アルファ＆オメガ Article: why chapter 4

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posted by lonehumphrey

Please suscripe and tell me how I could get better によって the way this takes place the 次 morning after chapter3

When Humphrey woke up the 次 morining on the ソファー, ソファ
He saw Kate on the other side of the ソファー, ソファ sound asleep. Wow whisperd Humphrey your so beautiful but an aditude. He got up as slowly as he could but still he woke up Kate または so he thought. I heard what あなた発言しました Kate 発言しました what do あなた mean. When あなた発言しました I'm beautiful. Humphrey was emberrised so much あなた could see he was blushung through his fur. but I'm too old for あなた what do あなた mean your a little older then me but. Still its a no Humphrey walked away sad and still scared of yesterdays events.

When Nathan woke up he greeted Kate with a nice comferting head rub. Oh right there. When Humphrey saw Nathan he didn't notice his tail was between his legs. What's wrong Humphrey he 発言しました what oh nothing.Humphrey come here. Why? You'll see. So Humphrey walked to Nathan still scared Nathan picked Humphrey up and started petting him and playing with him when Kate noticed she joined in and they all stated playing around.
when they were done they covered nathans face with playful licks for a 秒 Humphrey liked Kate's toung on accident oh sorry Kate. Its ok she said.
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kateandme likes this

lonehumphrey Sorry for spelling mistakes and punch errors

MarvelousAlpha Great job, but here is a tip: When a character talks use the (") symbol. Example: "Hello how are you?" It makes it way easier for the reader to know what they are saying. Great article! :P

lonehumphrey Thanks its hard writing on a ipodand a kindle

kateandme I know what you mean i am using a DSIXL most of the time. i think the samething using the " " marks will help.

lonehumphrey K thanks for the advice I started it on the other chapters

kateandme np!