"nessie are あなた sure this is what あなた want ? i mean あなた only just got here and now あなた want to leave i wont stop あなた if thats what you-" i cut him of its not what i wanted but its what i had to do to i dont know why i was leaving but my stomach felt like i had to.
"bye grandad its been great really"
he waved as i got on the plane even thought i knew it was the right thing to do it still hurt saying goodbye like that like i have left a peice of me here..
days weeks months passed and soon enough it was my 17th birthday party nothing could go wrong could it??
well i thought it couldnt
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY NESSIE" all my family yelled as soon as i came down the stairs.
"thank you" i flushed red something my mum use to do when she was human または thats what i was told によって dad.
"presents now または later?" alice asked from then 表, テーブル filled with diffrent coloured boxes.
"later i mean i have to go to school" i answered all to quickly to see her face drop a little
"but can i open one now?" i didnt want to hurt her fellings.
"no no あなた have school so go i will wait here for あなた and your not getting out of it" she stopped and had the gaze that let us all know she was having a vision
"well that is when あなた get back from charlies that is" she smiled
"im going to see grandad??" i was exsited i havnt felt hole for a long time the last time i saw him was 8 years 前 he was still young but i wanted to spend all the time i could with him.
"yes for a few weeks" she shot dad and mum a look that confused me but i let it go i was way to happy to make anything of that
so with my suitcase packed my tickets bought i fled to folks were i had no idea what was waiting for me.
the plane seamed to take forever i mean yeah i was thinking about my past life the past hmm what a strange place.
first my birth me almost killing mum and then the volturie wanting to kill me too seeing grandad and getting this weird conection with that guy erm jacob yeah thats his name feeling in 愛 with him.
then having a boyfriend for the first time sure he was human but he was great ontil he disapeard it broke me i loved him well thats what i thought at the time.
so to sum up
family 2
conection with a stranger 1
number of boyfriends 1
number of current boyfriend 0
great.
thanx for 読書 hope あなた liked it ill write some もっと見る soon thank あなた and sorry about the spelling
:)
"bye grandad its been great really"
he waved as i got on the plane even thought i knew it was the right thing to do it still hurt saying goodbye like that like i have left a peice of me here..
days weeks months passed and soon enough it was my 17th birthday party nothing could go wrong could it??
well i thought it couldnt
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY NESSIE" all my family yelled as soon as i came down the stairs.
"thank you" i flushed red something my mum use to do when she was human または thats what i was told によって dad.
"presents now または later?" alice asked from then 表, テーブル filled with diffrent coloured boxes.
"later i mean i have to go to school" i answered all to quickly to see her face drop a little
"but can i open one now?" i didnt want to hurt her fellings.
"no no あなた have school so go i will wait here for あなた and your not getting out of it" she stopped and had the gaze that let us all know she was having a vision
"well that is when あなた get back from charlies that is" she smiled
"im going to see grandad??" i was exsited i havnt felt hole for a long time the last time i saw him was 8 years 前 he was still young but i wanted to spend all the time i could with him.
"yes for a few weeks" she shot dad and mum a look that confused me but i let it go i was way to happy to make anything of that
so with my suitcase packed my tickets bought i fled to folks were i had no idea what was waiting for me.
the plane seamed to take forever i mean yeah i was thinking about my past life the past hmm what a strange place.
first my birth me almost killing mum and then the volturie wanting to kill me too seeing grandad and getting this weird conection with that guy erm jacob yeah thats his name feeling in 愛 with him.
then having a boyfriend for the first time sure he was human but he was great ontil he disapeard it broke me i loved him well thats what i thought at the time.
so to sum up
family 2
conection with a stranger 1
number of boyfriends 1
number of current boyfriend 0
great.
thanx for 読書 hope あなた liked it ill write some もっと見る soon thank あなた and sorry about the spelling
:)
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there ファン fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add もっと見る descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. あなた can Eメール your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to あなた and あなた can post it または change somethings I did. I would 愛 to write my own ファン fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really 編集 stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
This is for people who have been 読書 Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please コメント and tell me which ones あなた like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If あなた can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a もっと見る interesting name so it draws もっと見る attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a 一覧 of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please コメント and tell me which ones あなた like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If あなた can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a もっと見る interesting name so it draws もっと見る attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a 一覧 of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Its short sorry. its supposed to be a cliff hanger. the 次 one is a lot longer.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper 発言しました at once.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper 発言しました at once.
こんにちは ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.