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The ocean

He gives me a smile,
he allows me to fly.
I’m flying like a bird,
free and placid.
He gives me a strength,
i give him my mind.
My ハート, 心 is full of his thoughts,
full of his brightness,
full of his silence.
But still,he’s like the ocean,
so deep and mysterious,
あなた can not find his soul
unless it finds you.
And i’m so メリダとおそろしの森 and such a coward
the same time,
i need him もっと見る and more,
and i’m scared,
oh i’m scared for he found my soul.
Don’t blind your eyes not to see,
don’t trap your mind not to feel.
Oh, i wish to touch his hair gently,
oh, i wish to calm in his embrace.
I want him to see it in my eyes,
to feel that my 愛
will never betray him,
and i want him to be what he is already,
himself.

 What do あなた think of this poem?
 irena83 posted 1年以上前
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CB4evaGiggles said:
haha, wow, i think its really good!
=D
great job!
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Thank you. :)
irena83 posted 1年以上前
torriebee said:
wow thats soo good~ あなた could have a cool slide 表示する while 読書 this haha
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lol Thanks sweetie. ♥
irena83 posted 1年以上前
Lovetreehill said:
Great one ! I 愛 it !
You're a good writer Irena, never give up ;)
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Thank あなた honey. I won't! :*
irena83 posted 1年以上前
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I hope that :)
Lovetreehill posted 1年以上前
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♥ ♥ ♥
irena83 posted 1年以上前
Spi_Kat_Penguin said:
I ♥ It, ...wow....I cant describe my feelings as im reading...Its very good...

-Spi
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Thank あなた so much. ♥
irena83 posted 1年以上前
RavenRox2 said:
that's amazing!! I 愛 it!! <333
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~ Thank you. ~
irena83 posted 1年以上前
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your welcome!! :]]
RavenRox2 posted 1年以上前
sugarsweet076 said:
i 愛 it!!! great job!!!
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:) Thanks. :)
irena83 posted 1年以上前
clanbillr said:
I'm not much of a poet but I like it!! It makes me think how very calm, but with a small ripple and then ruthless the ocean can be!!
Thank あなた for the poem!!!
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 I'm not much of a poet but I like it!! It makes me think how very calm, but with a small ripple and then ruthless the ocean can be!! Thank あなた for the poem!!!
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Aw thank you. :)
irena83 posted 1年以上前
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Oh yes, the ocean can be calm and ruthless the same time,mysterious.
irena83 posted 1年以上前
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Sure. I will. :)
irena83 posted 1年以上前
MrOrange16 said:
Its so beautiful! *sniff*
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Thank you. ;)
irena83 posted 1年以上前
heyitssmarsx3 said:
that's an excellent poem, good job!!
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Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted 1年以上前
gossiprincess said:
waw this is an awsum poem!=D
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jem_ said:
i enjoyed 読書 it, really raw and lovely :)
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thank you. ♥
irena83 posted 1年以上前
juicyjossy9 said:
Scared to be scarred... I've been there. Like many of us humans. あなた touched me right on the spot. Don't worry, it does not make me sad. To the contrary, it reminds me what makes my ハート, 心 beat, so blindly true and so human to be close to my emotions. Craving to 愛 and be loved によって a loved one is ALL THERE IS. Thanks for posting this. あなた make my day. If あなた don't mind, it will now be part of my "Treasures" book. jj9
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Thank あなた so much. ♥ Of course i don't mind,i'm delighted. ♥
irena83 posted 1年以上前
LunaShay said:
Its....beautiful :') if my モットー was big enough,i would put this on there!
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lol thanks. :)
irena83 posted 1年以上前
Pikafan32 said:
Are あなた gonna name all of them 'What do あなた think of this poem?'

No... just kidding

Anyways the real review

It was really good. One of your better works, but not the best. Have あなた ever tried a murder poem, または a happy one. I'm fine with the style あなた have now, but from experience I would have to say that it's easier to write your own genre if あなた try others.

- Re Re
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lol Yes you're right,it is easier to write your own genre. Well who knows, i might try something new. lol
irena83 posted 1年以上前
Mallory101 said:
愛 it! ♥
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thank you. :)
irena83 posted 1年以上前
gaby124 said:
your poem is so good i can´t find the words to describe it! If ur dream is to be a writer then あなた have a very good chance of being such a wonderful and amazing writer!!! keep on following ur dreams!! : )
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aw thank あなた so much and thanks for the support. ♥
irena83 posted 1年以上前
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