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posted by Elizabeth90luv
I, Stella Bonasera, criminologist from New York’s crime lab have to inform あなた that due to a severe medical problem I won’t be able to present on today’s court and testify against Antonio Vasquez, the primary suspect for Anne Blaire’s murder. Responsible for my absence is Mr. Vasquez, who shot me with a machine gun right outside the back entrance of the crime lab. The video of the security cameras can 確認 it.

As a matter of fact, I want to present through this letter all the evidence that I have collected with the help of my experienced team. I swear to the bible that I will tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but truth. For further information, the other crime investigators who are present on this court can answer all your questions.

On June’s 16th, a left arm was found in a rubbish bin on the east side of Central Park. At first place, the victim’s DNA didn’t have any hits in CODIS (Combined DNA Index System) and its fingerprints weren’t in IAFIS (Integrated Automated Fingerprint Identification System), so we weren’t able to identify the victim. The only thing that we were able to learn out of this arm was that it belonged to a white female. The other hand was found in a recycling bin in Chelsea University. Finally, after searching the whole building, the rest of the body was found in a cupboard inside the university’s library. The victim was identified immediately after finding its ID card in one of its pockets. The official cause of death according to the lab’s forensic surgeon was asphyxiation due to strangulation. The two arms were cut after the death of the young lady with a special chain saw. The defensive wounds and the bruises on the victim’s arms were post mortal too. Also, traces of saw dust were found on our crime scene and drops of blue paint were found on the vic’s clothing. However, any of our evidence indicated that the cupboard was the primary crime scene. In addition, some drops of paint were found in all the way from the library’s entrance to the cupboard. Also, the door’s lock was broken and all those evidence showed that the body was transferred to the library. After processing the evidence found, the team realized that only the “MNYL Furniture factory” was using the specific chain saw, paint and saw dust.

In the factory, everything was normal except for the president’s office, where drops of the victim’s blood were found, as well as the chain saw, perfectly cleaned but positive for blood. The president had a strong alibi, but on the chain saw, we found a fingerprint of our suspect, Antonio Vasquez. The security cameras can 確認 the fact that he was on the factory on 02:30, near the time of death. The security camera inside the president’s office confirms that our suspect met the vic but it was destroyed によって Mr. Vasquez, just before the victim was killed. The suspect was an employee in this factory, so he knew how to use this chain saw and as the family of the vic said, he was recently dating with the victim. The fingers of our suspect were a perfect match with the bruises on Anne’s neck. The dead body was transferred to the としょうかん, ライブラリ with a red truck which belonged to the suspect, that was found positive for blood. However, we couldn’t find out how the dead body was transferred to the cupboard without leaving any blood on the corridors of the library. One of the arms was found in the garbage bin and the other one in the Central Park, just because the killer wanted to trick the police. “Without a body there is no crime, so no punishment” 発言しました the suspect. Here in New York’s crime lab we take this as a confession.

I hope that my testimony will be helpful for the dispensation of justice. The 動画 from all the security cameras and all the evidence will be 与えられた to the court によって other crime scene investigators, who can 確認 what I have just 発言しました and of course they can answer to your questions.


Yours faithfully
Stella Bonasera
CSI:科学捜査班 Level 3
CSI:科学捜査班 Assistance Supervisor
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Chapter 1
Meet the Carrot-Tops

    A long, long time ago, in the 年 1850, there was a man によって the name of Sam Carrot-Top. He was a well educated man, slender in build and always wore a dusty old キャップ that covered his オレンジ hair and broken glasses. He was an honest and wealthy man, but あなた would never guess that he and his family were well off; he never showed his wealth または bragged about it. He used his money to help the poor and needy.
    His wife, Jane, was oh so beautiful, with lush red hair, a petite figure, and smooth, creamy pale skin. She loved all...
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The ancient white 狼, オオカミ sat, his thick, glossy 毛皮 covered his whole body, increasing in density around the neck and along the ridges of his back and in between his shoulder blades. His ruffled tail brushed casually against the ledge he placed himself, his head and shoulders slightly hunched as his head was lowered. His eyes blazed like a white hot halo, intense and depthless. His glorious and strong face, devoid of all emotion, stared down at the lifeless body that lay beneath the ledge, just at his feet.
My lover’s body, my husband, my partner in life lay limp and unmoving.
I kneeled before...
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posted by viju
I don’t know, I don’t know, what あなた mean
I just know, I just know, あなた ditch me
I just know, I just know, あなた hurt me
You hurt me!
I don’t want to know what あなた think
I just want to know why あなた made me think
I just know, I just know, あなた hurt me
You hurt me!

Hey you, runaway
I’ll take that way
Don’t あなた say
Don’t あなた follow me
Now あなた just do, what I want……..

I don’t know what あなた mean…..
I just know you’re so mean…….
I don’t want to think about it
I just want あなた to be never seen
I don’t know what あなた mean……..
I just know you’re so mean………
I don’t want to think about...
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posted by Free_Spirit
Me:Okay i wrote this short story after watching the lion king, and if あなた think i'm doing some sort of copy righting well... oh crap =). anyway please tell me what あなた think..and rate. Pretty pleaes, with cherries on top, smothered in chocolated, coated with sugar, sprinked with M&Ms topped off with whipped cream. Be warned, in my opinion its a sad story okay begin

TO FALL
Kila's POV
I was sure I felt a push but Marissa wouldn't do that. I mean even though our families didn't get along she wouldn't would she? We’re only eight, she wouldn’t murder me.
I screamed as I felt myself sliding...
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As I walked into the giant blob of bubbles, I couldnt help but think there was someone lurking beneath the bubbles. But still I proceeded.... I was actually started to get a little frightened & I wish I didnt have to turn off the stupid Hot tub machin to stop making the bubbles... If I hadnt left the party i thought i would have never had to go through this. The people at the party "had" to go out of control & put 5 gallons of bubbles in the Hot Tub. I thought of going back but there was no point. I was just being silly as usual & bein scared. All the other people from the party...
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posted by summerfrogs_bro
One 日 I was walking down the 通り, ストリート no one was there. I was scared I just kept walking I looked around the corner I felt a wisp of cold go down my back i looked around again because I knew there was something there I went ホーム and went to bed. I woke up the 次 morning I watched the window all morning I didn't care about school I was a loser anyway and the teachers hated me. I swear there was too many things wrong with me to go to school and my name is Raiden I know its so stupid is means thunder god in Japanese I mean it's so stupid but it was my great great great grandfather named me that...
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posted by Fangirl99
another monday,at waysway high school. Vanessa for hated school for mainly for 1 reason. susan.katie.ashlee.the meanest,popular,and prettiest girls in the school.they always taunt vanessa for being different. people thought ashe was different for her personality,but,that wasnt the only reason.
there was only one girl who didnt care if she was different.kylie.kylie was the smartest gilr in school,thats why she got made fun of. she was a nerd. though she had no braces,gloasses,or anything.in fact,vanessa thought kylie was prettier than susan,ashle,or katie.
People think they know vanessa,but,they dont,not yet. she had a very terrible,scary,and strange experiance.when あなた hear it,it may seem like a dream,but,its all true.its not a lie.its not a tall tale.its a true story. 100% true
this the satory of Vanessa Colorado.
The four of them started walking straight ahead, if this was a large creature you’d think あなた could spot the thing. Grito 発言しました they can be quite the handful and we can’t kill it, just capture it. “See anything yet?” Opal Asked. “Grass, lots and lots of grass” Marley Answered. After giving Marley an evil look, they continued through the field. Little did they know, this field, was no normal flied. “It’s about time, right?” Parvulo Asked. As Grito washed his face, he answered “Yeah, the field will break apart soon”. Just after Grito spoke the ground shook. “What was that?...
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We have to distrust each other. It is our only defence against betrayal.

Tayce’s p.o.v

The rest of the 日 was just as devastating at the morning. The poor juniors didn’t get to train today for obvious reasons; I sighed and sat down 次 to Justin on the couch. His head was still stuck in paperwork of this all. He put the paper down and looked to me. “How do あなた feel?” he asked, I laughed and then rolled my eyes. He wasn’t saying the right thing but it was sweet. “Like crap, I feel like the floor has been ripped from under me” I told him, he smiled and put his hand on 上, ページのトップへ of mine....
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 We're all human.
We're all human.
A/N: This is not much my type of 書く style, but I'm going to try it out. Hope あなた like it. Please rate !

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This is a new day, a fine clear sky

Trades the sun to mock our sight

With these eyes, I see no blue



He’s clutching my arm, and yelling

Yelling what? I don’t know

But I’m falling, we’re falling

Falling into a hole, digging our my souls up

For someone else to find

If this is what I get for having one

I don’t want it anymore



And there are rose-less thorns

Biting my hand,

It hurts, and I’m crying

You’re hurt, and you’re dying

I don’t know...
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My passport seemed to be taking so long to be ready. And Ema’s cousin seemed to be taken によって the beauty and charm in Europe. I had a life that didn’t mean anything, sleep, eat, and drink. Not even working. It’s been two weeks since I’m in Robert’s house. Ema visited me whenever she could. I didn’t dare to walk two steps after the front door of the house または the 次 thing I’d be seeing is me on the ground, my hands behind my head and taken to prison to spend probably the rest of my life in it.
Among everything I didn’t have the slightest feeling of guilt. I thought I was right...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

Kayla was raped in her own house.

What's more, her dad is reported to have committed suicide. Before he even heard that his own daughter needed him.

When I was little, I always had the blind faith in my mom. That she would always know which way to turn on the road. That if we got lost, everything would be fine.

That she would never desert me. Like Kayla's father has.

The girl is slumped against the wall, crying. You'd think that you'd eventually run out of tears, but あなた don't. It's just that, after a while, maybe あなた just don't have the strength to carry on any more.

あなた can dry up the tears あなた see, but あなた can never dry up the tears your ハート, 心 sheds. Because when あなた cry, your ハート, 心 gives up a little piece of itself that will always grieve. Always. I have every reason to know.

I put my hand on her shoulder, and she doesn't shake it off.
posted by BiteMeCullen107
I could hear the TV on and I could smell the coffee. I wasn’t sure if I was dreaming または if I was just hallucinating over the fact that the man that has been stalking me, for what seems like my whole life, was in my apartment.
    I must be dreaming, my subconscious must have heard the TV on and brought that thought into my dream along with the coffee I made yesterday morning it must still be stuck in the air and did the same to my dream.
    I stretched my muscles, I was really stiff. It must have been because I got a lot of exercise yesterday at the...
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This is the other version I thought of. Honestly I like the other one better but it's good to think of two versions for a chapter. I think this version is shorter because I didn't want them to have the same dialogue.

I drag Elliot outside with such great force that he almost ran into me outside. I stop and let go with his arm
"What the hell was that all about? What is wrong with you?" I demand glaring at him
"Wrong with me? What is wrong with you?" he damands
"What do あなた mean?"
"I saw あなた in there drooling over serge like he was a plate of nachos,"
"Yeah so? I like him and he likes me....
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“There あなた are, man” 発言しました Marley. Opal had blood dripping from her mouth; her eyes were shining red as the shadows off the 木, ツリー darken her whole body. “Looks like we’re all done here, let’s 移動する out before they wake up” 発言しました Alec. Later on while Marley was lying on his bed, the same thought came across his mind, should the others know about their secret. “Marley, someone’s here for you” 発言しました Marley’s mum. “Hey man””It’s us”. This is Lindsay and Slone Sudiro (Lindsay 14, Slone 12) Lindsay level is higher than Opals, Slone’s is no better than Nathan’s. They are...
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Why Bother To Write If No One Is Ever Going To Read It - Tony DuShane via FilmCourage.com.
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Why The Audience Hates Bad Dialogue - John Vorhaus via FilmCourage.com.
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How To Be A Lazy Writer And Still Get Work Done - Charla Lauriston via FilmCourage.com.
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This Is One Screenwriting Lesson I Learned 20 Years Too Late - Tom O'Brien via FilmCourage.com.
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The Best 日 Of My Life (1 of Them)

I was at my uncle's house, waiting for my mom to come back. She was picking up my siblings from school. I was 4 yours old at the time. I was in my uncle's bedroom, as usual. And I was talking to him, as usual.

"Will, who's stuffed 動物 are on the bed?" I asked curiously. Of course that was a stupid question, but remember I was just a little girl. And I wasn't the brightest one eithier. My uncle spun around in his spinning chair and looked at me. "Mine. Why?" he had the nerve to ask. My uncle was the type of man that would give あなた the world if he could....
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