
No one's taken the challenge. Well, I'll start with this example:
"In a land of Myths and a Time of Magic, the future of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young man... Merlin
Arthur Pendragon, King of Camelot, Defender of the Realm, the Once and Future King stares grimly at the message crumpled in his hands. Carefully, he straightens out the fresh creases as he stays his anger. Again he reads the words scrawled upon the Ancient parchment but they remain unchanged. One or one hundred times, the writing is still the same and as clear as a cloudless sky on a mid summer’s day in Camelot. And, on this summer, the warm light of day sends a chill as cold as any in the darkest winter night. He knows that someone must die."
Banishment!
That is the thanks he got for all his years of service to the king and Camelot. He stares out the window and looks over the kingdom. Then, he packs his bag, and walks out of his room. He sees Gaius in flashbacks, the first time they met until the last. As he heads into the courtyard, he looks up at the palace balcony and remembers Uther address his subjects and peering shyly out of a window, his young vulnerable ward, Morgana.
Morgana? Merlin remembers her all too well. She was so beautiful, so kind. What happened to her? Why did she become evil? Could she not see the greater good?
And he? He was so young but now look! Once he was the boy-wizard and now he is a withered old man. His once mighty powers now a fragment of what had been.
As he walks down the streets, he remembers his first meeting with Arthur. He smiles remembering their duel with maces. The Prat, Merlin smirks, "and a Royal one." Then, he sees the stocks and remembers his first meeting with Gwen. He visits the lower town, passes Gwen's old home. He sees the Tavern and remembers Freya. How she was caged by the bounty hunter. Then, he walks out of the gates.
He continues his journey out of the city and walks across a few fields with tall grass and wild flowers. Then he passes a couple cows. He smiles and hears the wind in the distant mountains. And, he pauses in front of a Lake.
He says one word: "Freya."
He remembers her. His life. His love. He waits. No one appears. He is alone. She is gone. Dead. Killed. A victim of the reign of Uther. Dead by the hands of Arthur Pendragon!
He wipes away the tears. And, he remembers the scorn of Arthur and the KORT for his humble beginnings. Though some of them shared his rank in society, he was never accepted. While they advanced in rank and file, in prestige and honor, with his aid, before the king and people, he did not. His friends: gone.
A frown forms over his brow, a prayer utters from his lips as he calls forth the Blood Gods of the Old Religion: Taranis, Esus, and Teutates. The water boils as his voice fills with anger. He remembers the taunts, the humiliation, the isolation and the abandonment by those who dared call him friend.
Then, he remembers Gwen. In flashbacks he sees her advance from serving girl to Queen and how he remained Arthur's man servant. Her laughter echoes in his mind as her image fades. She is gone while bitterness fills the void. He has become the Sorrow of the Old Religion.
Merlin utters another prayer and the winds whip the trees. He calls forth the Maiden, the Mother, the Crone. And, Merlin raises his left hand in anger and bereavement, as lightning strikes and the sky darkens, Merlin smiles: He has become the Anger of the Old Religion.
He summons Morgana. Eldritch energy shoots from his Right hand. She crumples to the ground, a withered thing of flesh and bone, her beauty and life fled, her power is now his. Merlin smiles: He has become the Avenger of the Old Religion.
From the Lake, an arm rises. Then, the rest of the figure. It is Freya. He scowls. It is too late. From his Left hand the Magic burns what once was his true love. She screams as her powers are now joined to his.
Merlin shouts: "I shall have my revenge!"
Power courses through him. The Old Religion. Merlin smiles: He has become Emrys the Destroyer.
Then, he returns to Camelot... A fierce battle ensues but to no avail. All fall before the Wizard-King. Arthur is the last alive. He stares in horror at the man who was once his friend.
Arthur gasps, "Merlin! You have magic!"
"I was born with it," Merlin smirks. "And, I now have your kingdom! You over bearing toad!"
Merlin stands triumphant amidst the smoldering ruins, the once glorious city is now dead. He weeps, then a smile breaks out upon his lips and he summons the kings of the Earth. None dare stand against him. One by one, they bow before the Wizard King.
Merlin smiles: "Welcome to Albion!"
Arthur is the last. He bows and trembles before his new Master. Merlin is pleased...
Then, Merlin shakes the cobwebs out of his head. It's Friday, he is still in the stocks awaiting to be pelted. Just two days earlier he'd arrived in Camelot. Now, thanks to that Royal Prat, Merlin is paying the price for his release from the dungeons of Camelot. He hopes never to see Arthur ever again.
As he looks around to get his bearings, he sees a blurred figure before him and he hears a voice. It's soothing, like warm honey to a sore throat. As he focuses on the words, her image becomes clear. It is a young woman about his age.
"Hello, I'm Guinevere but most people call me Gwen..."
And, Merlin's world would change. He smiles taking her hand in friendship. He remembers and all is as it should be: Arthur is a young boy raised by his foster father Sir Ector; while Merlin remains an old man, the teacher and mentor of the once and future king.
THE END
So, that's one Gwen Quest with Gwen being the secondary character. Dark Merlin arises from the hate and anger of his years in Camelot but through the memory of her friendship Dark Merlin is defeated and Camelot becomes as it should be.
Corny?
Yes, but in the immortal words of Homer, the poet, during the Duel of Achilles and Aeneas.... uh, Hmmm... to paraphrase Homer (the Simpson): Well let's see you do better.
"In a land of Myths and a Time of Magic, the future of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young man... Merlin
Arthur Pendragon, King of Camelot, Defender of the Realm, the Once and Future King stares grimly at the message crumpled in his hands. Carefully, he straightens out the fresh creases as he stays his anger. Again he reads the words scrawled upon the Ancient parchment but they remain unchanged. One or one hundred times, the writing is still the same and as clear as a cloudless sky on a mid summer’s day in Camelot. And, on this summer, the warm light of day sends a chill as cold as any in the darkest winter night. He knows that someone must die."
Banishment!
That is the thanks he got for all his years of service to the king and Camelot. He stares out the window and looks over the kingdom. Then, he packs his bag, and walks out of his room. He sees Gaius in flashbacks, the first time they met until the last. As he heads into the courtyard, he looks up at the palace balcony and remembers Uther address his subjects and peering shyly out of a window, his young vulnerable ward, Morgana.
Morgana? Merlin remembers her all too well. She was so beautiful, so kind. What happened to her? Why did she become evil? Could she not see the greater good?
And he? He was so young but now look! Once he was the boy-wizard and now he is a withered old man. His once mighty powers now a fragment of what had been.
As he walks down the streets, he remembers his first meeting with Arthur. He smiles remembering their duel with maces. The Prat, Merlin smirks, "and a Royal one." Then, he sees the stocks and remembers his first meeting with Gwen. He visits the lower town, passes Gwen's old home. He sees the Tavern and remembers Freya. How she was caged by the bounty hunter. Then, he walks out of the gates.
He continues his journey out of the city and walks across a few fields with tall grass and wild flowers. Then he passes a couple cows. He smiles and hears the wind in the distant mountains. And, he pauses in front of a Lake.
He says one word: "Freya."
He remembers her. His life. His love. He waits. No one appears. He is alone. She is gone. Dead. Killed. A victim of the reign of Uther. Dead by the hands of Arthur Pendragon!
He wipes away the tears. And, he remembers the scorn of Arthur and the KORT for his humble beginnings. Though some of them shared his rank in society, he was never accepted. While they advanced in rank and file, in prestige and honor, with his aid, before the king and people, he did not. His friends: gone.
A frown forms over his brow, a prayer utters from his lips as he calls forth the Blood Gods of the Old Religion: Taranis, Esus, and Teutates. The water boils as his voice fills with anger. He remembers the taunts, the humiliation, the isolation and the abandonment by those who dared call him friend.
Then, he remembers Gwen. In flashbacks he sees her advance from serving girl to Queen and how he remained Arthur's man servant. Her laughter echoes in his mind as her image fades. She is gone while bitterness fills the void. He has become the Sorrow of the Old Religion.
Merlin utters another prayer and the winds whip the trees. He calls forth the Maiden, the Mother, the Crone. And, Merlin raises his left hand in anger and bereavement, as lightning strikes and the sky darkens, Merlin smiles: He has become the Anger of the Old Religion.
He summons Morgana. Eldritch energy shoots from his Right hand. She crumples to the ground, a withered thing of flesh and bone, her beauty and life fled, her power is now his. Merlin smiles: He has become the Avenger of the Old Religion.
From the Lake, an arm rises. Then, the rest of the figure. It is Freya. He scowls. It is too late. From his Left hand the Magic burns what once was his true love. She screams as her powers are now joined to his.
Merlin shouts: "I shall have my revenge!"
Power courses through him. The Old Religion. Merlin smiles: He has become Emrys the Destroyer.
Then, he returns to Camelot... A fierce battle ensues but to no avail. All fall before the Wizard-King. Arthur is the last alive. He stares in horror at the man who was once his friend.
Arthur gasps, "Merlin! You have magic!"
"I was born with it," Merlin smirks. "And, I now have your kingdom! You over bearing toad!"
Merlin stands triumphant amidst the smoldering ruins, the once glorious city is now dead. He weeps, then a smile breaks out upon his lips and he summons the kings of the Earth. None dare stand against him. One by one, they bow before the Wizard King.
Merlin smiles: "Welcome to Albion!"
Arthur is the last. He bows and trembles before his new Master. Merlin is pleased...
Then, Merlin shakes the cobwebs out of his head. It's Friday, he is still in the stocks awaiting to be pelted. Just two days earlier he'd arrived in Camelot. Now, thanks to that Royal Prat, Merlin is paying the price for his release from the dungeons of Camelot. He hopes never to see Arthur ever again.
As he looks around to get his bearings, he sees a blurred figure before him and he hears a voice. It's soothing, like warm honey to a sore throat. As he focuses on the words, her image becomes clear. It is a young woman about his age.
"Hello, I'm Guinevere but most people call me Gwen..."
And, Merlin's world would change. He smiles taking her hand in friendship. He remembers and all is as it should be: Arthur is a young boy raised by his foster father Sir Ector; while Merlin remains an old man, the teacher and mentor of the once and future king.
THE END
So, that's one Gwen Quest with Gwen being the secondary character. Dark Merlin arises from the hate and anger of his years in Camelot but through the memory of her friendship Dark Merlin is defeated and Camelot becomes as it should be.
Corny?
Yes, but in the immortal words of Homer, the poet, during the Duel of Achilles and Aeneas.... uh, Hmmm... to paraphrase Homer (the Simpson): Well let's see you do better.
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