Is this a good beginning of an IZ story?

It’s been a 年 since the Pak “accident” with the Almighty Tallest Purple. Maria became the Almighty Tallest about a 月 ago, and now, with nothing to do. Not much things have changed with Maria. When she became tallest, the only thing she’d give up is her third fingers. She wouldn’t even want a hover pad. Since nothing ever happened to Red, he’s still the tallest, but now with Maria によって his side. によって all this time, Zim still hadn’t figure out he’s not a real invader. He called every while または so, but much less then he did before Maria became tallest.