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just chapter 2 and beginning of Chapter 3...please coment on how あなた like it. thank you

Chapter 2

The guard shoved the key into the lock and opened the door. The room was dimly lit and my eyes had a hard time adjusting. Once they pushed me in, the door behind me slammed. Great alone with a bad light candle. But that's when I heard the whimper. I whirled, expecting to find a dog または something like that, but instead a boy with shaggy black hair sat in the corner. I stared at him until he glanced up. His eyes were a gentle brown; his features were soft unlike Griffins. The boy smiled. He still had that childish grin. I could easily tell he wasn’t that much older than me.

The boy suddenly stood making me jump. He had such a grace that it was freakish. I could tell that he wasn’t what I called normal. I cleared my throat
" h...h... hello. I... I... I'm Hayden. What I...I... Mean who are you?" the boy just looked at me and his grin got even bigger exposing canine teeth
"you smell good" little red flares went up in my brain. Anyone または thing that tells あなた that あなた smell good means that あなた should run.
" I beg your pardon?"
“I 発言しました あなた smell good. But different. You’re not from Vagan are you?"
I assumed that Vagan was the town または place that I was at.
"Uh... No I'm not. Are あなた a vampire?"
" oh heavens no!!! I would kill myself if I got turned into a leech!" after this he made a whimpering sound and then continued "I am a Half Wolf! And slightly proud of it" he paused "ok maybe I'm not but being the son of a Lycian has its perks."
"Your fathers a Lycian??"
" no my mother is a Lycian. If my father was a Lycian I would be fuzzier and もっと見る wolfish."
His voice wasn’t really a growl but it wasn’t high either. This boy または thing was apparently almost fully grown.
"The names Ziff. It's nice to meet あなた Hayden" he leapt up onto the 上, ページのトップへ bunk with out using the ladder. He aimed his nose at me and sucked in a gust of my sent and whimpered again.
"Yes あなた smell very good" again he breathed in and it snapped me. Hey, if あなた just got put into prison I think something that tiny would bug あなた too.
"Would あなた stop doing that! It's annoying!!"
Ziff dipped his head and I felt sorry for him
"I'm sorry it's kind of a habit"
"it's a habit that’s gotta be broken" Ziff nodded and mumbled
"a habit that's gotta be broken. Gotcha"
That's when I had an idea
"do あなた know a way out of here?" he had laid down facing the wall. He tilted his head slightly toward me.
"If I did, then would I be laying here?"
All my hopes were suddenly dashed.
"I guess not" I could hear the disappointed in my voice and he looked at me with his sad brown eyes.
“but I do have a plan" with that he smiled and I thought I saw his eyes flash a light red.
"So what is it?"
"What?"
"What’s this great plan?"
"Oh that"
"Yes THAT. I need to get out of here. My boyfriend is locked in one of these cells"
"Who’s your boyfriend? What is he?"
"My boyfriend is Griffin and he's..."
"A what? Lycain, troll, outsider, half-wolf, Sydren?" he paused and shivered "a Vampire?"
"You know about vampires?"
"Duh I know about vampires! I mean they ONLY rule the realm of Darken. That's no biggy. Really it's not" he cocked is head, peering down at me. From down here he did look like a wolf.
"Yes he's a vampire"
"I should have know によって the way あなた smelled"
"What’s that supposed to mean?"
"It means that あなた smell like and outsider AND a vampire. That's the sent that I couldn't pick up" I sighed and sank to the floor. Ziff looked at me with extreme concern.
"What’s the matter? Are あなた alright?" why would he care? He's a criminal
"Yes I'm fine. But what to あなた care?" he whimpered
"I-I-I don't know. I just do. I'm a caring person I guess"
I rolled my eyes "so are we gonna get out"
"Yes. I'll help あなた escape" I shook my head
"How do あなた know that I'm not going to double クロス you?"
"I don't. I'm just going to have to trust you.....Hayden" the way he 発言しました my name sounded like he was talking to his lover
"Well, sweet pea, do あなた want the 上, ページのトップへ bunk?"

Chapter 3
The 次 few weeks were close to hell. Ziff was overly friend and I actually started to warm up to him. I got used to the way he whined and whimpered and what pitch meant what emotion. He ate his 食 with his hands but always did it quietly. He usually spent his time in the corner behind the door または relaxing on the 上, ページのトップへ bunk which I let him have. He sometimes howls in his sleep, which is annoying. He curls up on his side kinda like a dog. I don't mind it just as long as he doesn’t pant and really act likes a dog.
The only problem is at night. He seems to get jittery if he's not asleep. He can't seem to sleep when the moon is shinning in our cell window. He sits at the window, staring out at the moon. While he's doing this he's humming または bouncing または both. He hums this song that sounds a lot like the lullaby Griffin sang to me only slightly different.
One night Ziff actually sang it in a deep majestic voice.

"Deep In the night, lies a loveless bird
The wolfs howl dies into the dread
Through nightfall, to the open field
Until the moon is high in sky
Pain and sorrow
Death and shade
All shall cry...
All shall.........die"
"That's sad, beautiful, but sad"
"My mother used to sing that to me. Believe it または not, Lycian’s can sing" I laughed
"Well あなた had to get your voice from somewhere"
"I'll take that as a complement. Thank you"
"Your welcome" he turned toward me and smiled his canine smile which made me smile. He smiled もっと見る then Griffin did.
"Crud"
"What?"
"We have to get out"
"Where’s the sudden rush coming from?"
"I've been away from ホーム for almost a month"
"Uh no あなた haven't"
"Yes I have"
"no... Time passes differently in the outside world"
"How differently?"
"Well let's say you've been here a complete month. あなた left your ホーム at 7:00 at night. You've been HERE a 月 but you've been GONE an hour"
"An hour?"
"Yep. That's kinda what I said" I stood
"My mother would still be worried" I was about to say something when the door opened reviling a guard.
"Ok. Miss, あなた need to come with me. If あなた don't fight, your death will be painless" DEATH?!?!
"She’s not going any where" Ziff stood in front of me
"Stand aside outcast"
"No"
"What"
"You heard me, no"
"You’ll regret that, dog" suddenly Ziff seemed to grow. I mean, he's already a head taller then me, but he became a head and a half. I saw the hair on the back on his neck stand up. I gasped as his nails grew into claws.
"She’s not going any where" he growled each word. I saw a fear flash across the guards face, quickly followed によって his poker face.
"Stand aside"
"And why would. I do that?" the guard brought a very good reason why. A gun. And yet people still rode on horses? What kind of place was this?
"I 発言しました move"
"No あなた 発言しました stand aside. Not to move" the guard rolled his eyes and Ziff used the distraction to his advantage and punched the man. The guard went flying out the door and into the wall, fell to the floor in a heap, presumed unconscious.
"GO Hayden!"
"What?" I could hear もっと見る guards coming. Crud もっと見る trouble
"I 発言しました GO!!" I didn't think and took off. I ducked into a hallway when I saw a group of guards
"There she is!! Get her!!"
"Crap" I ran at full speed, creeps reaching out their hands between the bars.
I finally found my escape, an empty doorway. I ducked inside, pulled the door to and slid the lock home. I sank to the floor against the door. I glanced around the room. It was some sort of office. The lights were off but I could make out a desk, shelves, and a chair. I listen and held my breath as feet drummed by. And Ziff found his way into my thoughts. I hope he's ok.
posted by Lore_Master
As the Hero awoke he found himself in a dark hallway "wha...what happened?" he thought to himself as he wondered aimlessly down the hallway trying to get his bareings, he saw a faint light flickering only for a moment giveing him only enough time to make out where he was "wait.... no it can't be." he 発言しました running down the hallway toward's the light, while he was running he noticed picture's of his family confirming exactly where he was "this couldn't be..... my old house burnt down 5 year's ago.." he 発言しました stopping to notice one of the door's open with barely any light barely any light comeing...
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The main characters' Profiles and about them.
Name:Miki Nakamura
Age:15
Gender: female
Creature:human
Height:167 cm. (5'6)
Skin:Peach
Blood type:AB
Hair Color:Blue (and purple, and pink, ect.)
Hairstyle:semi-long
Eyes:grey
About Me:A very unlucky girl. Her parents are most always overseas, and she has no grandparents, so she's always alone, she has フレンズ but she's always busy so she usually can't hang out with them except on holidays and weekends. she can cook and clean, so she maintain's her house fairly well. she's also very curious, which would explain why she found the box, that the male Neko -...
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The car crash changed my life. It changed so much, that i'm not even living anymore. I walk the earth as a kinderd-spirit. Dead, forever. I follow my family sometimes. At one stage they actually thought they had a マウス infestation. For the one hundredth time i'm sorry I broke your vase,Jannet. My daughter, she loves collecting china and other lovely trinkets and stuff like that. For a sixteen 年 old she does have a lot. But Mike on the other hand, he loves cars,wants to become a famous race car driver. I worry for him, making his dreams so young, I did too. And look where it got me! Dead in my husband's car right in front of my kids! Of course, that was many years ago. On the road to becoming a famous song writer.
posted by dawnisbeauty
Prologue
Randall regarded her with pride.His finest.Her skin was ebony-black,her eyes a sinister grey,hair pale,wintry white.She stared at him blankly,her tall,slender frame tense.Randall stroked her cheek and tucked a lock of her hair behind her ears.Lethal,she was.Designed to perfection for the task she was set.Despite the obvious arrogance in her gaze,he deemed her the best."Tell me,who are you?"he tested."Layla"she answered."And I?".
"Master."she said."Tell me,"he asked her,taking her large,clawed hands."how do あなた use these..assets?"."To serve Master."Randall smiled."Good'he said."Very Good indeed.""How do あなた do that,my lovely?"he purred.Her eys stared straight ahead."Kill"she whispered."Kill for Master"
Sun shining like a holy light. After getting out of the tent, I was welcomed によって such greenery and wildlife. Such green lush beauty in the glowing morning light made everything just pop and colorful. So many different shades of green and nature all around. I definitely didn't get this New York! The lush vegetation, the scenery, the little cute monkeys climbing around, it was like being in a zoo almost. I heard rustling in the bushes, and prepared myself for an animal attack. As soon as I saw my sister's ピンク テニス shoe pop out of the bushes, I was slightly relieved. The girls walked out of...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Rae speaks Irish again in the story but あなた wouldn't want the translation...but what she says fits her attitude.


Ask for translation at your own risk.
Or use your imagination.







Chapter 21



He ran towards the 納屋 where he heard Rae scream, hoping it was not a demon. If it was, his real self would be known. As he came closer to where she was he let out a huge sigh of relief. It wasn’t a demon but something else that was much もっと見る powerful.
Iah had come back but only in his 狼, オオカミ form and unfortunately was found によって a human who was standing 5 feet away and preparing herself to throw a large rock at...
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posted by DxCFan123
I shopped all over the mall. I even got some dresses. As I turned to thank the woman of the last store in the mall I hadnt shopped at, I smiled. She cringed and screamed. Then I realized why.

" Thank あなた maa'm. Great service!" "AAH! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!" "JULIE, CALM DOWN! あなた are scaring our customer!"

I am a monster. A vampire.

I got out of that store as fast as I could. I looked around to see if anyone was around the cemetery. Nope. Stepped inside. The world swirled around me until I was in my room. I put all my clothes in my closet. Ready for school. School. SCHOOL! I NEEDED TO SIGN UP! I...
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posted by r260897
When Zean woke up he found himself on his ベッド and everyone busy as usual. One of his best buddy Benjamin popularly known as Ben came to him and sat near Zean saying “you were so tired that あなた slept on the floor. Whats wrong with you?” “No, nothing.. I am alright.” He spoke this in such a hurry that could make anyone surprised. Ben looked at his eyes which were filled of confusion, Ben 発言しました “ ohk…if there is any problem just call me,, I am going I trust you..”. Ben stood and before leaving he looked back saying “ I really trust you”. This time Zean was unable to classify if...
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posted by Skitty_Love
Celeste's POV:

Since a long time ago, 30 years to be exact, wizards and witches have been mortal enemies. The wars. The discrimination. It would not stop. Thankfully now, it has settled down. That doesn't mean the hatred has stopped, it just means we witches make sure we don't go anywhere near wizards.

"Wha-BAM!" I sent a powerful charge into my hand. A neon オレンジ light fired at the object I held in my right hand. "Hahahaha! Perfect!" I cried. The sweet お茶, 紅茶 I had was now turned into a one of many healing potions. I sighed enlightened. "Another job well done, Celeste." I had to admit, I was a...
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Prologue
The Life of Amelia Grace



Mia Grace’s alarm clock rang shrilly in her ear that morning. Groaning, she rolled over, pounded the snooze button down and buried her face in the covers. She was barely able to get another few extra 分 of sleep before somebody ripped the covers off of her and a cheerful voice rang out, “Come on, Mia, you’re never going to get into eleventh grade によって sleeping all day!”
“That’d be an easy way to do it,” mumbled Mia, rubbing her eyes and stretching. When she opened her eyes a black haired man was looming over her, a stupid grin on his face.
“Geez,...
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 Baby Stroller
Baby Stroller
RightToys.In is the concern that always keeps itself busy in designing something innovative and trendy. After serving あなた with many intelligently crafted devices that were really great supporting stuffs for あなた while あなた were looking after your beloved baby, this time we have shifted our consideration towards the infant section. If あなた are a new age mother, certainly your visit to www.righttoys.in/items.asp?item=PramsStrollers_Toys_India_Online&cid=23&scat=224* is going to be a great purposeful one for you. Baby-sitting is no doubt a great pleasure to define your motherhood, but how...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 16






A loud noise woke Bone from his sleep. Becoming もっと見る alert he felt a sharp pain in his neck from laying his head over after falling asleep on his ショップ couch.
Opening one dry eye he could see Jax rustling around the ショップ benches and he appeared to have his shotgun strapped to his back and somehow he got some old work boots over his injured foot.
He looked like he was prepared for battle.
“The hell あなた doin’ preparin’ for war?” he said.
“No, goin’ huntin’. Koda hunting”
Bone was wide awake now.
“You are not going to kill my nephew,” he 発言しました forcefully stopping Jax in...
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posted by bunnibunnibaby
Jade Adams was making her way ホーム when she saw him. The dark haired kid everyone had been talking about earlier today was walking in the same direction she was. "Hey! You're the new kid in school right?" "Hn?" The boy turned around to face Jade, making her ハート, 心 skip a beat. He had to be one of the most strikingly beautiful people she had ever seen. He was pale, with onyx colored eyes, and jet black hair that hung over his eyes slightly. "H-hi. I'm Jade..." the poor girl was at a loss for words when he flashed his dazzling smile at her. "Hey, I'm Victor." She blushed slightly and readjusted her Slipknot tee over her black skinny jeans. "Soo... what road do あなた turn onto to get home?" "I turn onto Salem road, what about you?" Victor looked over at her again, scratching his head awkwardly. "Me too! Wanna walk ホーム together?" "Sure!" The blonde girl started walking ahead, leaving Victor o follow. "So, how do あなた like it here?"
posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 11

The dry hot air inside the ガレージ was almost unbearable and the smell of motor oil and tires wasn’t helping. Bone usually did not drink a can of ビール while in his ショップ but there were no customers and it was just too damn hot to do anything.

Dropping himself onto his ショップ ソファー, ソファ and cracked open his Miller Light; he closed his eyes to try and ignore the stuffy heat.
He remembered calling Koda’s house and left a message when no one answered. It was odd for no one to be ホーム but he shrugged it off.
Taking a long swig he didn’t realize how tired he felt from the heat as he started to...
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posted by Claudia4599
    We had been training for this moment since the apocalypse.

    Two years 前 a killer disease criss crossed the world. This disease killed people almost instantly. The people who were diagnosed died in a few horribly painful hours. Only a handful people survived. My twin sister, Victoria and I were one of those few people. Sadly, even our parents died of this disease. We were only twelve when it happened and I remember our parents begging on their deathbeds that we get the vaccine. The doctors would only give us the vaccine, not our parents.

    We...
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posted by sawfan13
The man quietly entered the apartment of his girlfriend. He so badly wanted her back into his arms. His obsession. His love. His target. He entered her bedroom, as she rested in. He crept over to her, stroking her long black hair as she slept. A shadow that was not his appeared. He backed away from the woman, as the shadow was a man. A man with dark wild hair. A man that growled like a lion, but yet somewhat like a wolf.

Someone came in. He was touching Lilith. I walked over to him. I looked at him and said,"What are あなた doing here? Leave my クイーン alone." "Look, man. I don't want any trouble....
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posted by HouseMindFreak
1st chapter: link

2nd chapter: link

3rd chapter: link

4th chapter: link



Chapter 5

Koda rode through the desert for what seemed like hours. The sun was starting to set in the West, making the sky bright オレンジ and pink. If he wasn’t so worked up over everything he would stop to enjoy the sunset but his mind was too preoccupied.

The wind started to get chilly and sky was getting darker so he decided he’d gone far enough and should stop for a rest.
Standing によって his bike he scanned the landscape looking for anything that could be used as shelter. The landscape was mostly dirt and weeds, nothing to...
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posted by jacob_lover5253
I really thought he was going to キッス me. Boy, was I wrong. I swear he was moving closer and closer but then suddenly he was on his feet pulling me up. I frowned but then put on a fake smile so he wouldn’t realize. ‘I really liked him but if I told him…’ I sighed as I thought to myself. We picked our stuff back up and I slipped hos shoes on and he didn’t complain. Nick carried my シャツ and shorts and handed me his short to throw on over my bathing suit. I smiled and gratefully put it on.

My mind was racing. Racing fast. Did he really just give me his shirt!? I wanted to jump up and...
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"He was soooo cute!" I told my firends. sad thing is, I can't even remember what he looks like. But something feels special about him. Something makes me feel like I shouldn't care....

I would never of thought I'd be waiting によって the phone. Most of the time i just think "Well if a guy doesn't want this, he can't have it." But something is amking me feel like I want him もっと見る than anyone else. Something is drawing me towards him. something makes me feel like if anyone's ハート, 心 will be broken it'll be mine. And I just met him! Wait....I don't even know his name!


While Luna was worried about that....
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The familiar obnoxious ring tone woke me up that morning. I was still groggy when I managed to slam my hand on it and grab it like a claw like in those games in the arcades.
"Hello?" I mumbled.
"Jamie, do あなた know what 日 it is?" My best friend Delilah asked anxiously on the other line. It sounded like I forgot something like I always did..
"Ummm Saturday?" I asked, not quite sure what was going on.
"Very funny, it's the total drama island cast auditions today HELLOO!!"
"That's today?!?!"
I shot out of bed, turing my phone's speaker on to catch the words, "They're allowing eight new teens into...
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