Problem 1: You're asking for my honest opinion, and yet あなた say "plz dont be harsh", which leads me to believe that あなた are only asking for praise. 98% of the time that is the case with あなた kind of people.
Problem 2: "You kind of people" being the grammar fails. I'm incredibly hesitant to read any piece of 書く によって あなた because I'm doubtful that I'll actually be able to read it. (I can't stand txt tlk.)
Problem 3: "My Magical Life." No, does not capture my interest even slightly. It sounds like just another boring teenage novel written によって a naive daydreamer. Not that there's anything wrong with the latter, just the former.
