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This is coninuing from the last article, i try and keep u all happy によって doing a little bit off chapter one, this is the third part of chapter one out of 6.
thx for the support, i just started an 時 前 and now, i cant seem to stop typing! heeheehee. i was planing to use this rough draft as a base line for my real book, but i cant get my book published until i am older so i thought may aswell let them see the rough copy. its not as good as my real copy, soo sorry. enjoy x







I woke up in a room, not my room, but someone else’s. I groaned, my body was stiff and very sore.
“She‘s finally waking.” I didn’t recognise the voice, but it was a girls.
“We can finally get going.” another voice, male this time.
“Shut up, Emmet.” I recognised this voice it was Erik.
“Erik.” I groaned.
“I‘m here.” he stroked my hair.
I tried to open my eyes, but I was too sore. It seemed that I was lying on a mattress, it was very comfortable. The thick heavy blanket was to thick for my liking, I was sweating already. I tried to find Erik’s hand, but instead of finding his hand, I felt something cold, rough, hard and it was shaped like a gun!
I gasped and put my hand under the blanket.
“Aw, frig sake Emmet, あなた could of put that somewhere else.” Erik complained and moved away from me. I kept my eyes closed hoping that maybe it wasn’t a gun. I felt someone stroking my hair again, must be Erik. I was quiet for a long time. The hand that was stroking my hair, was now stroking my face, neck and arms.
“When will that girl wake up Erik. Look at the time.”
“She’ll wake up when she’s ready, Victoria.” Erik replied softly.
“Yeah well, I’m ready to go.” The girl named Victoria 発言しました harshly.
“well go, we’ll meet あなた later.”
I heard the shuffle of footsteps fade away. I lay there maybe for about an 時 and then I heard Erik sigh.
“Come on Mel, wake up.”
I opened my eyes slowly, still feeling really sore. I was in a dark room, Erik’s face was right in front of me smiling. He stroked my cheek. “Hello.” he whispered.
I tried to get up, but I couldn’t. so I gave up.
“Where, where am I?” I asked.
My eyes scanned the dark room. I could see everything even though it was very dark. There was another ベッド beside mine, a wardrobe in the corner. Their was a rocking chair beside the window and It was night time.
“Mel, I’m afraid I’ve done something.”
I turned at looked at Erik. “Yeah, あなた have. Why on earth did あなた write that letter? What did it mean that, I’m leaving? ”
“Look, Mel you’re the one. I can feel it. I 愛 あなた and I want あなた to come and live with me. But I have done something else.” he took my hand, and somehow I was standing up. We went to the far wall. It was smooth and it was a dark purple colour.
“I want あなた to climb up this wall.” He stroked the wall.
“You what?” I shrieked.
“Look, watch me.”
I could see Erik, smiling. And then he was climbing the wall. He was climbing a wall, using his hands and feet. When he reached the top, he jumped down.
“How did あなた do that?” I asked. Stroking the wall.
“I am a vampire.”
I didn’t believe him at first but then I was able to do all these cool things and I realised I was a vampire to. I fainted when I understood what was going on. The 次 日 we went
to the airport. I got out of the car, and went to the boot. Erik kindly packed my clothes and some of my beloved items. I took out my two blue suitcases and set them on the suitcase trolleys. Erik set his suitcases on mine and started pushing the trolley towards the doors.
“Where‘ re we going?” I asked. He didn’t exactly tell me where we were going but, there’s no point going back to my mum because I am a completely different person even though I feel the same inside, on the outside, I have changed so much. I have become really beautiful, my skin is as white as the colour it’s self. My voice has become もっと見る softer, which was hard to believe, how a dangerous, evil, sick vampire could be soft and sweet. I can climb walls, run really fast and I can lure humans to me. I am very strong. I can read peoples mind, but I need to be touching them, to be able to get into their heads. I can torture humans and ヴァンパイア using my mind. It is cool being a vampire, having lots of cool features, but the down side is, not ever being able to be with my family and I have to suck humans blood. I shivered at the thought.
“Where are going to Alaska.” Erik answered.
I put my arm around his waist and set my head on his shoulder. I may as well get used to being kind with Erik, he did say I was the one he wanted and that he loved me. He put his arm over my shoulder. I helped him steer the trolley. We were sitting on the airplane, I was sitting beside Erik. I was pretty tried and I decided maybe I needed some sleep. It was 11pm after all, the great thing is ヴァンパイア can sleep and go out in the sunlight.
I yawned. “I‘m gonna go to sleep.” I warned Erik.
He stoked my cheeks. “You do look tired.”
“Hmm,” I yawned again. I set my head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around me. That’s how my new life began.





Three days later...
I woke up from the dream. That was how I became an vampire, and I would never forget it. Erik was awake looking down at me, smiling. I felt sick, how could this guy または should I say vampire, smile at me, after what he has done to me. That reminded me, he never did tell me how I was turned into a vampire.
I sat up, Erik sat beside me and took my hand. “How did I become a vampire?” I asked.
He laughed. I looked at him, giving him a dirty look. “I don’t find it funny, Erik.” I folded my arms.
“Sorry. Okay, well all I had to do was…”
“Was?”
“Suck your blood.” he looked down playing with the nightgown I was wearing.
“Well, I know that, but how did あなた suck my blood exactly?” I asked.
“Well, the only way we can suck out your blood is によって scraping the left side of your neck and sucking all the blood out, until あなた are free from it, then I have to lick あなた scar and cut open the right side of my neck and pore a few drops into your neck.”
I didn’t understand one thing he said, but I didn’t bother asking him to explain it again. I put my hand up to the left side of my neck.




to be continued.......
posted by pie-102
Nessie's pov
Aunt Alice was getting my Mom ready for high school today because Alice thought Mom would put on something weird .I'm excited because this is my first 日 of high school ever.The only thing i'm worried about is rememberin that everybody is my adopted brother または sister oh and the fact that Jacob wasn't going to be there I am not sure but I think i'm falling for him if only I knew how he felt about me maybe i'll get Daddy to find out for me.I'll ask when I get downstairs.Alice asked is everybody ready to go I replied yes and so did evertbody else.Down to the ガレージ we went Mom,Dad...
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posted by surfergal
Ok, So I thought I took the news pretty well. But as Emmet told me I was sitting on the ベッド when he walk in and I what seemed liek it was in a trance aka I didnt talk for 5 mintues new record for me. Emmet finally got me to speak and then I just went to sleep. The 次 morning Alice came in and woke me up for school but I told her I didnt feel like going, when she walked out of the room I feel back asleep. it was around 11aam when i woke up によって phone telling me i had a text message. It was max asking if I wanted to come over and have a movie 日 because he had the 日 off.I texted him back saying...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
[u][b]Once Bruised, Twice Broken[b][u]

"Go Into The Storm メリダとおそろしの森 One...That's Where Life Is!"

[u][b]Chapter One: Remember December[b][u]
So lets get things straight...
My life is okay for a fifteen 年 old girl I guess. My name is Eve Barnes. And I live two 分 away from my school, here in North Carolina. My parents died a 年 前 in a car crash. It was a head on collision. This person was backing out of there driveway, my parents were taking a short cut home, and they swerved out of the way so they didn't hit them. And along came a truck and BAM! They died. I was with my aunt and uncle...
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posted by nessienjake
I dreamt thıs ...fan fıctıon whıle ı was ın a aıroplane to Australıa and told ıt to my sıster she hand wrote ıt ın her dıary and know ı ストール, 盗んだ ıt and typed ıt warnıng dont be too hard she trıed ıt and shes smaller than me.(lol but ı trıed to ımprove ıt and make ıt longer)
CHAPTER 1 ILLUSION
İ was walking quıckly through the clouded place ın the mıddle of the nıght ın L.A
ı had my MP3 open and ı was sıngıng whıle steppıng on the wet grass.
ı thought ı heard somethıng so ı looked back stıll walkıng...ıt was only a cat lookıng for 食 ın the garbage.İ...
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posted by surfergal
I turned around to see あなた had caught me, I was expecting Cody tob there but he wasnt. I told him Thanks. no prob he 発言しました Im Michael. Well thanks Michael, Im addi. Can I help あなた to class? Michael ask. Yeah that would be great. I said. He ask, So what is a beautiful girl doing in Forks, I take it your new to this whole ice and snow problem we have? Yeah, Im new. Yeah we didnt get a lot of snow of ice where i lived. I said. So あなた lived "down south" then? he said. Yeah I live in Florida. Thats cool. he said. so why are あなた in Forks? he ask? My sorta brother is in the Coast Guard and he got transfered...
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posted by VAMPirella1997
End of part 8:
I laughed. Edward glanced down at me, confused. I grinned back at him.

"that was fun. We should do that もっと見る often."

Edward snorted. "Fun? I thought あなた might be in serious danger," now it was my turn to snort.

"Honestly, Edward. It was fun, though. Admit it. Once あなた knew i wasn't going to get killed." I laughed. He joined in.

"yes, i suppose it was kind of funny."

"Did あなた see his face?" I said, "He was terrified of you!" I immitated what the boy's expression had looked like, and we laughed in unison.

part 9:
Alice skipped to our side.

"Are あなた ready to go catch our 次 plane?"...
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posted by surfergal
When I got into the car, emmet scared the crap out of me he was sitting in the backseat. I 発言しました " here Emmet あなた drive". "no Max will notice if someone is sitting in the front passenger シート, 座席 addi" Emmet said. Okay fine I said. When we got far enough away we switched seats to where emmet was driving. I started crying I couldn't control it. Awe Addi, please dont cry on me He said. Do あなた think I'm crying on cause i want to? I ask but continued before he could answer. I can't control this Emmet, I can't stop feeling like crap. I just, I don't know anymore. Addi its ok, he said. I'm sorry I shouldnt...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
For all the Zoey McDaniel fan, Should I do a POV in some one elses few of Zoeys life? Like Alice, Jasper, Bella, Emmett, Esme, Carisle, または Collin. または do yall want me to keep doing Zoeys POV?


Thanks!!!!!

Sk8bordNewMoon
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posted by surfergal
I got up the stairs and just started crying quietly. I knew everyone could hear me but I didnt feel like talking about it または thinking about it または anything. I put on some sweat pants and I found one of Cody's long sleeved t-shirt in my closet I put it on just smelling his scent on it. I just layed in my ベッド and cried, soon I feel asleep. When I woke up my face was sticky feeling from dried tears. I couldnt believe what had happened yesterday afternoon. i really thouhgt he was going to be my firend but I guess not. I walked または hobbled down the stairs and into the kitchen. Alice and Esme were...
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posted by surfergal
When I finished my homework it was around 11pm. I was tired but I was
understood it unlike usual. I went to sleep and I woke up in the
middle of the night really thirsty and sickish feeling. I went and got
a glass of water and then Carlisle walked down the stairs and I asked
him if he would take my temperature. He 発言しました yes and for me to go sit
on the ソファー, ソファ while he went to get his bag. When he returned he took my
temperature and 発言しました that I had a slight fever and then I just had to
run to the bathroom. I had never puked so much in my life. When I was
done I just layed there in the floor. I...
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posted by surfergal
I
new is was cold out but I didn't care to much. I freshened my makeup
and he came inside to get me and he was talking to Carlisle, as I was
walking down the stairs Alice told me that Carlisle is playing a
fatherly role. I laughed a little bit but not to where Max would
notice. Carlisle told me to be back before 12 am that is. I 発言しました hi to
max and gave him a hug.

I made small talk in the way to the beach. It wasn't much though. When
we got there it was way colder than I thought it was going to be, but I
didn't complain. I ask him how was the coast guard going and he 発言しました
good he 発言しました that he...
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posted by surfergal
I found Jasper and he ask me why I was so nervous I told him that a
boy just walks through the house without even knocking. He 発言しました oh
that's Jacob he umm is umm talk to Alice about it please... Okay I
said. So I went and found Alice sitting on the ソファー, ソファ watching Nessie
and this stranger play with her. I went and sat によって Alice and wispered
in her ear asking who was this boy. She told me that this is Jacob
Black and that's when he looked over and I finally figured out where I
saw him it was at the ダイナー, 食堂 back when I was in the coast guard. He
said nice to meet あなた again Addi. I 発言しました あなた too. Alice...
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posted by surfergal
Addi’s POV

Me and Renesme were having fun at scrabble she was so smart it was
amazing. Luckily Edward and Bella walked through the door and that
ended our game. Although Renesme 発言しました "she wasn't going to let me forget
that she beat me at scrabble". Bella told me that "Esme and Carlisle
would like to see me at the house" so I told "Renesme that I would be
back later to play with her some more".

When I reached the house Carlisle and Esme were waiting for me in the
living I was scared that they were going to tell me that something was
wrong または that I was going to have to leave. Carlisle started...
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posted by surfergal
When I walked in the room Edward asked “if I would like to have a ピアノ
lesson” and I 発言しました “I would 愛 too”. We walked over to the ピアノ and we
sat down on the bench and he pulled out 大砲, キャノン in d major I was so
happy I loved this song. We sat at the ピアノ for nearly an 時 and によって
that time I was playing the first 4 measures. I was so excited! I told
him “thanks” and he 発言しました that “we would learn もっと見る tomorrow”. Emmet was
making fun if me because as I got up off the bench I stretched my back
and hurt my ribs. I ask “Emmet why every time I do something” he laughs “
and...
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posted by surfergal
Addi’s POV

When I woke up I didn't know where I was I started to freak out. But
the I saw the doctor so I calm down. He told me his name was Dr.
Cullen and that I was in the hospital and if u remembered anything
and I told him “that I remembered Sergeant 線, レイ kicking and punching me”.
I ask if “Jordan または Max were okay” and he 発言しました that “they were not hurt
in any way”. I was happy to hear that. I then ask “what happen to
Sergeant Ray”? and he 発言しました that “he is in jail”. I was majorly happy about
that because Sergeant 線, レイ seemed like a pervert. He was creepy. He also
said...
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posted by surfergal
When I got to the hospital I gave them all of my information but I
didn't tell them that I was in the coast guard cause I new that they
would call Senior Chief and tell him that I'm in the hospital and that
would lead to being kicked out. So I got x-rays and they told me nothing serious happened that it was just cracked so they could bandage my ribs up tight to keep it from hurting as bad.


When I got back to the base it was time to get up so we got in ベッド
acting like we had been asleep for a couple of hours. That was the
hardest 日 ever we had to swim do sit-ups and run. I'm not suppose to...
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posted by Alice_Cullen_
Los 40 Principales magazine, in their edition for Spain, interviewed Rob in the 月 of February:

Move over Zac Efron…Have あなた met the High School Musical star?
We met at an awards show. He’s the new face of success. But he’s all the opposite of what I thought he would be. He’s so honest and down to earth. You’d think he’s so prepared for the press, but he’s not.

What do ファン say about あなた when they meet あなた in person?
They are increadibly opinionated. They have very clear ideas as to how I should live my life. Who knew 15 years old could be so moralistic?

Is it true that あなた did...
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posted by callejahLUVSed
okay guys! please keep up the コメント :) 次 chapter should be up soon!

CHAPTER FIVE- The Volturi

I had met the Volturi twice in 90 years. That doesn’t happen to most vampires. The first was brutal. I don’t even know how it started but for some peculiar reason, they thought I had harmed one of the Volturi guards, as his disappearance occurred the same time I was turned. Carlisle was out hunting. Let me get one thing straight. The Volturi aren’t just ‘special’ vampires. They are vampire royalty, the guardians of the vampires, if あなた will. So basically, あなた don’t piss them off....
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THIS IS NOT THE STORY!!!
I'm currently suffering writers' block. I am open to any ideas.
I was bored the entire week, so I came up with a few chapters, but I promised an explanation in the 次 chapter, which I didn't have. I may have to skip a few chapters...

I also want to use this as a thank-you to all of my ファン and people who I'm a ファン of and loved my stories, which is a great boost for my eagerness to write. (Sounds cheesie, I know...)

For those who recently supported -and, frankly, pleaded until I had a headache- my 書く of Renesmee Black's Story:

princesspinkla; thanks for your support,...
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posted by bubble_babe
Ok don't get me wrong I 愛 the Cullens but take a look at what I would do if I was a Cullen


I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride

I would go into my life story when ever I'm board

I would never sleep so I would jump all over

I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about

Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud

I would think about Jakes body

I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to 日付 a girl like me

I'd copy Edward

I'd piss off Edward

^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^

I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger

I would jump off a big 木, ツリー a yell "I belive I can fly"

And most of all I'm Crazy

So tell me if I should be a Cullen