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how does this part of my story sound
Here it is “Alia honey, time for breakfast!” Mrs. Penrose, Alia’s mother interrupted as she slightly opened her door. “Ok mom” Alia said. She turned toward her new friends. “Let’s go”. “Fine, but can we take the elevator this time?” asked Kylie. “Sure” Alia said. They headed toward the elevator. “Where あなた going” 発言しました a ランダム voice out of no were. The three フレンズ turned around it was Alia’s older sister Amelia, but they called her Amy for short. She was tall. She had long blond hair like their mom’s.
“We’re going to breakfast” Alia answered. “Me too” Amy 発言しました as she rushed toward the elevator. She went in and the doors closed before they could get in. “Well I guess we have to wait, because the other elevators are broken” Kylie 発言しました as she put her hands on her skinny hips.
The big, silvery elevator finally came up. The three people jumped in and their イヌ followed them. “Ok the キッチン is on the 秒 floor” Alia told Daniel. Daniel went toward the big brown buttons. “Ok” Daniel 発言しました “Wait, what’s this button?” he asked as his figure went toward it. “No don’t push it!” Alia and Kylie 発言しました in unison. But it was too late. Daniel pressed the button and the elevator went downward. Kylie and Alia glared at Daniel. The elevator was still moving down rapidly. “Sorry” Daniel said. The elevator finally came to a halt.
The doors of the elevator swung open. The three walked in slowly curious on what was in that room.”This place is really dusty” Kylie said. She took out her special handkerchief from her bag and began wiping at some dirt. Suddenly they heard a whimper, it was Alia’s dog, and she heard something. Then the ground began to shake. The ground began clanking. The dust lingered of the walls of the gigantic room. Without warning, the room was covered with unwanted fog. They couldn’t see a thing. Finally, the fog cleared, the walls looked brand new but the floor was covered in a du
“We’re going to breakfast” Alia answered. “Me too” Amy 発言しました as she rushed toward the elevator. She went in and the doors closed before they could get in. “Well I guess we have to wait, because the other elevators are broken” Kylie 発言しました as she put her hands on her skinny hips.
The big, silvery elevator finally came up. The three people jumped in and their イヌ followed them. “Ok the キッチン is on the 秒 floor” Alia told Daniel. Daniel went toward the big brown buttons. “Ok” Daniel 発言しました “Wait, what’s this button?” he asked as his figure went toward it. “No don’t push it!” Alia and Kylie 発言しました in unison. But it was too late. Daniel pressed the button and the elevator went downward. Kylie and Alia glared at Daniel. The elevator was still moving down rapidly. “Sorry” Daniel said. The elevator finally came to a halt.
The doors of the elevator swung open. The three walked in slowly curious on what was in that room.”This place is really dusty” Kylie said. She took out her special handkerchief from her bag and began wiping at some dirt. Suddenly they heard a whimper, it was Alia’s dog, and she heard something. Then the ground began to shake. The ground began clanking. The dust lingered of the walls of the gigantic room. Without warning, the room was covered with unwanted fog. They couldn’t see a thing. Finally, the fog cleared, the walls looked brand new but the floor was covered in a du
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