Your POV in the hospital's basement
i didnt know what to do except put my gun up and shoot hoping i hit the right person,then i kept my eyes closed,then i heard reid's voice "it's fine just a scrap i hugged him crying "i couldnt let him kill you" he squeezed me "i forgive you" then the sound of sirens filled our ears as we walked out the door,i had to get checked out for any other damage as they had carrol rested on the ベッド she saw me come over and smiled "thank you,i know i ロスト my family but あなた kept your promise"i held her hand "always a pleasure to serve" and i went over to hotch who was...

Okay so I wrote a ファン fiction and before i really 投稿されました it I wanted feedback because i don't want to end up having a bad story.
Well here it goes!

Chapter 1
Spencer Reid's Point of View :

It was 1:05 in the morning and Spencer had woken up with a cold sweat, apparently the case the team and him just had was pretty bad. It was about nine 年 old girls that were being raped and murdered in Anna, Texas with roughly a population of 1,225 people everyone is connected. Turns out a local forth grade teacher was targeting girls while in school, he then looked up the girls addresses in the school's...

>> I can tell あなた know, this is my 6:30 AM too much Criminal Minds idea.... It starts out as a kinda everyone story but it goes into a もっと見る of a Reid superhero, good guy, savior, person thing... I don't know. Well thanks for at least 読書 this and I hope あなた like the actual story. (* hoping あなた didn't kinda leave after 読書 this alone*)


JJ looked over the current unsolved crimes going on around the world, when one especially caught her eye. "Everyone into the briefing room," she spoke into her walkie-talkie. She walked straight into the briefing room, going to the front, JJ noticed...

**Based on Spencer Reid from Criminal Minds...**


Story is in Third Person::


1990- Las Vegas 3:01PM


The 日 was winding down to an end at Las Vegas High School. When Cynthia Moore ran up to twelve 年 old Spencer Reid in the library, 読書 a thick book- most kids in his grade (Seniors) couldn't even think about reading.


"Hey Spencer, Alexa Carter wants to see あなた behind the football house." She smiled, looking at him.

Alexa was easily the prettiest girl in school. Without giving it a 秒 thought, he followed Cynthia out of the としょうかん, ライブラリ and down the 丘, ヒル to the football house.


It's easy to say...

Chapter three - The エンジェル

I felt suddenly.. whole. Like Reid was my other half. He made me feel better about fainting. So as I sat here listening to him, laughing , smiling and talking with Reid.
"So あなた feel okay?" Reid asked me
"I have had better days and some even worse then this. So I guess so." I replyed
"Lily , Remember this. I will ALWAYS have your back. ALWAYS." He 発言しました to me .
"And I will always have yours. So I guess we are partners.." I laughed.
"Guess so." He started to laugh with me.
We stared into eachothers eyes.

When we got back I went into the folder and read the case. then everyone...

Jordan sat, staring at spencer through the window, hardly knowing that garcia was talking to her. without disturbing jordan's daydream, garcia focused her vision on what jordan was fixated on. realizing it was reid, she wanted to do a little snooping. when the team left for chicago for a case, she speed walked to jordan's office and picked up a little blue notebook on her 机, デスク and took it to her lair. What she saw was baffling. on EVERY page was 'mrs. spencer reid', または 'i 愛 reid'...and even a few drawings of reid. Garcia smiled with sinister delight, then put jordan's book back. Jordan liked...

Chapter two - Hostile Fears
A case came in the 次 日 and I was scared. My first case wasn't going to be easy. Reid explained the case and we went to go Investigate. I had to be in Reids car with REID driving and I almost got sick. "Lily your going to be fine. Your only going to be scared for a little bit then あなた will get use to it. Trust me. " He 発言しました looking back at me. Then in that moment , I knew we were going to be best friends. Reid told me to hold my breath because there was still a dead body at the scene. Then we both got out and waited for everyone else to get here.

I walked in first...

Your POV at the BAU
The case we got seemed difficult this time to me,since i was the last member to 登録する the BAU over 2 years 前 i felt the urge that i needed to prove myself because this time i get scared によって the place we were about to go,but i wanted to be here for a while so i tried to keep myself calm.Our case was local murders at the nearby hospital,sunshine memorial.The way it sounded sent chills down my spine,and left me shaking,truth was ive always had a fear of hospitals,felt like the people who are suppose to take care of あなた will soon turn on あなた and i was right,but my mind told me...

*********GARCIA'S*******

Garcia walked into her apartment after a 日付 with kevin. as soon as she crossed the threshold she felt really,REALLY cold. she dropped her 財布 and put on her 虹 pajamas. she wrapped herself in what seemed to be seven blankets. Not enough. she blasted the heat to 90 degrees. still freezing. she drank お茶, 紅茶 and ate hot soup...nada. Soon, she got used to the cold. then, she got a little warm. then, she slowly got hotter and hotter. she removed her blankets, turned the A-C to a comfy 30 degrees and had some ice cream. she only then realized that she had gone from freezing...