Can someone help me with two character names, a title, and is the plot good enough?

I'm planning on 書く a story folks, but I just need help on two character names and a title, along with your judgement on the storyline. I'll tell あなた in the コメント once I get suggested a good タイトル または come up with one myself. It's mainly the characters and storyline judgement.

First the storyline/plot:

The story is set in the future and is about the main character who's a male. In the future attempts to clone humans is strictly illegal. But in the isolated countryside, people built a building called the Clone Hold to hide away any human clones created. The main character is one of them, his only フレンズ being most of the other clones his age (which there is few of), his bestest friend being a female clone. However it turns out that there's もっと見る to his creation process than at first glance, so with his friend he manages to escape and starts searching for the original and for answers, whilst trying to avoid being caught and reeled back in によって the Clone Hold. And maybe their adventure might lead to them wanting もっと見る than just what they were originally searching for.

Now the characters, which are the two タイトル characters:

The male main is the most intelligent and likes being around his much loved technology, though usually a little quiet, and doesn't answer back straight away. However he is quite highly curious, though he normally trys to let his common sense judge whether または not should his curiousity lead him somewhere. Somewhat level-headed and sensible, though he does lose his temper quite easily in もっと見る difficult situations.

The main female is also highly curious, but much もっと見る chattier compared to the other main, and unlike the male main, let's her curiousity go first, and doesn't have that much of a common sense. However she's been outside the Clone Hold longer than the male main, so knows slightly もっと見る about the outside world. She's also very helpful, but is quite childish and ditzy to a degree, however she lacks temper, but rather has a large
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gravity12 posted 1年以上前
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the rest is supposed to say she gets worried and anxious easily in difficult situations
gravity12 posted 1年以上前
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There we go!!! Thanx for da help ppl
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emiehs96 said:
Well,I really like the plot. It's unique and sounds very interesting. I would read it. And as for names...

male:
Ace
Benedict
Clarence

female:
Jada
Aaliyah
Adrina
Arabela

And for the title,you can just call it The Clone Hold. Hope I helped!
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posted 1年以上前 
Silverain said:
Main Male Name:
"Thom" short for Thomas which means-'twin'
"Vitus" means-'life'
"Thaddeus" means-'heart'

Main Female Name:
"SÄDE" pronounced (SADIE) means-'ray of light'
"Blythe" means-'cheerful'
"Pandora" means-'all gifts'

Hope this helps :) When I think of a good タイトル I'll let あなた know!
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posted 1年以上前 
sapherequeen said:
Male:
Aiden
Jace
Chase
Chance (This could correspond with his being a clone and having a purpose of something)
Jared
Joel
Julian
Julius
Zander

Female:
Hannah
Anna
Annie
Jolie
Lindsay
Ruby
Rue
Kailey
Willow
Willabelle
Sadie
Sofie
Chloe
Clarissa ('Claire' または 'Riss' as nicknames). =)
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posted 1年以上前 
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And I'm sorry, I'm bad with titles, so couldn't help for there. xD
sapherequeen posted 1年以上前
shomill said:
My type of story!!!

The Clone Hold would be a great title.

Male: Logan, Brandon, Brian, Matthew, Jason
Female: Cynthie, Linda, Britney, Marsha, Susan, Megan
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posted 1年以上前 
forksandspoons said:
for the タイトル something along the lines of "double vision"
Male: Zachary
Female: Liza
idk i just this may help
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posted 1年以上前 
I_DONT-KNOW said:
well for the male i would use caleb which means bold/protector of man.

the girl i would say astrid which means devinely beautifull/freedom.

u could mention the infuence of their names from the meanings, または something. As for the タイトル im not very good with them but u could try the タイトル generator link on this club if that helps!!
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posted 1年以上前 
Movie_BUFF024 said:
this sounds exactly like 'The Island'...
But umm anyway for character names, I usually just combine 2 characters names from my お気に入り tv shows.. hope this helps
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posted 1年以上前 
HecateA said:
It sounds good!

Male:
Judd Jace
Jeremy Lloyd
Tristan Nate
Chris
Braxton
Brock
Liam
Zack
*if he's a clone, a name would be randomly asigned to him,or even a number, so it might not be a good name but with a killer nickname its all good. または maybe he'd find one for himself.

Female:
Alena Kate
Jane
Candice
Freyja
Kristen
Ally
Tara
Sam
Dora

Your characters are interesting and well planned, the only tip I can give あなた for this one is stay true to them while writting.

The plot sounds excellent, but its hard to tell just によって looking at it. It depends on how あなた write it, and since I'm sure you'll put a lot of effort in it, its a win!

For Titles あなた could try something like:
"364 out of 5876" (a referance to the number of clones)
"Copy cat"
"Out of Hold"
"Hold it"
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posted 1年以上前 
HarryPLover said:
The plot itself sounds very original, my only concern would be making it too unreal または unbelievable; So make sure that whatever the theme might be, that あなた stick to that theme. As for the Names:
Main Male:
Uri,
Jasper,
Daniel,
または Elijah

Main Female:
Avery,
Gladis,
または Savannah

Hoped That Helped(:
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posted 1年以上前 
dragonrider said:
The plot sounds like the movie "The Sixth day"
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posted 1年以上前 
writer67 said:
as its your creation the names must come from you! even if あなた jumble または write them backwards, the names shoul almost jump from a doodle, of green pen. mmm a name, try drawing what ya want for cover, a big red 納屋 with yellow painted windows, and 干し草, 乾草 loft. good work though,{HOPE あなた GIVING OUT PROPS!} your titles good, choose a few もっと見る then sleep on them,literally. your clone? clone of the barn, Barnacle Cloan Force.later;-]
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