This is my first venture into any sort of ファン fiction so if あなた could leave a コメント telling me what to improve on that would be great. Thanks!
Forks High School isn't that big, I thought frantically. Miniscule, in fact, compared to my old school in Phoenix. Its ridiculous for me to get lost! As I groped for my schedule to try and figure out where Building 3 was, I internally tried to write this off as stress または hunger. PMS, even. But deep down I knew why I was so scatterbrained that particular morning. I scowled at the shining sun. Why did it have to come out at all? I knew I was being silly. Being away from Edward sometimes did that to me.
When I finally made my way to my シート, 座席 in Building 3, I plopped down and began doodling idly on the front of my notebook. I was interrupted from wondering whether または not Edward would be back that night によって a familiar voice.
"Hi Bella. Are あなた all right?"
"Yes, Mike...I'm fine. Thanks for asking."
"Hey, I noticed Edward was gone today. Are あなた doing anything--"
"All right. Today's topic for discussion is the Alfred Wegener theory of continental drift..." cut the teaher's voice through the suddenly thick atmosphere in the room.
I let the teacher's voice fade out while silently thanking him for saving me from a painfully embarassing discussion. I liked Mike, but sometimes it was so hard for him to realize that I had a boyfriend...that would eternally be superior to him. Poor little guy, I thought.
The rest of the 日 passed painfully slowly. I won't suffer あなた the specifics. When I got home, Charlie was still at the station. I popped some leftover lasagna in the microwave for a couple of 分 and then went upstairs to do my homework. Satisfied that I'sd eaten up a lot of time, I went downstairs to make a サラダ and was shocked to see that only half an 時 had passed. Grinding my teeth, I sat down to watch TV for another hour. Finally I heard Charlie's entry and started to get ディナー out on the table.
"Hi Bells. Sorry I'm a little late."
"That's fine, dad. I did my homework. How was your day?"
A crease appeared between his eyes. "Well...do あなた remember those gang killings in Seattle last year?"
A chill passed through me. I remembered better than most. "Yes..." I replied cautiously.
"It's happening again. This time closer to here. Same bizzare range of victims, same burned bodies..."
I almost dropped the lasagna pan. Numb with shock, I caught it before it hit the floor and put a hand on the counter to steady myself.
"Hey, don't be scared.It's not that big of a deal. Not nearly as many as before."
"I'm not scared. Just surprised," I lied.
We ate ディナー in silence. My head was whirling with emotion. Who was it? I could have reason to be happy. Maybe it was Senna, または Benjamin. At the same time, I was petrified. The Volturi had a good reason to be in the area: me. I ruminated on these questions, restless for Edward's arrival so I could ask him.
Forks High School isn't that big, I thought frantically. Miniscule, in fact, compared to my old school in Phoenix. Its ridiculous for me to get lost! As I groped for my schedule to try and figure out where Building 3 was, I internally tried to write this off as stress または hunger. PMS, even. But deep down I knew why I was so scatterbrained that particular morning. I scowled at the shining sun. Why did it have to come out at all? I knew I was being silly. Being away from Edward sometimes did that to me.
When I finally made my way to my シート, 座席 in Building 3, I plopped down and began doodling idly on the front of my notebook. I was interrupted from wondering whether または not Edward would be back that night によって a familiar voice.
"Hi Bella. Are あなた all right?"
"Yes, Mike...I'm fine. Thanks for asking."
"Hey, I noticed Edward was gone today. Are あなた doing anything--"
"All right. Today's topic for discussion is the Alfred Wegener theory of continental drift..." cut the teaher's voice through the suddenly thick atmosphere in the room.
I let the teacher's voice fade out while silently thanking him for saving me from a painfully embarassing discussion. I liked Mike, but sometimes it was so hard for him to realize that I had a boyfriend...that would eternally be superior to him. Poor little guy, I thought.
The rest of the 日 passed painfully slowly. I won't suffer あなた the specifics. When I got home, Charlie was still at the station. I popped some leftover lasagna in the microwave for a couple of 分 and then went upstairs to do my homework. Satisfied that I'sd eaten up a lot of time, I went downstairs to make a サラダ and was shocked to see that only half an 時 had passed. Grinding my teeth, I sat down to watch TV for another hour. Finally I heard Charlie's entry and started to get ディナー out on the table.
"Hi Bells. Sorry I'm a little late."
"That's fine, dad. I did my homework. How was your day?"
A crease appeared between his eyes. "Well...do あなた remember those gang killings in Seattle last year?"
A chill passed through me. I remembered better than most. "Yes..." I replied cautiously.
"It's happening again. This time closer to here. Same bizzare range of victims, same burned bodies..."
I almost dropped the lasagna pan. Numb with shock, I caught it before it hit the floor and put a hand on the counter to steady myself.
"Hey, don't be scared.It's not that big of a deal. Not nearly as many as before."
"I'm not scared. Just surprised," I lied.
We ate ディナー in silence. My head was whirling with emotion. Who was it? I could have reason to be happy. Maybe it was Senna, または Benjamin. At the same time, I was petrified. The Volturi had a good reason to be in the area: me. I ruminated on these questions, restless for Edward's arrival so I could ask him.
1.Erin is part of the Volturi, but she is half human-Spoiler!
2.not everything will be exactly like the books,it will be dramatized a little.
3.Erin is my best friend in real life, so I try to make her as realistic as possible.
4.This one is もっと見る about me:I don't like cussing in my stories because I don't cuss a lot in real life, but it makes my stories funnier,agree?
5.We might make a movie out of this when we are done-Spoiler!
6.Erin was telling me about one of her friends, Danie, and she might be in a few chapters-Spoiler!
7.Erin tries to kill Alice later in the story-Spoiler!
YOu know what my friend Adriana I got her this awesome Chritmas preasent it is a Twilight shrit that I got a the Willowbrick Mall (Also Adriana is obsesed with Twlight)
EDward took off his shirt.His abs were hawt.I then went under the covers.I then felt his cool skin agaisnt mine.
U sure Soph
yes
I felt it the sex of course
I then felt my neck being nibbled
Edward! damn that hurt
I the nsaw it wasn't edward
J-J-J James.
Oh don't worry 愛 あなた will be one of us
No where the hell is edward
well the volturi is dealing with the Cullens
I will kill you
Just give up あなた know tat it will spread
It's burns STOP IT IT BURNS.I then felt my death.
My ハート, 心 beat sronger than usual.I felt sclience.
ALl in my ハート, 心 was vengence on James on The Volturi Adn on the werewolves!....
U sure Soph
yes
I felt it the sex of course
I then felt my neck being nibbled
Edward! damn that hurt
I the nsaw it wasn't edward
J-J-J James.
Oh don't worry 愛 あなた will be one of us
No where the hell is edward
well the volturi is dealing with the Cullens
I will kill you
Just give up あなた know tat it will spread
It's burns STOP IT IT BURNS.I then felt my death.
My ハート, 心 beat sronger than usual.I felt sclience.
ALl in my ハート, 心 was vengence on James on The Volturi Adn on the werewolves!....
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward または jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she 発言しました when edward asked her,
" are あなた sure あなた made the right choice, i have never seen あなた in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she 発言しました when edward asked her,
" are あなた sure あなた made the right choice, i have never seen あなた in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
Here are some places where あなた can download some of the songs for the Twilight soundtrack:
Muse- Supermassive Black Hole
link
Paramore- Decode
link
Linkin Park- Leave out all the rest
link
Collective Soul- Tremble for my beloved
link
There's only a few, but they're free, and I don't know about everyone else but I really can't wait for the Twilight soundtrack to come out!
If あなた know any もっと見る places please add them below so other people can get them:)
Muse- Supermassive Black Hole
link
Paramore- Decode
link
Linkin Park- Leave out all the rest
link
Collective Soul- Tremble for my beloved
link
There's only a few, but they're free, and I don't know about everyone else but I really can't wait for the Twilight soundtrack to come out!
If あなた know any もっと見る places please add them below so other people can get them:)