I need help beginning my story! please

I have an idea for my story and i think a got a beginning sentence but it doesn't seem right. I don't think it is grabbing enough but this is it how does it sound?

On a mysterious, windy, fall day, four special girls, got a special gift. Then the whole world went wonky.

But after that sentence i have someone talk so do あなた think its good give me tips on how to fix it if it is bad. Thanks for 読書 and helping me!