I'm think of drawing a ファンタジー comic about four tenagers with element powers (fire, earth, ice, pyscic) and calling it The Spirit Angels. Any ideas for a different title? または suggestions for the storyline?
this idea sounds really cool. i would definetly read it but i dont think phycic fits in well. i think either do the normal elements(earth,water,wind,air) または simply make physic wind and keep ice(after all ice and water are pretty much the same thing) but in the end it's up to you. good luck with your book!
I think the name is AWESOME! and being pyscic is cool... but it doesnt fit with the others. あなた should have like 火災, 火 earth ice and...air. cuz 火災, 火 and ice. and earth and air. または somethin. idk.
posted １年以上前
but having a pyscic could make the plot really cool. so do it how あなた want!!! let the ideas flow and make it interesting, different. have fun
i agree.try to have fun and remember this is your story so あなた can do whatever あなた want. do what feels right to あなた and it will probably work out just fine.
Maybe あなた could have a phycic character predict something will happen または help them throughout the story. This is also a good way to meet the villain または bad guy and 移動する the story along.
I think of 書く a story about a マウス prince named Eric who tries to find もっと見る warriors to help him wim a war and he turns out having this amazing adventure with dragons, 妖精 and other mythical and madeup creatures.
why not have 5 instead of 4 and make them fire, water/ice, earth, air/wind, and have the 5th one be psychic または spirit? または あなた could even have the psychic/spirit one be their mentor/teacher または something btw: for a diff name how about The Element Angels? P.S. this sounds like a really good idea for a story, good luck! :3
iT IS NOT A GOOD IDEA TO HAVE a hero that has phycic.then there will be no surprises.Try 火災, 火 water earth and electrcity(ice is not an elemant). make it about a race against time for some power crystals because if the bad guy gets them fist the heros can never beat the viilian.
think the idea of the Story is very well done. I am recently 書く a story a bit similar, (bearly), All あなた need to do is keep the elements simple. Also if あなた can, make all the elements be able to combine in a way. It would make the Story have an effect on what elements can do combined.
u like アバター the last airbender, cuz that's what that 表示する is about, 2. well, kinda' anyway, what about something with some action? and what about air, spirit, and water? phychic would b mind, so i get that.
at the end it should turn out that phsycic is evil and the rest should have to deafeat him and boss. there eyes should glow when using there powers. fire:orange,ice:blue,earth:brown, and phsycic:red. a few people should die, and towns be destroyed for an "unknown reason"[phscic] just to make it exiting. oh and they should be girls.
posted １年以上前
i think it should be girls no offence to the guys i just think that girls are better in touch with the elements
あなた SHOULD MAKE THE CHARACTER WHO CONTROLS 火災, 火 VERY FIESTY AND AGRESSIVE THIS CHARACTER CAN ALSO HAVE A CRUSH ON ANOTHER CHARACTER AND TRIES ALOT OF BIZARRE THINGS TO GET HIS/HER ATTENTION
spirit 天使 are groovy, always aiding those who are in need of assistance,except there are the four elements earth,fire water wood. あなた can adapt with other powers,as it is your comic and as the writer goes anything i possible at the dawn of creation of such a masterpeice, good luck and may your speech bubbles be full of wit and ha he ho hi hu,pictures in black an white to help keep thew comic affordable to 公開する ,and to buy. later ;-]
