48th New York Film Festival Closing Night - "Hereafter"

I stood outside his door, my suitcase on the side of me with my 財布 on my shoulder. I lifted my hand up and knocked. I heard footsteps come to the door and a man with bronze colored hair stood in front of me. I smiled at him and he smiled back.
"Can I help you?"He asked while running a hand through his coiffed hair.He looked me in my eyes and gasped at the color green they were.
"Umm...Is Emmett here?" I asked. He shook his head yes and let me in. I sat my things down によって the door and stood in the hallway and bit my lip. He passed によって me and knocked on a door and opened it a little.
I heard him...

This is a fanfic of Renesmee and Jacob's struggle to be together. Please tell me what あなた think :)

Cancer

It felt like I was having my ハート, 心 ripped out, how could they make me leave him, Jacob? He was my whole life, and I his. We were inseperable, always together, I couldn't understand why she was doing this. Hadn't my mother, Bella, gone throught this years 前 before I was born? My father left her for her own safety, after my Uncle Jasper had tried to kill her, and it completly crushed her, she's told me how the weight of it hurt to carry around. My Grampa Charlie had told me she had been catatonic...