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if this was on the back cover of a book, would u read it?

"the world didn't end in fire, though it was a daziling array of light...but it didn't go up in smoke. it did not freeze over, but it shown...it glistened 10,000 times もっと見る beautiful. no, the world....the earth and everything, everyone, on it....simply...desolved...desolved into a daziling dance of 星, つ星 dust of all the Colors(色) that made it plus 1,000 more..."
 zutaradragon posted 1年以上前
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KnougeChick said:
I wouldn't. Because the grammar is horrible, the spelling as well. And it really detracted from my understanding of it. I would if it was something like this, I might.

"The world didn't end in fire, though it was a dazzling array of light. But it never went up in smoke. It did't freeze over, but it did shine. It shone ten-thousand times もっと見る beautiful than a room filled with jewels, lights shining everywhere to further 表示する their beauty. No. The world. The earth and everything and everyone on it simply... Dissolved. Dissolved into a dazzling dance of 星, つ星 dust of all the Colors(色) that could be defined, as well as thousands more."

Based on what I understood from this, that's what I thought was trying to be said.

Though this might be もっと見る fitted to be a monologue of the main character. または the prologue. :33
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posted 1年以上前 
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it IS the prologue, but it would b on the bak cover. btw, my spell check is broke and i don't shive a git about my spelling または grammer on things like this.
zutaradragon posted 1年以上前
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I'm not attacking you. I'm trying to help you. And as a writer, myself, I've learned not to rely in spell check alone. Because あなた could have a sentence where you're trying to say: "They went to their house.", but あなた could accidentally type "They went to they're house." Which would be the wrong Their/They're/There. :33 または something as simple as "You're welcome." あなた might type "Your welcome." But that would be incorrect, because I don't own a welcome, right?
KnougeChick posted 1年以上前
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*Sigh* あなた keep using all these excuses. And usually あなた make up excuses because you're too lazy to do something. Such as editing. And it's so obvious あなた don't want critique on this. あなた just want people to 子鹿, フォーン all over it and 愛 it and say that it's amazing. あなた don't want help improving so あなた can become an even better writer.
KnougeChick posted 1年以上前
JadTheWolf said:
Wow that's beautiful. I would definitely read it!
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posted 1年以上前 
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thx!
zutaradragon posted 1年以上前
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no problem :)
JadTheWolf posted 1年以上前
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no problem :)
JadTheWolf posted 1年以上前
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