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posted by Rob_patt_fan
hey... so this is my new story... I don't like the other one! So... I started this one! don't forget 2 コメント and rate!

Something was missing. Something big, like my heart! I couldn't find it. I got up from my own screams. I couldn't breathe. He wasn't there to hold me in his cold hands. He wasn't there anymore. I doubted if he would ever come back. I was thinking of everything I could do to get to him. Tears came down of my face and dropped on my 枕 as I tried to stand up and go to the bathroom. Charlie was already downstairs so I hurried and made him breakfast. I didn't eat anything like the past 6 months and I could say that he was mad.

"Bella, I'm gonna send あなた home! That's it!"

I burst into tears as he 発言しました the words.

"But... あなた can't do this! あなた just can't..."

Subs didn't let me talk. Charlie was red and he was looking straight into my eyes.

"Bella, Renee can take good care of you! Honestly, everyday of this 6 months you're mopping around, doing everything but in face doing NOTHING!"

"He's gone! I know あなた liked him very much but isn't this too much?!"

I screamed:

"No... for your information DAD, it's NOT!"

I took my backpack and got out of the house. It was raining already. When I saw the clouds, I suddenly smiled. He liked the weather like this... I guess!

"Hey, Bella!"

Mike and Jessica called my name when I was getting out of my car.

"Did あなた study Math?! We have an exam!"

I nodded without thinking to math. We gave the test and then it was time for biology class. His シート, 座席 was empty.

After school, I went shopping for a pair of jeans. His お気に入り color was blue, so I wanted a pair of blue jeans.

I was on my way to ホーム when I saw Cullen's house road. I didn't know what to do. I didn't know if I would die there when I see their rooms empty. with no COLD ONES!

I turned around and decided to go home. I wanted to be strong. But... who was there for me to make me be strong for him?! As I went in my room I recognized something under the carpet of my room. I went closer and got the papers out from there. The タイトル was:

"Last part of me"
This was my first fanfic, I've been posting this story on my spot, but I want to see what some different ファン think of it.I only have 3 または 4 who actually read it so I'm not sure....please please comment.I need your opinion and If I'm bad just tell me, kay?

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Painful Memories
Chapter One



I was sitting at my vanity. I started brushing my long golden waves. I was preparing myself. I knew Edward would be ホーム soon. Charlie had Edward leave every night at a certain time. Of course Edward would just go back once Charlie was asleep. He chose to go to...
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posted by e2mma2weasle3
How to Add Emotion to a Story

1.    Understand キーワード または Key Phrases. Key Phrases are phrases in a story that triggers the waterworks. They are sentences that make people cry. Such as, a pet dies. あなた could write, "Goodbye, Old friend." A Key Phrase could also be an action. Such as, there are two pets. One pet dies. The other pet tries to sleep with the other one によって cuddling up to the dead body.

2.    Add a lot of relationship between the one who dies and another character, whether that is a human または an animal.

3.    Add comedy to the...
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posted by sapherequeen
*Sigh* Okay, this is the first piece of 書く I will ever share with anyone. Rarely does the idea of a poem ever enter my dark mind. But tonight, just two 分 ago, this one came to me, and I had to...write...it...down...


I’m aching here
I’m bleeding there

Pain strikes within
My every move

And there’s
Nothing
I Can
Do
To Make It
Stop

The tears roll down my face
And freeze there quickly
And stay until the time comes
Where they are no longer frozen
And begin to stream down again

My hurt was bottled up
But someone broke the bottle
And now it’s
Everywhere
And there’s nothing
I Can
Do
To Heal Myself

I’m...
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“Look at them, trying to figure it out. Trying to work out why a pure-blood has come to their school, Antiworld, huh? This could be fun”. There was a young man sitting on the 上, ページのトップへ of a gargoyle wearing a white シャツ with a black コート over it. His eyes where a light green with a black cat eye stroke through it. As the man stood up あなた saw that he had pitch black hair and his skin was white like paper. As あなた closed in on the man’s face あなた saw his eye drop a line of blood down his cheek, as if he was crying blood. The man looked up at the sun covering his face with his hand, he closed his...
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こんにちは guys! I just wrote this poem. I haven't written a poem in quite a while, maybe a year, and this one's an attempt to get back on the poem 書く path. Well hope あなた like it, and please, if possible, add a コメント saying what あなた think.

Me and Those

Ever noticed that in this life
Everyone wants あなた to do something,
または be something
That sometimes あなた don’t want to be?

They are those!
あなた know them!
あなた probably have those in your house.
They are those who expect あなた to take a path,
Even though,
Sometimes,
あなた don’t want to take.

They are those who expect あなた to be great,
Even though,
Sometimes,
あなた prefer to be small and humble.

But do あなた think,
For the slightest second,
That they care about that?
They don’t!

They are your parents,
Your grandparents,
Your Uncles and aunts,
That since あなた were born,
Came up with a path for あなた in life.

But know this,
And say it to yourself:
They are those, they matter,
But me is I,
And I’m the main character.
posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

She screams every time a police officer または strange nurse touches her. She refuses to hear them out. So, until further notice, she is staying in my apartment.

I glance at the clock in the waiting room. It's past midnight. Wow. Jamie and Ashleigh are asleep on a small green couch, with a receiving blanket draped over them. I pick them both up, since Kayla and I are free to leave, and we all walk outside to my car. Kayla opens the back door, and while I'm strapping the two little girls in, I signal for her to get in on the passenger side.

She's a broken person. あなた only need to look at her...
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posted by livethislifeup
It's harder to forgive than to forget,
vice-versa, either way, it's still a threat,
time passes, memory flashes,
you're rememberin'
thoughts are coming in
no way to escape it, its a no win.
drives あなた insane, あなた try to up your game,
tell yourself they'll regret it and they'll live in shame,
just cause they dragged your name,
across every damn lane,
and あなた got hurt every time, yeah あなた still in pain,
and it ain't the same, あなた all tense around them,
and もっと見る anger do あなた gain.
Deep down it's still hurtin' you
like every wound would,
it's like a throbbing cut
that keeps your eyes tight shut,
and あなた sound out...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

On Friday, Tia had picked me up to go shopping.

Tia was ecstatic; for what reason, I had no idea. Tia was like a hurricane, she jotted down my sizes on her hand and then took of through the store at a pace that should've set her path on fire.

"You look great in black, white, and blue," she muttered. I saved that for future reference; she obviously knew what she was doing. Plus I'd been told that each of those colours looked nice on me before.

She pulled me into a dressing room, pointed out which outfits to try out, and exited to let me change.

I pulled a scary-looking black ホルター neck...
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posted by fanfly
 Artwork によって me
Artwork by me
Who are あなた to judge?
Sitting right where あなた are
あなた have no claim on me

I know my own path
I am my own guide
あなた are nothing to me
No matter how あなた try

What do あなた care?
If I'm not doing it right
I'm not following you

I know my own path
I am my own guide
あなた don't know me
No matter how あなた try

Why are あなた here?
あなた know I don't want you
I told あなた to leave me

I am my own path
I know my own guide
あなた can't mold me
No matter how あなた try





Why do I feel compelled to write angsty poetry? I swear I'm not even that angsty. lol Oh well, I hope someone out there enjoys it.
posted by Epismatic
A whisper in the cavern that goes unheard,

and a glimmer in the sky that stays unnoticed,

like the start of a brand new life, at the peak

of a mountain never scaled, lies in wait.

It can't be moved によって any cosmic mover,

so no passing wind または fog will douse it.

Only your eyes can scratch out the image

または accept it, the light at the edge of your eyes.

Will あなた take hold of the key you're offered?

Stop 歌う of freedom; seek it instead?

To become a companion of the new

takes an ever expanding, soaring gaze.

But even によって taking one step forward,

によって placing one hand onto the mountain,

as the wind tugs gently at your back,

あなた will realize the cage has already been broken.
Your hair is long, wet, and wavy and clings to あなた as あなた rise from the lake. あなた get the sense that the water should be clearer. あなた don’t dwell on it though, distracted によって your own hair. あなた don’t remember it being so long. With every motion the string of beads and shells woven into your hair bobs gently with a clicking noise. あなた don’t realize that あなた are topless until your hair settles against your back. But あなた are not ashamed, there is a sense of liberation, あなた can better feel what the earth and the wind are telling あなた this way. If あなた could see behind you, あなた would know that...
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posted by pLaStIcSUNDAE
It's gray. It's always been so gray.

The beating ハート, 心 that searched for what it believed to be a forever, only to be led astray.

The beating ハート, 心 full of warm belief,

Now an iceberg of 苦い regret, the surface a shallow reflection of the depths that rest beneath.

The smiling mask distorts the image of the surface, betraying the eyes.

The rigid, cold structure reduced to a cube of ice.

A problem crippled and crumbled into "I'm fine."

If the eyes are windows to the soul, then these windows have been fogged and cracked.

If the eyes are the windows to the soul, then within these, behind the mist,...
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8 Elements Of The Nutshell Technique によって Jill Chamberlain via FilmCourage.com.
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PART 1- LETS HAVE A RANT

Hi. So yeah, from the タイトル I think you've gathered this story is about .... well let's just say a problematic 19 年 old struggling to find a meaning in life.

If you're a typical "Caucasian" you'll never understand the things we "brown people" have to face. Over-protective parents are just the start. The kinds of people are totally different. The type of "cheats", "betrayers", "heart-breakers".

Being born in a place 2% of the people worldwide knew is just the start of a slightly difficult life. For now, lemme just summarize my life for you. I'm a 19 年 old girl living...
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“Bow before oh bow before the Mistress of the Blade.”

She dances in shrouds of silk scarlet.

Heel over heel in spinning in time.

Fabric twisting ‘round her delicate ankles.

“Praise oh praise the Mistress of the Blade.”

The sword an extension of her graceful arm as she twirls it about in Mid-September air.

Crisp September air.

The blade slashes through leaves as they fall.

Hilt of ゴールド adorned in ruby and diamond.

Gleaming and glistening as it slides from her grasp. Wailing through that oh so crisp Mid-September air.

“Watch in wonder oh watch the Mistress of the Blade.”

By night she finds...
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THIS IS VERY URGENT AND NOT A JOKE! ALSO DON'T GOOF OFF!!!!

I really mean it! What would あなた be able to do if SOPA/TPP censors the internet? What would あなた be able to do if 書く fanfics and drawing fanarts become illegal? What would あなた do if it's illegal to do a cover of your お気に入り song on YouTube? What would あなた do if downloading things from the internet (music, movies, TV episodes, etc) became illegal? What would あなた do if SOPA/TPP wins the war and takes away internet freedom? Net Neutrality is already dead so far, we can't risk the freedom of internet...
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posted by ilu_rayray
 Liyah (me)
Liyah (me)
Aliyah-Me(18)
Alexus(18)
Jasmine(18)
Prince(18)
Roc(18)
Ray(18)

My pov
Wassup im Aliyah but あなた can call me liyah for short. I sing and im a backup dancer for mindless behavior with my two besties Alexus and Jasmine. I feel torn that prod left but ayyee Nobody knows this but i kinda like 線, レイ idk what it feels like to like someone bcus my dad always abused me and i never liked boys ever since but the past is gone and im living the life out in L.A.

Alexus pov
Hello im alexus but i perfer u call me lexi. I live with my sister ジャスミン and bestie liyah in L.A me and my sister been through alot our parents...
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November 5th 9,999,980 BC 6:01 A.M.
Mist wanders down a small deer trail through the woods. He pulls himself up onto a glistening 木, ツリー branch. He sees a small girl huddled on the ground. He jumps down and slowly approaches her.
He draws an arrow. The girl turns around.
'Who are you?' asks Mist.
'I am Amirell, daughter of Amerith,' she says. 'Now tell me, who are you?'
'I am Mist, son of Karellcia.' he says.
'I could help you,' says Amirell. 'I have 食 and water. if we rationed it we would have enough.'
'I shall not need a woman's help,' says Mist. 'tis easy to find 食 out here. If I killed...
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posted by jeweleryfan11
About:
Once i was having a 日 dream about this story. And it brang me to this. A story about AshleyxDamon.

Chapter 1: Sunset
Sitting in an oak tree,a young 13 年 old was 書く a letter to her father in Tokyo. He was doing research. Then her twin Austin came. "What are あなた doing here?," she asked. "I 愛 the sunset", Austin said. "That's why i'm here," Ashley said. They watched the beautiful sunset and went in they're vintage home. "Ashley who is the letter for,"Austin asked. " Dad," she answered. "Dinner あなた guys," there mother said. And they went inside.
Credit to breebree446
posted by EmilyMJFan910
Based on a short film によって EmilyMJFan910.

Sapphire was a normal girl. She was very happy with her life and saw herself as lucky. But she had one very special trait.
Sapphire loved to daydream.
She daydreamed every day, all 日 long. She dreamed about flying! Romance! Animals! Anything and everything. But mostly, she dreamed about changing into someone different. One 分 she was a mermaid, another she was a princess. One she was a celebrity, the other she was an adventurous horse rider. But sometimes, when Sapphire was dwelling in the deepest of her daydreams, she would get carried away, causing...
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