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Is this character a Mary-Sue?

He seems like he might be a Mary-Sue to me, so I was wondering what あなた all thought.

Name: Takumi

Age: 17

Gender: male

Looks: long, curly, purple hair, ice blue eyes

Personality: slutty, nice, shy, he's very affectionate since he never got very much affection when he was younger

Backstory: he had a normal childhood and good parents. When he was 14 he got a boyfriend. He kept it a secret from his parents since they were homophobic as well as most people in the place where he lived. When he was 15 he was raped によって his boyfriend and tried to leave him. His boyfriend didn't let him and abused him for a few months until Takumi's friend got him away from him.

If あなた need any もっと見る info let me know in the コメント and I'll tell you. Also please answer honestly, I want to improve him. Don't just say あなた don't like him though, because then I don't know how to fix him. Thank you!
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I changed his name from a Japanese name to a British name.
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
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または maybe it was Welsh...idk.
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
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Book-Freak said:
I'm not sure if he could be called a Gary-Stu, but I think there is a contradiction in the information あなた gave: あなた say he had a normal childhood and good parents but also that he didn't get much attention as a child... If they were good parents, wouldn't he have gotten enough attention?
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posted 1年以上前 
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Thanks! There were a few parts I skipped in the backstory, so that's why it contradicted the other parts.
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
egyptprincess7 said:
He's not a Gary-Stu from the looks of it. I don't understand though how his personality can be slutty? And あなた did contradict yourself in the backstory. Otherwise he's fine.
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posted 1年以上前 
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Thanks! Why can't slutty be in the personality?
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
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I mean it can be a personality trait but no were on this bio does it prove that he's slutty so it's no point in calling him slutty.
I-Luv-L posted 1年以上前
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Well I didn't mention it I guess, I meant to, but he actually does start sleeping with other men.
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
BlondLionEzel said:
He's not a Mary Sue
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posted 1年以上前 
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Thanks!
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
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Welcome :)
BlondLionEzel posted 1年以上前
neonClouds said:
"Name: Takumi"
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 "Name: Takumi"
posted 1年以上前 
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???
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
MineTurtle5 said:
Here, check out this link:

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It's really good for helping あなた know if your character is a Mary Sue/ Gary Stu. Also, あなた can check out this article. I've found it quite helpful:

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posted 1年以上前 
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Thanks! I'll check it out!
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
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You're welcome! :)
MineTurtle5 posted 1年以上前
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used it for al my characters, it was great! Thanks!
misscrazel posted 1年以上前
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You're welcome! :)
MineTurtle5 posted 1年以上前
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