Does my character sound like a Mary Sue?


Her name is Lacey. She ran away from her ホーム after her mom married an abusive man. At night, she tucks her hair under her hat, puts on her mask so nobody will recognize her, and plays her violin for small tips anywhere she can. Because of this, she becomes known to the area as the “Masked Violinist” who nobody really knows. Nobody even knows if this “Masked Violinist” is a boy または girl, but everyone assumes the Masked Violinist is a boy. She knows this, but she doesn’t mind much because she thinks that if she were a boy then her step father wouldn’t have hurt her. She luckily gets taken in によって a family of four that includes a mother, father, son, and daughter and they enroll her in the school, and everyone pretty much guesses that she’s a runaway. Whenever anyone asks her about it, though, she glares at them and chews them out.

That's basically all I can say without spoiling the story…. I've taken numerous Mary Sue tests and she always scored low Sue-points, but I just want to make a double check with REAL people... ^-^; So please be COMPLETELY honest with me here. And if あなた want to know what she looks like I’ve put a drawing of her below ^_^

 Does my character sound like a Mary Sue?
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Crappy drawing I knowXD
OneFoggyNight posted 1年以上前
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I like it :)
ellie_bellie135 posted 1年以上前
 OneFoggyNight posted 1年以上前
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Blueeyes99 said:
She actually sounds like a Mary Beth, または Bethany. Not Mary Sue, it’s an old fashion name. BTW, your story sounds interesting!

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posted 1年以上前 
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Thanks ^-^; I was a little scared because a tragic, abusive past is a common Sue-trait....
OneFoggyNight posted 1年以上前
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Btw I MIGHT start posting my story on here... I dunno though XD
OneFoggyNight posted 1年以上前
YumiChan said:
She doesn't sound mary-sue! She actually sounds really intresting! ^_^
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posted 1年以上前 
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Thanks XD
OneFoggyNight posted 1年以上前
Lolly4me2 said:
Naw, not a Mary Sue. :D
A Mary Sue would play a violin, but probably not run away from ホーム または chew people out. XD

Good character. :)
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posted 1年以上前 
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Thanks. I was thinking that, but I wasn't too sure.
OneFoggyNight posted 1年以上前
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-^^- No problem. Actually, my character is slightly on the verge of becoming a Mary Sue. And it's REALLY hard to change them once あなた have a series, and the first 記事 of another series out with them in it as the main character. -.-;
Lolly4me2 posted 1年以上前
ellie_bellie135 said:
No she sounds REAALY interesting and deep. She should have a really cool and interesting that can be shortened into a hum-drum 日 name. Like for example a dark gemstone like Amethest, that shortens into Amy. For example.
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sapherequeen said:
She doesn't sound like a Mary Sue to me.

I think you're fine. :)
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Friendly_Girl said:
There's nothing too Sue-ish, but I think あなた should still be careful. The tragic, abusive past is often a classic at Mary Sues, and also the whole Masked Violinist part can easily turn bad for your character.

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