Holy mother of ....! "looks at your art then mine" thats it! im done for! everyone is better then me! "Throws my pencil at the opposite wall" Im a failure TT^TT
The mouth is crooked, it should be もっと見る aline with the crevice under the nose, which is also slanted slightly. Both of which should be parallel with the arch of the chin, so looking at it from my pov it looks like her face is sliding slightly. But the shading is off to a good start あなた should 表示する もっと見る texture in the skin and shadow in the upper cheek bones. But the shape of the face is good, though I would use lighter lines so she would look もっと見る 3 dimensional. But over all it looks like your off to a good start!
posted １年以上前
thank you, I barely ever draw face (i maimly draw eyes) so this was a huge leap for me! but I'll definitely work on the facial features and the texturing as well. thank あなた for your feedback! it's greatly appreciated!
