,
Syria, China, Germany,
Russia, Canada, Brazil,
And, of course, the United States.

I have never experienced
Such an amazing feeling
In my whole life,
As the soldiers of the universe
March past,
We are in utmost glory.

The unity of the universe,
We behold right now.
Never again, we shall quarrel,
Fighting with our steel rifles.

We will be free,
Not just blacks,
But all of us,
Together, at last.

We will be equal,
Women and...
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posted by anbonie
“Nice performance!”
“Thank you, butler!”
Servant smile to Pieter and opens the door of red Ferrari. While driving no one used to speak, until Pieter say something to his butler and bodyguard:
“Did あなた hear when my voice trembled? I think that was 14th song.”
“No, Sir…”
“When my father isn’t near, please call me Pieter”
“Yes, Si… I mean Pieter”
They arrived to McChink’s mansion. Servant turned engine off and ran on other site of car to open Pieter’s door, but he was too late. “I’m sorry, Sir…” 発言しました butler. Pieter sent him angry look: “I can open the door!...
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posted by DxCFan123
月 7

Kat's POV
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"So, what's it like it heaven?" Sadao asked me while we were talking on the phone. "Well, it's like the normal world, except everyone's dead." "So, in heaven, they have this exact town?" "Yes, but there are only the souls of the deceased living there."

"This may be a personal question, but... how did あなた die?"

I just stood where I was, which was in front of the house, stunned. Why would he ask me a 質問 like that? "U-U-Uhm.." "Please tell me? I wont tell anyone else!" I hung up.

Sadao ran outside and up to me. "Sorry for asking that." He brought me...
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posted by DxCFan123
That whole time, I had forgot about my powers. Everything. Like I was a regular person. But that scream, it was of help. What was I gonna do? I couldn't. It would hurt him. I couldn't use my powers. But I had to. I ran out of the cave. I looked around. It started to rain. I didn't do that. I couldn't change it. If I couldn't change the weather, What would I do if I couldn't control things? I saw it. A giant monster. It threw Bruno out of it's hands and onto the rough, muddy ground. "Bruno!" I screamed. I ran over to him. He was injured with a gash in his forhead and was bleeding from the back...
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posted by darkwave
No sun--no moon!
No morn--no noon!
No dawn--no dusk--no proper time of day--
No sky--no earthly view--
No distance looking blue--

No road--no street--
No "t'other side the way"--
No end to any Row--
No indications where the Crescents go--

No 上, ページのトップへ to any steeple--
No recognitions of familiar people--
No courtesies for 表示中 'em--
No knowing 'em!

No mail--no post--
No news from any foreign coast--
No park--no ring--no afternoon gentility--
No company--no nobility--

No warmth, no cheerfulness, no healthful ease,
No comfortable feel in any member--
No shade, no shine, no butterflies, no bees,
No fruits, no flowers, no leaves, no birds,
November!
posted by StarWarsFan7
As McKenna and I board the bus, we sit 次 to each other in the front. "Hey, I've heard of this song!" I コメント on the song that's playing in the background. "...Sippin sizzurp in my ride, like Three 6, Now I'm feelin so fly like a G6..." "Yeah...sure...whatever..." McKenna responds to me with her eyes locked on her yellow and black cell phone. "What's up?" I ask. "Nothing!" She shuts her cell phone like she's hiding ゴールド from a bank. My cell phone ring-tone sounds. "I can't stop my feet from dancin' to the sound of his drum. I fell in 愛 with my Rooock god!" I press the "Answer" button...
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She had left.
She is long gone; away from everything that connects her to this cruel world, dead, buried underneath the blue, glittering waves of the ocean. Shattered into small pieces, flew away from her body, leaving deep wounds in the ハート, 心 of everyone who had loved her. He would never cry enough tears to erase her memory; no tears were enough to express that endless sea of grief and sorrow he sank gradually in. He would never stand enough hours in front of her grave to grasp the concept that she won't tap his shoulder and wake him up from a horrible dream. She is... Dead.
He looked around...
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