トワイライト・シリーズ Article: Fell Apart Ch.4

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posted by DarkStranger

the funniest thing is, that I don't know why it took me so long to write this chapter. I didn't wanted to write today, but when I read all the comment's, I changed my mind. So... hope あなた like it :)
xxKatie

Still Edward POV (when Bella leaves)

It took two 秒 to understand what Bella said. And one 秒 to stand up and follow her.

The trees where merged, I saw only face on Bella, in front of me. My subconscious was playing with me. I could not understand what is real what is not.

I suddenly stopped. I took a deep breath, trying to smell Bella. But I only ワカサギ, 錬金術 animals, and their blood.

Panic took control of me.I tried to run to the opposite side, when to the right または left. Finally I found myself in meadow, kneeling and sobbing.

She was gone...

So was I ..

I feel myself slipping もっと見る and もっと見る every 秒 without her..I fell as though i am drowning in the inky black darkness that seams to strangle me.

I shut my eyes, I stop struggling, I let darkness overwhelm me.

I felt like shadow.. Empty..

"Edward?" I heard Alice voice, "What's wrong?" she panicked, "what's wrong?" I tried to speak, but nothing came out. "Answer me" she begged "I don't see anything.. what's wrong?"

Hard to answer the 質問 "What's wrong" when nothing is alright.

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The twlight Zone: part 13

posted by Edward_lover101

"What was that for?" I said.
"You look worried love. I thought that might calm あなた down."
"Well it worked. I'm always calmer when あなた are around." Just then Jacob walked though the door. He had a bundle of rose's in a clear vase. He was wearing a シャツ with a tie, and bluejeans. Edward looked at me.
"It's ok Edward. If I need あなた I'l call, just let me talk to him alone for a bit. I'll be ok."
Edward walked out of the room, I knew he didn't want to leave. Jacob walked over to the left side of the bed. He sat down in the chair.
"Hey Bella." Jacob sounded a little depresed.
"What's wrong Jacob?"
"It's....Just...

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The twilght Zone: part 11

posted by Edward_lover101

The last think I remeber was Edward and I waching Romo and Juliet. I woke up in the same hospitle bed, but in a differnt room. Where was I? I was in the Cullen's house last night. I had もっと見る tubes in me now. My ハート, 心 started to race. Then a cool hand touched my arm. I looked over and there was Edward. My ハート, 心 started to slow down.
"Where am I? How did i get here?"
"You in the hospitle, Bella. I carried あなた here."
"Why am I here?"
"Well...While あなた where asleep, あなたハート, 心 rate was really high. Your temp. was riseing, and あなた wouldn't wake up."
"What happend?"
"You had a heart-atack and, your liver...

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I think this should be Bellas' song in New Moon when Edward leaves her..

posted by Hellohoudini

"Stay With Me" - Danity Kane

[Verse 1]
Raindrops, Fall From, Everywhere
I Reach Out, For You, But Your Not There
So I Stood, Waiting, In The Dark
With Your Picture, In My Hands
Story Of a Broken Heart

[Chorus]
Stay With Me
Don't Let Me Go
Cause I Can't Be Without You
Just Stay With Me
And Hold Me Close
Because I've Built My World Around You
And I Don't Wanna Know What's It Like Without You
So Stay with Me
Just Stay With Me

[Verse 2]
I'm Trying And Hoping, For The Day
When my touch is enough
To Take The Pain Away
Cause I've Searched For So Long
The Answer Is Clear
We'll be OK if We Don't Let It Disappear

[Chorus]
Stay...

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reerce

posted by vampirelover17

Jacobs and bellas POV

It has been three days since we saw rachell what if she is dead ' i think it is edward he always looked like he would snap and do somthing' 'now jacob is a nice kid i dont think he would do somthing like this ' ring ring ring ' hello rachell is that u werer are あなた are u alright who is with あなた

Rachell's POV

dad iam fine no one is with me iam in alaska and iam not coming back あなた and mom dont need me あなた hace jenifer u will all be beter off with out me iam to dangeous to be with あなた i 愛あなた all very much by.

jenifres. POV

what were is rachell i was gone for 2 days and...

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The Other Way (Liz's POV) Ch. 12

posted by CharmedVamp101

I watched as the Cullen's gathered in a サークル, 円 and I sat down to wait. I watched their mouthes moving, but heard no sound come out. I wondered what they were talking about. I watched intently, trying to read their lips, but I failed.
"Are あなた ready,"Edward asked as he turned back to me.
"Ready as I'll ever be."
I couldn't wait to see what was myth and what was true.
"First Emmett and Rosalie, they will demonstrate our strength and how impenetrable we are. Only vampire teeth and werewolf teeth can cut through our skin."
Edward sat down beside me. Werewolf teeth? 狼男 exist? That was neat and...

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A NOTE FROM THE MAKER OF blood lust AND sotryteller AND bleed it out-sotyteller 2-

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

BUFFY FAITH ファン 1 ...
ALRIGHT, THANKS TO ALL THE ファン OUT THERE WHO just 愛 my two 本 that I started on here: BLOOD LUST, STORYTELLER, and BLEED IT OUT -STORYTELLER 2-: thanks for all of the WONDERFUL コメント and I'll be ready to write again...ONCE I stop this writers block! Its nothing major I can write right now if I want, but I just can't think of ANYTHING else to do with RACHEL, MILE, and KANDICE in STORYTELLER
or BELLA AND EDWARD AND THE GANG in BLOOD LUST!
so コメント me giving me ideas that connect with the last part of the 最近 chapter I published here! And maybe JUST MAYBE I'll...

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Alice's Journal Part 11

posted by just_bella

So for some wierd reason I have decided that 書く 3 stories sounds like fun. I'm not sure how long I will be able to keep them all up, but I'm gonna try :) Thanks for the comments!!
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Last time:

He came up to my father and shook his hand, he smiled at my mother and knelt down to say hello to Cynthia. When he came to me he seemed to look longer then he did with my sister.

"Mary, it is very nice to meet you. I have heard a few things from your father, and he thought that it might be a good idea if we had a conversation." He 発言しました in a jolly tone....

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The Other Way (Liz's POV) Ch. 10

posted by CharmedVamp101

We pulled up to the beautiful white house. I sat back in awe. Who had the ability to デザイン something so simple, yet so extravagant at the same time? Probably Esme. Edward had 発言しました his family was a lot like him, which meant they were ヴァンパイア too. They were all beautiful and pale skinned and had the eyes that changed from black to ゴールド to black again. I wonder what made their eyes change.
I thought back to the ride home. It had been very quiet, Edward watched me a lot, so I starred out the window, when I felt his gaze upon me.
We didn't say a lot, I answered the 質問 that Edward asked me,...

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The Other Way (Liz's POV) Ch. 8

posted by CharmedVamp101

As we waited to get on the plane, I couldn't help but notice the distracted look on Edward's face. He looked like he was thinking about something important, but also something painful.
His expression changed as we boarded the plane. He looked excited. But after we sat down he looked down and had that same distracted expression on his face.
"What's the matter?"
He looked at me. Deliberating.
"Just thinking about some things that are unimportant."
Unimportant? もっと見る like taking your thoughts and hiding them. He pulled the blind close.
"Why are あなた closing the blind?"
"One of things I want to...

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10 Ways to Annoy Rosalie Hale

posted by meeek

10. Tell her that, because everyone thinks she and Jasper are twins, they should get together. When she asks why, say that Incest is in at the moment.

9. Call her “Ice Queen” behind her back and to her face.

8. Whenever she argues anything, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”

7. Claim that being a human ain’t so great.

6. When she argues the above claim, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”

5. Try to exorcise her and her evil ways.

4. Tell everyone that Edward didn’t go to Italy because Rosalie 発言しました Bella was dead – he went to Italy because he envisioned Rosalie’s ugly face.

3. Call her...

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Erin: Chapter 8

posted by xxEmo92xx

"Ahhhh. Stop! Stop! It hurts!" I felt like I would scream myself to death. によって the time he was done, I had stopped screaming. The venom hurt so bad, but I wanted to prove to Sam I could handle it. My phone started ringing. Sam answered and hung back up, he knew it was Alice. "What-about-Daniella's-wedding-?" I 発言しました between breaths. "The venom lasts for three days, I'm sure it won't hurt as much. It will be like a pulsing in your neck." He said.
Edward rushed through the door. He looked very upset, but furious. Upset when he saw me lying on the bed, furious when he saw Sam leaning over me....

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Bleed It Out ChApTeR oNe!

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

----Chapter One: Cryin' Wont Help あなた Now!...----
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I looked out my window, and saw Rachel pull into the driveway. She hopped out, and ran inside just as hail started.
"Pretty good storm out there!" She 発言しました and I met her in the kitchen.
"Yeah!" I 発言しました and she looked at me.
"Okay Mile! Listen up. Kandice may be dead..." Racehel 発言しました and I grabbed her によって the throat.
"DONT say that!" I 発言しました and let her go. "Sorry!"
"She may be...but that doesn't mean あなた can't live your life with only yourself...who cares! I do and あなた do and I dont mean it like...

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Lust CHAPTER ELVEN!

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

CHAPTER ELVEN:
THE WIND BENEATH MY WINGS part two of two... _________________________________________________
I pulled into Edward's drive way, and parked the car. I got out, and smiled when I saw that his car and Jasper's car was in the garage. I then closed the car door, and walked to the front door. I raised my hand in a fist, and knocked on the door three time. I took in three breaths of air, and thats when I knew I was nervous. I heard someone coming to the door, and I was excited to see Edward. But when the door opened, it was Jasper.
"Bella? What are あなた doing here!?" He asked and I...

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Storyteller *^*CHAPTER thirteen*^*

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

We All Want The Same Thing!

(this is in KANDICE's Part Of View, after the symbol:---, then its in Mile's Poing Of View! ENJOY!)

S T O R Y T E L（デスノート） L（デスノート） E R
b y: B u f f y F a i t h f a n 1
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CHAPTER 13: The Desperate Kingdom Of Love...
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I looked at Mile, who was freeing himself, and then I looked back at Mandy who was surrendering. I then blinked twice, and pulled the trigger! The bullet flew out of the chamber, as I flinched at the sound of it, and I looked at Mandy. Her eyes widened for the quickest second, and she fell to the ground....

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Cliff Diving Continued

posted by Alice_President

Once again, constructive criticism is welcome <3

This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon, continued:

“Breathe!” A husky, anxiety filled voice barked at me. Water was pouring from my mouth, and the familiar jagged stones from the La Push ビーチ were digging into my back. A large rock slammed into my now upright upper back, directly between my shoulder blades. もっと見る water than I thought possible flew out of my mouth as I tried to breath. I could not obey the command. My lungs were burning.
“Breathe, Bella! C’mon!” I suddenly recognised...

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Alex' vamps, chapter 2

posted by Chrisztine

Okay guys, here's chapter 2. I hope あなた like it. Let me know!

Edward gave me a surprised look. No wonder, usually I’m not this ill-tempered. Guess my quota of happy was running low.
‘’Can we all just focus, please? There’s still danger out there.’’, Alice said, mildly exasperated.
‘’What do あなた want us to do, Alice?’’, Ryan said, in a soothing voice.
‘’Well for one thing concentrate on the matter at hand..’’, Alice trailed off.
‘’It’s off, it’s off, what else do あなた want?’’, I nearly screamed at her. I felt a wave of calmness go through me, and in the same...

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Kate's story 4

posted by reneesme15

Here is the 次 part in Kate's story hope あなた like it. If あなた have any ideas for the story plz leave me a コメント and i will try and add them in when possable. As always her thoughts are in italic. Enjoy.

I'm so nervous i'm meeting James' family for the first time, god i hope the like me. There's James, i didn't know what to wear so i went for the smart/casual look. So i'm wearing my white ブラウス with jeans and a waistcoat,it'll do. Gosh i wish he would stop beeping the horn. I grabed my bag off my bed, took one last look in the mirror and ran down the stairs two at a time. I got to the door...

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Go Dakota Fanning!

posted by bitten_byedward

I personal would like to just speak my mind. To all of あなた don't want her to be Jane, I guess I understand. But, I like Dakota Fanning. She's a great actress and I think she'd be great. Here are some reasons why I want he to be Jane.

1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.

2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)

3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).

4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.

Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.

If あなた don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if あなた think that, leave a コメント saying why または why not please!

Also, if あなた actually read this:

Thanks!

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Why we 愛 Edward and Bella.

posted by Twilighter109

1. He tells her to stay away from him.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his シャツ and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in 愛 with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He 鳩 her ホーム when she felt sick.

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MoonShine 4

posted by hayleyhoo

This is quite a long one...
He took a deep breath and started speaking slowly at first but then after a while with もっと見る confidence, “ My name is Kaleb, and my mother died saving my life as well, when my mother was pregnant with me she was ill and nearly died, she was left in the woods to die によって her village, while she was in the woods, a vampire and a werewolf who were hunting found her and they fought over who would get her, during the fight they both came into contact with her and caused me. Because of what I am my mother healed quickly and survived, the werewolf and vampire had killed each...