Eclipse

Hello Dear Reader,
I am 書く an original novel and I wanted people to at least hear the word of it before I tried to get it out in the world. It's called "The Death Contracts, Vol. 1: GLIMPSE" and it's the story of the main character named Astrid Marker.
The reason why I'm posting this link everywhere I know possible is because I want fans. Desperate? No. もっと見る like curious to see how many people can review what I have so far and tell me what they think. I have the first 8 Chapters 投稿されました on my プロフィール at the website figment.com, the link to it plus the synopsis is straight below, but I wanted...

Chapter 5
"Hey Bella, well I was hoping, あなた know I wouldn't ask あなた unless you’re were the last resort cause I hate to be a pain, but do あなた mind driving me home? I just got a text from Alice, she went ホーム like an 時 ago, the school nurses sent her home, her headache was getting worse.
Edward asked on our way out the front doors.
Everyone was rushing like a tornado out the front door all at once, everyone was excited for the weekend. Which made me wonder, it’s not like they have something super exciting happening, nothing is really exciting here.
Edward's 質問 startled me, but I didn’t...

Chapter 4
My night with Jacob was fantastic. Better then fantastic. I couldn’t had imagined losing my virginity any better, and with a better person.
However I would be lying through my teeth if I didn’t say I was still sore. It’s not like everyone talks about, または seen on TV. But now that I’ve experienced it, I fully understand why couples keep their sex life private. Last night was just Jacob and I, no one else, our 愛 shown in physical form. When I was ten my mother spilled the bird and the bee's talk. I wasn’t really fused on the whole concept, merely due to the fact that I was...