こんにちは guys what's going on? Well I survived the first week of being a sophomore in high school how about you? Well anyways I have half of part eight edited but tomorrow look for midnight sun part 8.5 because there is a whole lot of editing needed. But here is the first part edited. The rest will be tomorrow and edited *promise* so here's part eight don't forget tomorrow look for part 8.5 anyways here we go:
We mostly were walking I was still very angry with her. I had recently found out that nobody knew she was with me except for Alice. Which was もっと見る pressure on me. If I kill her nobody would know. I groaned internally. I was full of blood right now so I didn't feel thirsty, but I was nervous because if she just merely tripped and cut herself and I saw her blood. I groaned again. Why would she let nobody know I wasn't with her. I knew something was wrong with her but she did she realize she is purposely letting me kill her. I wanted to get the car and take her ホーム now. I didn't approve of our "date" anymore, but I didn't want to leave her. I wanted to stay. I looked at her face to see if I could decipher what she was thinking and she looked upset. Why? I turned to face her "what's wrong?" I 発言しました gently didn't want to upset her もっと見る "I'm not a good hiker-your going to have to be very patient" she 発言しました dully. I smiled I was sure today would go によって faster than light "I can be patient-if I make a great effort" I smiled. I was actually hoping today would go によって slower than usual. Time was never enough...her pace was slow but she was better than I had expected. We walked and I remembered that today was still mine and was for as long as I wanted but I was satisfied with my answers, but I couldn't stop thinking of ランダム 質問 that popped in my head. I often wanted to know what she was thinking もっと見る though.
I helped her over big rocks and fallen trees and it was weird how casually I could grab her waste and how she reacted so cool about it. But while I grabbed her waste I felt like one twist of my fingers and I could snap her waste. So I had to be overly cautious. I asked her about her pets and laughed at how many goldfish she killed. It was so much easier when we were alone. I felt like I didn't have to hide. I didn't have to act human. I didn't have to pretend around her, so I easily laughed without quieting down my tone. Nobody would look at me crazy of think I was a lunatic. This was great, except for the boulder hanging over my head-the pressure of me killing her. But it wasnt to hard to forget all about it. I was mesmerized with her just being near me. She teased me often as well "are we there yet" she pretended to whine. I had to smile at that, but I did look ahead and saw a mile away the light through the tree. In probably half an 時 we would be there. I doubted she would see it, but she always did the opposite of expected so I still asked "nearly-do あなた see the brightness ahead" "Umm should I?" she asked akward "maybe it's a bit too soon for your eyes" I teased back "time to visit the optometrist" she muttered under her breath. I chuckled
Finally I could see the clearing and knew it was my cue. I ran from Bella's side, trudgingly, and went to the other clearing on the other side. I watched her reaction to the meadow. She must have noticed everything about it until she noticed I wasn't によって her side anymore and finally noticed I wasn't によって her side she found me. I unbuttoned my シャツ quickly and took a deep breath and waited to see the horror, the shock of her face. Braced myself to see her run and scream away from me. I wouldn't chase her. I expected the worst ignoring the pain in my chest and finally forced my legs フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして to the final step that would change everything.
The sun didn't hurt, I remember my earlier years, actually my first 年 I was afraid of the sun. I did feel the sun on me though. It didn't matter what she felt right now though. What mattered right now was what she felt. But to my surprise she wasn't she was curious. I looked at her and in my mind I heard もっと見る of her melody. It was continuing. So I sang it so low that she wouldnt hear.
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We mostly were walking I was still very angry with her. I had recently found out that nobody knew she was with me except for Alice. Which was もっと見る pressure on me. If I kill her nobody would know. I groaned internally. I was full of blood right now so I didn't feel thirsty, but I was nervous because if she just merely tripped and cut herself and I saw her blood. I groaned again. Why would she let nobody know I wasn't with her. I knew something was wrong with her but she did she realize she is purposely letting me kill her. I wanted to get the car and take her ホーム now. I didn't approve of our "date" anymore, but I didn't want to leave her. I wanted to stay. I looked at her face to see if I could decipher what she was thinking and she looked upset. Why? I turned to face her "what's wrong?" I 発言しました gently didn't want to upset her もっと見る "I'm not a good hiker-your going to have to be very patient" she 発言しました dully. I smiled I was sure today would go によって faster than light "I can be patient-if I make a great effort" I smiled. I was actually hoping today would go によって slower than usual. Time was never enough...her pace was slow but she was better than I had expected. We walked and I remembered that today was still mine and was for as long as I wanted but I was satisfied with my answers, but I couldn't stop thinking of ランダム 質問 that popped in my head. I often wanted to know what she was thinking もっと見る though.
I helped her over big rocks and fallen trees and it was weird how casually I could grab her waste and how she reacted so cool about it. But while I grabbed her waste I felt like one twist of my fingers and I could snap her waste. So I had to be overly cautious. I asked her about her pets and laughed at how many goldfish she killed. It was so much easier when we were alone. I felt like I didn't have to hide. I didn't have to act human. I didn't have to pretend around her, so I easily laughed without quieting down my tone. Nobody would look at me crazy of think I was a lunatic. This was great, except for the boulder hanging over my head-the pressure of me killing her. But it wasnt to hard to forget all about it. I was mesmerized with her just being near me. She teased me often as well "are we there yet" she pretended to whine. I had to smile at that, but I did look ahead and saw a mile away the light through the tree. In probably half an 時 we would be there. I doubted she would see it, but she always did the opposite of expected so I still asked "nearly-do あなた see the brightness ahead" "Umm should I?" she asked akward "maybe it's a bit too soon for your eyes" I teased back "time to visit the optometrist" she muttered under her breath. I chuckled
Finally I could see the clearing and knew it was my cue. I ran from Bella's side, trudgingly, and went to the other clearing on the other side. I watched her reaction to the meadow. She must have noticed everything about it until she noticed I wasn't によって her side anymore and finally noticed I wasn't によって her side she found me. I unbuttoned my シャツ quickly and took a deep breath and waited to see the horror, the shock of her face. Braced myself to see her run and scream away from me. I wouldn't chase her. I expected the worst ignoring the pain in my chest and finally forced my legs フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして to the final step that would change everything.
The sun didn't hurt, I remember my earlier years, actually my first 年 I was afraid of the sun. I did feel the sun on me though. It didn't matter what she felt right now though. What mattered right now was what she felt. But to my surprise she wasn't she was curious. I looked at her and in my mind I heard もっと見る of her melody. It was continuing. So I sang it so low that she wouldnt hear.
コメント and critique let me know what ya think and see あなた tomorrow
Well I created a fanfiction contest spot two months 前 to acknowledge all of our fantastic writers here but unfortunatly that didn't turn out well... Now I'm going to restart that. Our first contest is done, and I was wondering about the 秒 one; Last time only one person participated so this time we need more! If あなた are a fanfiction writers, inspired to be writer, likes Twilight, または anything! Participate in this! It is just a fun thing to do! I know kind of ランダム but now we can bring all competition into one spot. Read Contest #1 on the club for もっと見る details on rules and prizes and everything. I'm not going to need judges right now though so please don't ask about it... または あなた can ask and just be on the waiting 一覧 I'm about to create!
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I herd a knock at my window. "Edward, Charlie is asleep." he came in anyway. I was happy he did. I was all alone. "you should be in bed" he 発言しました to me. "yeah and あなた should be hunting." I 発言しました with a laugh "I've already been" he sighed. I saw the longing in his eyes to be human but I wanted so desperately to be a vampire. "Bella go to sleep I'll sing to you" his velvet voice filled my ears. and I then I was asleep I woke to the ice touching my arm. "Bella, Charlie is up I'll see あなた later My love" I woke to see him jump out off the window. "what あなた looking at Bells?" Charlie asked "nothing Dad, I have to get ready. Did mom call?" Rena had been on my case after the accident with James. "no she didn't, hurry up your late" I got up and walked to the bathroom I looked out the window Edward was there waiting on the tree...
I herd a knock at my window. "Edward, Charlie is asleep." he came in anyway. I was happy he did. I was all alone. "you should be in bed" he 発言しました to me. "yeah and あなた should be hunting." I 発言しました with a laugh "I've already been" he sighed. I saw the longing in his eyes to be human but I wanted so desperately to be a vampire. "Bella go to sleep I'll sing to you" his velvet voice filled my ears. and I then I was asleep I woke to the ice touching my arm. "Bella, Charlie is up I'll see あなた later My love" I woke to see him jump out off the window. "what あなた looking at Bells?" Charlie asked "nothing Dad, I have to get ready. Did mom call?" Rena had been on my case after the accident with James. "no she didn't, hurry up your late" I got up and walked to the bathroom I looked out the window Edward was there waiting on the tree...
Introduction
What if I told あなた I was a vampire and not the good kind, would あなた believe me? Of course not. あなた live in a world where ヴァンパイア don’t exists. But for some reason, I exist. あなた must not let your フレンズ nor your family see this book, it holds all my life secrets. Once あなた turn this page, and unravel my darkest moments, there’s no turning back. Be warned this story isn’t for the faint hearted.
What I tell あなた is the truth, nothing but the truth, but I don’t expect あなた to believe me, no one ever did. We are brought up in a world where ヴァンパイア aren’t supposed to be real, but あなた my friend will understand that they do exist.
Now before あなた turn this page and enter the most darkest world, I must ask あなた again to keep this book a secret, if あなた don’t, well, lets just say ‘you’ll be begging for my forgiveness.’
あなた may now enter. If あなた dare.
What if I told あなた I was a vampire and not the good kind, would あなた believe me? Of course not. あなた live in a world where ヴァンパイア don’t exists. But for some reason, I exist. あなた must not let your フレンズ nor your family see this book, it holds all my life secrets. Once あなた turn this page, and unravel my darkest moments, there’s no turning back. Be warned this story isn’t for the faint hearted.
What I tell あなた is the truth, nothing but the truth, but I don’t expect あなた to believe me, no one ever did. We are brought up in a world where ヴァンパイア aren’t supposed to be real, but あなた my friend will understand that they do exist.
Now before あなた turn this page and enter the most darkest world, I must ask あなた again to keep this book a secret, if あなた don’t, well, lets just say ‘you’ll be begging for my forgiveness.’
あなた may now enter. If あなた dare.
