Courtney’s POV: “But I don’t want to be this monster!”I yelled at my sister, Jamie. “Well I don’t care what あなた think! You’re a vampire; I’m a vampire, deal with it!”Jamie yelled back. I rolled my eyes, grabbed my black sweatshirt, and stormed out of the house. I looked up at the sky and saw that it was night as I kept walking down the 通り, ストリート with my hands in my pockets. I’ve been a vampire for about 10 years. Jamie was the one who turned me into this thing. I was 17 years old and Jamie was 18. (Jamie’s ‘boyfriend’ turned her.) Jamie came up in my room with her fangs out then she turned me into a vampire. I’ve hated her ever since.
I came upon a gas station and leaned up against the brick wall. I stayed near the shadows and just watched people go in and out of the store. After a while, something surprised me. I saw a teenage guy pull in to get gas, but then he looked at me. How could he see me? (I was in the dark.) The teenager came up to me and said, “Hey.” The boy was a punk with blue eyes and he looked around my age when I got turned into a vampire. “Hi.”I said. “What’s your name?” he asked. “None of your business.”I said. “Nice name. I’m Duncan. So, what are あなた doing here?”Duncan asked. “I don’t know.”I said. “Well, do あなた have anywhere to go?”he asked. I just realized about going home. I can’t stay here tomorrow; and I most certainly did not want to go ホーム to Jamie. “No.”I said. “I’ve got an apartment, and it has an extra bedroom. Unless あなた have somewhere to be または go.”Duncan said. “You don’t even know my name and you’re letting me stay with you? Okay, I’ll go with you.”I 発言しました and started walking toward the car with him. I got into the passenger シート, 座席 and waited for Duncan to start the car. On the way to Duncan’s apartment, Duncan had the air conditioning on (Which I really didn’t get because it was winter). “I know it’s crazy to have the air conditioning on in winter. But if you’re cold, then I can turn it off.”Duncan 発言しました reaching for the off switch. “I’m fine. あなた can leave it on.”I 発言しました reaching to stop Duncan’s hand. Then our hands touched as I quickly jerked mine back. Duncan out his hands back on the wheel and said, “Your hands are freezing. Are あなた sure you’re not cold?”he said. I didn’t say anything until we got to Duncan’s apartment. When we came to the door, Duncan stood in front of it blocking my way. “We’re not going anywhere until あなた start talking.” Duncan said. “What are you? A cop?”I asked moving him out of the way and going inside. “That’s practically an insult. Why were your hands so cold?”Duncan asked again. I sighed and said, “The air conditioning was on during winter. Why wouldn’t I be cold?”I said. “Good night.”Duncan 発言しました and went into his bedroom and went to sleep. I went into my bedroom for the night and just layed there. The room was dark except for the moonlight shining through the blinds. After an hour, I was dozing in and out of sleep. And a couple 分 after that, I was completely asleep. I know that ヴァンパイア are supposed to sleep during the 日 and sleep all night, but since I haven’t eaten, the energy was practically draining from me. Then I thought of Duncan. I can’t eat him. I’m not a monster, I don’t eat people. I rolled over and looked at the clock. 8:00 a.m. Then I went back to a barely awake sleep. I heard the door open a few 分 later. I saw the shadowy figure through my eyelids. I knew it was Duncan as he was now right beside me. I opened my eyes and saw Duncan just looking at me. I looked at his neck and thought about just taking one bite. “What are あなた doing?”I asked looking at his eyes then back at his neck. “I was going to wake あなた up. あなた look hungry. I’ll make あなた breakfast.”Duncan said. “No thanks. I’ll find someone.”I 発言しました standing up. “What? Find someone? What do あなた mean?”Duncan asked. “There was no way I was gonna explain this one. Like Jamie says, a キッス helps everything.”I thought. Duncan and I were now standing centimeters away from each other. We looked into each other’s eyes and before it, we kissed. Vampire kisses make whoever あなた キッス forget everything. Our lips came apart as I walked away. The キッス only lasted for at least 1 second, so Duncan only forgot what happened in the last 5 minutes. Perfect. I walked into the キッチン as Duncan followed me. “So what were we talking about?”Duncan asked. I walked toward the door as Duncan still followed me. He pinned me against the front door and tried to キッス me again as I turned my head. I could feel Duncan’s breath and I could hear his heartbeat. Duncan was really warm. “Werewolf.” I 発言しました under my breath. “What? How do あなた know what I am?”Duncan asked. Now that I was up close to Duncan’s face. I looked at his eyes, his hair, and his lips. His hair was black with neon green streaks mixed with the rest of his hair. His eyes were the tealest of blue I’ve ever seen. And his lips were perfect. He leaned his head in and started キス my neck. “No, no, no. I can’t.”I 発言しました trying to push him off of me. I didn’t push him too hard but I also didn’t want him to stop. “Now you’re freezing again. Explain.”Duncan said. I could now feeling him breathing on my neck. His hot breath was what made me push him off of me. “What are you?” Duncan 発言しました backing off of me. “A vampire.”I 発言しました and left.
I came upon a gas station and leaned up against the brick wall. I stayed near the shadows and just watched people go in and out of the store. After a while, something surprised me. I saw a teenage guy pull in to get gas, but then he looked at me. How could he see me? (I was in the dark.) The teenager came up to me and said, “Hey.” The boy was a punk with blue eyes and he looked around my age when I got turned into a vampire. “Hi.”I said. “What’s your name?” he asked. “None of your business.”I said. “Nice name. I’m Duncan. So, what are あなた doing here?”Duncan asked. “I don’t know.”I said. “Well, do あなた have anywhere to go?”he asked. I just realized about going home. I can’t stay here tomorrow; and I most certainly did not want to go ホーム to Jamie. “No.”I said. “I’ve got an apartment, and it has an extra bedroom. Unless あなた have somewhere to be または go.”Duncan said. “You don’t even know my name and you’re letting me stay with you? Okay, I’ll go with you.”I 発言しました and started walking toward the car with him. I got into the passenger シート, 座席 and waited for Duncan to start the car. On the way to Duncan’s apartment, Duncan had the air conditioning on (Which I really didn’t get because it was winter). “I know it’s crazy to have the air conditioning on in winter. But if you’re cold, then I can turn it off.”Duncan 発言しました reaching for the off switch. “I’m fine. あなた can leave it on.”I 発言しました reaching to stop Duncan’s hand. Then our hands touched as I quickly jerked mine back. Duncan out his hands back on the wheel and said, “Your hands are freezing. Are あなた sure you’re not cold?”he said. I didn’t say anything until we got to Duncan’s apartment. When we came to the door, Duncan stood in front of it blocking my way. “We’re not going anywhere until あなた start talking.” Duncan said. “What are you? A cop?”I asked moving him out of the way and going inside. “That’s practically an insult. Why were your hands so cold?”Duncan asked again. I sighed and said, “The air conditioning was on during winter. Why wouldn’t I be cold?”I said. “Good night.”Duncan 発言しました and went into his bedroom and went to sleep. I went into my bedroom for the night and just layed there. The room was dark except for the moonlight shining through the blinds. After an hour, I was dozing in and out of sleep. And a couple 分 after that, I was completely asleep. I know that ヴァンパイア are supposed to sleep during the 日 and sleep all night, but since I haven’t eaten, the energy was practically draining from me. Then I thought of Duncan. I can’t eat him. I’m not a monster, I don’t eat people. I rolled over and looked at the clock. 8:00 a.m. Then I went back to a barely awake sleep. I heard the door open a few 分 later. I saw the shadowy figure through my eyelids. I knew it was Duncan as he was now right beside me. I opened my eyes and saw Duncan just looking at me. I looked at his neck and thought about just taking one bite. “What are あなた doing?”I asked looking at his eyes then back at his neck. “I was going to wake あなた up. あなた look hungry. I’ll make あなた breakfast.”Duncan said. “No thanks. I’ll find someone.”I 発言しました standing up. “What? Find someone? What do あなた mean?”Duncan asked. “There was no way I was gonna explain this one. Like Jamie says, a キッス helps everything.”I thought. Duncan and I were now standing centimeters away from each other. We looked into each other’s eyes and before it, we kissed. Vampire kisses make whoever あなた キッス forget everything. Our lips came apart as I walked away. The キッス only lasted for at least 1 second, so Duncan only forgot what happened in the last 5 minutes. Perfect. I walked into the キッチン as Duncan followed me. “So what were we talking about?”Duncan asked. I walked toward the door as Duncan still followed me. He pinned me against the front door and tried to キッス me again as I turned my head. I could feel Duncan’s breath and I could hear his heartbeat. Duncan was really warm. “Werewolf.” I 発言しました under my breath. “What? How do あなた know what I am?”Duncan asked. Now that I was up close to Duncan’s face. I looked at his eyes, his hair, and his lips. His hair was black with neon green streaks mixed with the rest of his hair. His eyes were the tealest of blue I’ve ever seen. And his lips were perfect. He leaned his head in and started キス my neck. “No, no, no. I can’t.”I 発言しました trying to push him off of me. I didn’t push him too hard but I also didn’t want him to stop. “Now you’re freezing again. Explain.”Duncan said. I could now feeling him breathing on my neck. His hot breath was what made me push him off of me. “What are you?” Duncan 発言しました backing off of me. “A vampire.”I 発言しました and left.
Okay I'm curious as to what あなた readers want.I only have 1 コメント for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient または if my story really sucks.I know most of あなた rpobably like it and don't コメント but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see コメント i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO あなた LIKE HER story is the most 人気 now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see もっと見る コメント about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see もっと見る コメント about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um こんにちは so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be フレンズ thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment もっと見る than フレンズ Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss
Narrators POV:
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do あなた Duncan Paine Take Courtney 花 to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do あなた Courtney 花 Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce あなた man and wife あなた may now キッス the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best 日 of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best 日 ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got ホーム they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched 映画 on cable.
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do あなた Duncan Paine Take Courtney 花 to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do あなた Courtney 花 Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce あなた man and wife あなた may now キッス the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best 日 of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best 日 ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got ホーム they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched 映画 on cable.
Okay; This.. May possibly sound wierd. But! It's kinda related. So.. I was 読書 Twilight. Then; All of the sudden... The 愛 三角形 popped into my mind. Do あなた know how Edward is protective, somewhat strict about Bella, and who she hangs out with? Well... Edward is like a male version of Courtney. then; Theres... Gwen. -_-. Gwen is layed back; Protective when she wants to be; and knows how to have fun. See? Jacob's a male version if Gwen—Not goth though. Then, Bella is a female version of Duncan. あなた see how in NewMoon; she got into tons of trouble? And; Thats how Duncan is.
Now.. What do ya think?
Now.. What do ya think?
Duncan`s POV:There was nothing to say.Courtney pulled her fangs back in and started to fastly walk away.I followed her."See.I am a monster."Courtney said."No あなた are not.So don`t say that."I 発言しました grabbing her によって the shoulders.She was cold,but I didn`t care cause I loved her.I`ve never loved a girl like Courtney.There was just something about her that made it alright.It felt good though."Thanks.But あなた don`t understand.I`m a killer."she said."I don`t care."I said.I bent my neck over."You don`t want this."Courtney said."I want you."I said."You are sure?"she asked."Yes."I said.Courtney`s fangs quickly came back out again and sank into my neck.