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what do あなた think of this poem?

this is my first but just tell like it is. if あなた hate it just tell me.


every time i look at あなた i makes me want too cry.

every time i look at あなた it makes me want too scream.

every time i look at あなた it makes me want too die.

every time i look at あなた it makes me think of あなた and her lastnight.


so what do あなた think should i wright more?
 lilred96 posted 1年以上前
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dustfinger said:
this is not a poem. its a song. make it a song. i like it so far.
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posted 1年以上前 
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ok thanks for answering ;)
lilred96 posted 1年以上前
Mela1994 said:
i like it, u should write more!!! :D

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posted 1年以上前 
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do あなた think people would read it?
lilred96 posted 1年以上前
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i would read it so yeah i think people would read it :)
Mela1994 posted 1年以上前
sweet_n_silly said:
like dustfinger I think it would be a good song. It's pretty darn good too. there's some spelling issues though. あなた definately should write more.
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posted 1年以上前 
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if u do decide to make it into a song, I could maybe write the 音楽 if u want
sweet_n_silly posted 1年以上前
peterslover said:
Awesome☺ Like they said, make it into a song☺
次 line could be:
every time I look at あなた I want to say goodbye
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posted 1年以上前 
TwilightSagaLdy said:
yeah its もっと見る of a song and its pretty good!!! and i think あなた should finish 書く it! i like it!!! =)
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posted 1年以上前 
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