What do あなた think of this short speech I wrote?

Okay, so I was going through my 回答 on my プロフィール page and I came across this one answer I made. Someone asked me what I thought of the issue of child abuse, and I wrote a speech which I thought was pretty impressive (not to be stuck-up または anything, lol), but no one else answered and she never コメントしました to say if she agreed with me または liked it. So I decided to copy it, make a question, paste it here, and see if あなた guys like it.

Here it is;

I ABSOLUTELY DESPISE IT...
Child abuse is one of the most dispicable crimes in the world, in my opinion. Why would あなた want to harm a young, innocent child? No matter what he または she has done, they do not deserve to be abused. There is a thin but clear, definite line between punishment and abuse; spanking and put in a time-out chair または corner is suitable discipline, but beating a child with a cord, slamming them into walls, burning them with cigarettes, または even worse is ABUSE and nothing but ABUSE. Children deserve to live childhoods in peace and harmony. Our children should live in a world of happiness and love, not in a world filled with hurt and shame....

What do あなた think? :)