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Can あなた guys tell what do あなた think of it?

Call me wacko,call me " a weird one ",
i don't care,'cause あなた don't see...
あなた don't see the dept of my soul,
so call me what あなた want to...
When the sorrow tear my heart,
i hide my tears,i hide it from you,
'cause that's the way あなた can't see it,
the pain pulling me down and あなた don't feel
me the right way,the way i want...
Still the sorrow screams inside me,
that dark side of me あなた will never see,
あなた will never understand when i hush then
when i should say something,when i smile when i should cry...
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I don't like 詩 but well done!
Mrs-X posted １年以上前
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Thank you. :)
irena83 posted １年以上前
 irena83 posted １年以上前
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orangeturnip said:
a poem that sounds like a scream
a sadness inside ,
a message from your soul
a sad cry
but poems can be from the heart
can also be ...
from a position of empathy of anothers pain
either way i hope あなた can see
the sun is shineing (i wish looks likes its gonna storm)
any way i didn't want to write a short answer
i wanted to express that i loved it
but in doing so i
waffled and draged out my responce un neccercererly long and ロスト my sence of spelling with the pain of brain freezing numbness

any hoos

this is for あなた
♥
and dont break it.
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posted １年以上前 
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Thanks... I won't....
irena83 posted １年以上前
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awwwh.
CullenProperty posted １年以上前
life_rehab said:
this is nice. really. i read 詩 quite a lot and i'm a rather harsh critic but i do believe that this is pretty good. i mean, it's not Whitman または Shakespeare または whatever and you'll have to work hard and practise a lot to develop your talent, but this is 'you', あなた know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words and it is quite beautiful...if あなた polish it a little bit, it will be really good. nice job:)
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posted １年以上前 
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Thanks a lot...
irena83 posted １年以上前
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i hope あなた didn't mind my answer (i'm not sure if your コメント is sarcastic または not...). really, that's just what i think... nevertheless, i like the poem and it shows great potential but you'll see that if あなた keep writing, you'll definitely evolve, you'll get better with every poem -- again, this doesn't mean that i don't like it cause, well, actually i do. anyway, i also wanted to say that it's nice to see other young people interested in poetry:)
life_rehab posted １年以上前
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life_rehab; this ----> but this is 'you', あなた know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words ... IS BEAUTIFUL! oh em gee
CullenProperty posted １年以上前
Vixie79 said:
"you will never understand when i hush then"

I 愛 how あなた did this line, 愛 the word hush too. ♥♥♥
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posted １年以上前 
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:) ♥ thank you.
irena83 posted １年以上前
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lol
CB4evaGiggles posted １年以上前
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You're welcome hon ♥
Vixie79 posted １年以上前
CB4evaGiggles said:
wow, i think thats a really good, and about the soul poem, i like it!

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posted １年以上前 
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Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted １年以上前
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your welcome!! ur good!
CB4evaGiggles posted １年以上前
Pikafan32 said:
It's another beautiful accomplishment. Truly a fascinating write.
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aw thank あなた so much. :)
irena83 posted １年以上前
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:3 Your welcome
Pikafan32 posted １年以上前
clanbillr said:
Hi "irena83",
Thank あなた for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! あなた sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes 愛 is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!!
So your neither wacko または weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of あなた and keep letting them out!!!
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Hi "irena83", Thank あなた for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! あなた sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes 愛 is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!! So your neither wacko または weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of あなた and keep letting them out!!!
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Yes i agree with you,we all wear our disguises so those one's who can hurt our feelings easily can not see that. We try to cover that,our weakness.
irena83 posted １年以上前
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Thank あなた and yes they are deep, i can say a cry of my soul.
irena83 posted １年以上前
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We all have that same weakness inside of us!!!! I know it's your poem but we all cry in our souls!!!
clanbillr posted １年以上前
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Oh yes we do.
irena83 posted １年以上前
CullenProperty said:
Pretty. Are あなた 書く it from past experiences from someone that hurt あなた または just because あなた can?
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Well actually i wrote that from my personal experience. It did happen a long time ago, but i guess i didn't forget.
irena83 posted １年以上前
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On one hand it's funny that we can't seem to forget those things! But on the other hand it's great that we don't so we don't have to repeat and go through them all over again!!!
clanbillr posted １年以上前
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oh well, thats sadening & pretty cool at the same tim
CullenProperty posted １年以上前
NatyLy said:
I 愛 it! good job! :)
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:) Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted １年以上前
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