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posted by Elizabeth90luv
I, Stella Bonasera, criminologist from New York’s crime lab have to inform あなた that due to a severe medical problem I won’t be able to present on today’s court and testify against Antonio Vasquez, the primary suspect for Anne Blaire’s murder. Responsible for my absence is Mr. Vasquez, who shot me with a machine gun right outside the back entrance of the crime lab. The video of the security cameras can 確認 it.

As a matter of fact, I want to present through this letter all the evidence that I have collected with the help of my experienced team. I swear to the bible that I will tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but truth. For further information, the other crime investigators who are present on this court can answer all your questions.

On June’s 16th, a left arm was found in a rubbish bin on the east side of Central Park. At first place, the victim’s DNA didn’t have any hits in CODIS (Combined DNA Index System) and its fingerprints weren’t in IAFIS (Integrated Automated Fingerprint Identification System), so we weren’t able to identify the victim. The only thing that we were able to learn out of this arm was that it belonged to a white female. The other hand was found in a recycling bin in Chelsea University. Finally, after searching the whole building, the rest of the body was found in a cupboard inside the university’s library. The victim was identified immediately after finding its ID card in one of its pockets. The official cause of death according to the lab’s forensic surgeon was asphyxiation due to strangulation. The two arms were cut after the death of the young lady with a special chain saw. The defensive wounds and the bruises on the victim’s arms were post mortal too. Also, traces of saw dust were found on our crime scene and drops of blue paint were found on the vic’s clothing. However, any of our evidence indicated that the cupboard was the primary crime scene. In addition, some drops of paint were found in all the way from the library’s entrance to the cupboard. Also, the door’s lock was broken and all those evidence showed that the body was transferred to the library. After processing the evidence found, the team realized that only the “MNYL Furniture factory” was using the specific chain saw, paint and saw dust.

In the factory, everything was normal except for the president’s office, where drops of the victim’s blood were found, as well as the chain saw, perfectly cleaned but positive for blood. The president had a strong alibi, but on the chain saw, we found a fingerprint of our suspect, Antonio Vasquez. The security cameras can 確認 the fact that he was on the factory on 02:30, near the time of death. The security camera inside the president’s office confirms that our suspect met the vic but it was destroyed によって Mr. Vasquez, just before the victim was killed. The suspect was an employee in this factory, so he knew how to use this chain saw and as the family of the vic said, he was recently dating with the victim. The fingers of our suspect were a perfect match with the bruises on Anne’s neck. The dead body was transferred to the としょうかん, ライブラリ with a red truck which belonged to the suspect, that was found positive for blood. However, we couldn’t find out how the dead body was transferred to the cupboard without leaving any blood on the corridors of the library. One of the arms was found in the garbage bin and the other one in the Central Park, just because the killer wanted to trick the police. “Without a body there is no crime, so no punishment” 発言しました the suspect. Here in New York’s crime lab we take this as a confession.

I hope that my testimony will be helpful for the dispensation of justice. The 動画 from all the security cameras and all the evidence will be 与えられた to the court によって other crime scene investigators, who can 確認 what I have just 発言しました and of course they can answer to your questions.


Yours faithfully
Stella Bonasera
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posted by xXDreamWriterXx
This is the rough draft of the first chapter of "Beyond a Dream" It's a book that I'm currently 書く but it would nice to get some feedback about it. Its long but hope あなた like it!

Chapter 1

“What! We’re moving?!”

Aria stares at her father, Thomas, with disbelief and utter horror. Thomas sat in his お気に入り seat; a maroon armrest chair with soft kind of fabric that made it hard not to touch. His shoulder length silver layered hair and black framed glasses that went over his gray eyes made him look like the plain glasses business man that he was. Aria stood in the middle of their living...
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What Is Method Writing? - Jack Grapes via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by InnerMermaid
What u will need
Water
Salt
Pen'n paper
Cup
Shell from the sea
Your powers might be
Hydrokinisis
Hydrocryokinisis
Termokinisis
Sieren singing
Telekinesis
U might get all the powers but put your first choice on your pic.
First get a pencil and paper and draw your tail what u want it 2 look like I would recommend the u draw your chest as well for better results. Lable your pics!
After u have done that fill the cup with water and sprinkle salt over the cup and the shell. Dab your fingers in the shell and try to get some salt on them. Rub them on your legs and say:

Coaral reefs ocean floors where ever u may...
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posted by Mermaidgirl11
Hi today i will tell あなた haw to become a mermaid


Side effects:
-itchy legs
-drinking lots of water
-singing allot


Method:

Get into the シャワー take your shower.
near the end say this spell:
Mermaid magic come to me
I would like a tale not two feet beuaty be upon me 魚 of all kinds let me see when im finished in the sea when im dry let my feet return to me SO MOTE IT BE

When あなた say it make sure your wet
Then dry up
次 time あなた touch water close your eyes imagine あなた being a mermaid and count to ten out loud then あなた should fall over and open your eyes

FIND THE MAGIC TALE

WARNING
THIS MAY NOT WORK FOR あなた
I DID NOT MAKE IT UP MY SELF
I GOT IT FROM YouTube
BUT IF IT WORKS TELL ME ILL TYPE IN もっと見る SPELLS
THIS IS MY FIRST ONE
STAY TUNED
posted by mermaidgirl1010
When I woke up I was on a cement floor. My head felt terrible pain and I saw that I had some black and blue on my leg.
''Finally, あなた woke up. I have been waiting for your name.'' A voice 発言しました behind me. I turned around and screamed the sream that sounds like a dying llama. ''Billiam Fergunsun!'' I yelled in rage. ''Yes, tis I ,Billiam Fergunsun."
He is such an idiot. I stood up and brought my knee to his pee-hole and he screamed like a little girl. "Girl power!" I screamed. I didn't notice his friends.
They almost hit me when I heard someone scream now! and I felt light headed and everything went dark again.
posted by mermaidgirl1010
Another 日 in paradise, NOT!
Just another summer 日 of hanging out with フレンズ and such.
Omg. He. Is. Hot. My friend and I were riding our bikes and I saw the cutest guy IN THE UNIVERSE. Well, maybe I am exaggerating but STILL! He is hot!
I must have been staring because the 次 分 I was on a tree. OMG. He was looking at ME!!!!!!! ''Hi I'm Brady."
"I......I........." OMG! Sooooo stupid! My best friend was gone now and he leaned down. OMG. He kissed me! Then...... gone. I was in my bed. Was it a dream? Well, I think i'll check just to be sure.
There Are Writers Who Outline And There Are Writers Who Fail - Corey Mandell via FilmCourage.com.
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The Best 質問 あなた Can Ask Anyone - Kaia Alexander via FilmCourage.com.
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Fastest Sale In Netflix History - Laverne McKinnon via FilmCourage.com.
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If A Writer Ignores These 3 Words The Story Is Over - Andy Guerdat via FilmCourage.com.
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** Little Red Riding フード is always told the same way time after time. It's time to hear this story from another characters point of view. The story of fairy tales may be completely different than what あなた are told. Try thinking of everything from someone else's perspective for once, and see how much that story will change.**

"Here I am again, all alone in these stupid woods," I thought this to myself the whole walk down to the forest. Besides the オオカミ and birds, these woods were scarcely populated, so it was quite boring here all alone. It was always the same old thing, 日 after 日 of...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Imagine,John Lennon's most famous song,was recently voted"Britain's favourite song of all time".It's an idealistic song about peace and hope for a better world.
"Imagine all the people living life in peace."The song was a big hit in 1971,and again in 1980 when Lennon was murdered in New York.It became a hit for a third time after the terrorist attacks of September 11th 2001.

But who really wrote the song?Until recently the answer to this 質問 was always John Lennon.But on a TV programme this week Lennon's wife,Yoko Ono,spoke for the first time about how she,in fact,helped to write the song....
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posted by Insight357
When hate is in your heart
Don’t be afraid to tear yourself apart
Through your demonic fear
Until あなた hear
The 天使 sing
Thy blessing
When あなた hear heaven’s
Yell あなた wonder if the seven
Of sins were committed
It was あなた who committed them
And あなた wil burn for sin

あなた are consumed によって wretched flames
And through everyones aims
あなた are never hit
Nor bit
によって the 火災, 火 consuming you


Screams from hell
Sound like ringing from a bell
Things of silence
Are really screams
People of benevolence
Have bright beams
Of hope and light

あなた are consumed によって wretched flames
And through everyones aims
あなた are never hit
Nor bit
によって the 火災, 火 consuming you

We are listening
We aren’t missing
We know what lies within
So raise your chin
Look at the world with your pessimistic gleam
And seem
All so picture perfect
Chapter one
Okay this is a really ランダム stroy but I was bored and I couldn't get this idea out of my head. In my opinion it is really badly written so sorry.

“Okay Class, あなた have the rest of the period to finish this quiz. This is the last grade before your midterm so work well, and remembers what we studied,” 発言しました my Mr. Grazing, my math teacher. He was the kind of teacher kids pick on and make fun of behind his back. I hate math, so I don’t care for him as a teacher much. He usually wears a sweater vest and weird 1950 glasses that squeeze his nose at the tip.

I stared at the Chapter...
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posted by EmzLovesCheryl
About me and my amazing best friend <3



Me and my best friend
My best friend and me,
We were always together
Inseperable あなた see.
Our imaginary games
Our funny little chats,
That special secret language
The 妖精 and the cats.
The way we always laughed
At every single thing,
The way we loved to dance
Dance and act and sing!

You were always my partner
In everything I did,
Always together
Just like twins they said.
You'd help me with my homework
You've always been clever,
And then I'd help あなた with your story
We'd imagine those kind of things together.
I could skip and hop and twirl around
And I always knew,
That...
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posted by mitchie19
1. L(デスノート) E T T E R
Dear Mariah,
I and your father are expecting to leave for the upcoming season.
Your father got accepted as a manager of a company in United States and I have to be there to guide him. If you’re wondering whose going to take care of あなた Norah will be there. She’ll be with あなた for a while. Don’t worry me and your father will call あなた to check on あなた and Norah okay? And expect us that we won’t be there in your graduation and we will always be there to support you. I left your emergency money によって the fridge and your money for expenses. Please save your money, we’ll use...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
How are the winners determined from the losers? Easy. Whoever gave in first.

And if no one gives in?

Giving in is often easier. But not the desirable choice.

Taylor tapped the glass coated floor. The tiny black droplet that bloomed on her forefinger fell with a soft plink on a 三角形 of glass below.

Taylor cautiously lifted the shard to the light. There it was. A small stain, barely the size of a pinhead, darkening the glass.

That's all I am. Just a flaw on an otherwise clear surface.

Just a flaw. A mistake that was never meant to be.

"I'm leaving," Taylor muttered to herself, getting back to her feet. She strode towards the corner, vanishing just as soon as the shadow fell over to embrace her slight form.

She closed her eyes and felt the end of her plait, fumbling with it until wove free.

She knew where she was going, if only this once.

But when she got there? She hadn't thought that far.
Chapter 1- Star
On a warm summers evening, (all that once upon a time thing makes me feel sick, I swear) the secret Hultimore 通り, ストリート was silent, with exceptions of course. The crunch of gravel under the feet of a lonely traveller was amiss.
The One.
People would do anything to be away from him. This man was different. He was the type of person that hated to be thought the same as anyone else so he made sure everyone knew he was different from every single being, he was most powerful. But that was about to change.
Carol Beech was expecting a baby in any minute. She was sat in a red armchair...
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書く A Screenplay For The First Time によって Nadia Jordan via FilmCourage.com.
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3 分 Rule Screenwriters Should Know によって Chapman Professor Dr. Connie ばさみ, せん断, 鋏 via FilmCourage.com.
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