This is a ファン fiction written によって Charlotte, a friend of mine. We both went to Eternal Twilight, the convention, and she entered the ファン fic competition with this story and got into the final. Thought I would post it here xD
We were standing in the clearing, near the reservation. It was spring and one of Forks few sunny days. There wasn’t a 雲, クラウド in the sky. The rays of light sparkled on the 草 and the scent of お花 hung thick in the air. Now was the moment, I thought. Far enough from the house so dad wouldn’t here me…
Plucking up my courage I turned and Jake was standing closer than I had expected. My senses were usually so sharp; I could hear a twig falling from miles away. I was sure he could here my ハート, 心 beating faster. What was wrong with me? Jacob was just a friend, my very best friend, but nevertheless just a friend.
But lately…
I had never noticed before how many different Colors（色） his russet 毛皮 had in the sun または how beautiful his dark eyes were. The way his laughter made my ハート, 心 glow and his smile made me want to sing. How I felt unsure when he wasn’t によって my side and hours felt like days when he had to leave to go on patrol.
He looked up and I saw the quizzical look on his face. As always he was on his guard, worried I wasn’t perfectly alright. Slowly, I put my hand on his face. If I weren’t half vampire I was sure it would be shaking. I felt his hot breath on the palm of my hand and sighed. I saw the surprise on his face as he heard what I was telling him. Not telling but showing. Not words but colors, bright and shiny, everything that was Jacob, his smile, his laugh, 画像 of us together, running side によって side, racing, having fun. Even in years to come I could never forgot that moment of pure bliss. I looked into his eyes, leaned フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして and felt his lips on mine.
"Nessie..?"
"Yes?"
"You’re my gravity… あなた know that?"
I laughed.
Mom had told me how much she loved dad. I had never understood. Now I knew.
We were standing in the clearing, near the reservation. It was spring and one of Forks few sunny days. There wasn’t a 雲, クラウド in the sky. The rays of light sparkled on the 草 and the scent of お花 hung thick in the air. Now was the moment, I thought. Far enough from the house so dad wouldn’t here me…
Plucking up my courage I turned and Jake was standing closer than I had expected. My senses were usually so sharp; I could hear a twig falling from miles away. I was sure he could here my ハート, 心 beating faster. What was wrong with me? Jacob was just a friend, my very best friend, but nevertheless just a friend.
But lately…
I had never noticed before how many different Colors（色） his russet 毛皮 had in the sun または how beautiful his dark eyes were. The way his laughter made my ハート, 心 glow and his smile made me want to sing. How I felt unsure when he wasn’t によって my side and hours felt like days when he had to leave to go on patrol.
He looked up and I saw the quizzical look on his face. As always he was on his guard, worried I wasn’t perfectly alright. Slowly, I put my hand on his face. If I weren’t half vampire I was sure it would be shaking. I felt his hot breath on the palm of my hand and sighed. I saw the surprise on his face as he heard what I was telling him. Not telling but showing. Not words but colors, bright and shiny, everything that was Jacob, his smile, his laugh, 画像 of us together, running side によって side, racing, having fun. Even in years to come I could never forgot that moment of pure bliss. I looked into his eyes, leaned フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして and felt his lips on mine.
"Nessie..?"
"Yes?"
"You’re my gravity… あなた know that?"
I laughed.
Mom had told me how much she loved dad. I had never understood. Now I knew.
"It shocked me.I was not sure if she meant to attack.That's the only interpretation of her behavior that my past had to offer.But she was smiling.And the emotions that were emanating from her were like nothing I'd ever felt before.
"'You've kept me waiting a long time,'she said."
I didn't realize Alice had come to stand behind me again.
"And あなた ducked your head like a good Southern gentleman,and said,'I'm sorry ma'am.'"Alice laughed at the memory.
Jasper smiled down at her."You held out your hand,and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing.For the first time in almost a century,I felt hope."
Jasper took Alice's hand as he spoke.
Alice grinned."I was just relieved.I thought あなた were never going to 表示する up."
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie あなた know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... または with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e ピアノ for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie あなた know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... または with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e ピアノ for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
While visiting “The Ellen DeGeneres Show,” for an episode that airs this Friday — the same 日 Pattinson’s vampiric portrayal of Edward Cullen springs to life on the big screen, he denied having romantic ties to anyone.
“Now, are あなた single?” Ellen asked.
“Ah, yeah,” the British actor replied.
And it appears despite women throwing themselves at him regularly, Pattinson may be stuck in singleton mode permanently.
“No one else seems to get into a relationship with me. It’s really strange,” he told Ellen.
“People like screaming at me,” the heartthrob added. “Actually, they like screaming at me in relationships as well. No one wants to commit.”
okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" または "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" または "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude コメント about it.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a ランダム piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a ランダム piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
Hello My Follow Twilighters!
there's a New Spot Made, it's The Leah and Jacob spot, so if あなた like their friendship/relationsip couple wise, feel free to join!
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where あなた can discuss their partnership, with other fans, make/find Leah and Jacob ファン Art, and what あなた think over all of Jacob and Leah.
and if あなた have any concerns, または request for the spot, don't be scared to ask, also if あなた know anyone else who likes the Couple, please spread the Jeah 愛 This way :)
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there's a New Spot Made, it's The Leah and Jacob spot, so if あなた like their friendship/relationsip couple wise, feel free to join!
link
登録する TODAY!
where あなた can discuss their partnership, with other fans, make/find Leah and Jacob ファン Art, and what あなた think over all of Jacob and Leah.
and if あなた have any concerns, または request for the spot, don't be scared to ask, also if あなた know anyone else who likes the Couple, please spread the Jeah 愛 This way :)
DefineDelicate
aka
Tiff
Hey! Do あなた guys know a good twilight ファン site? Help us all out and tell us... so we can go on!
Heres the cool site I found: www.freewebs.com/twilighttrailer
I think that あなた all know of stephenie's website..... stepheniemeyer.com
Oh! Also- If anyones knows of a good site to see interviews または もっと見る trailer... Tell Me!
Speaking of stephenie's website... did any of あなた see the "quote of the day" thing she's doing!? I 愛 that idea! what do あなた guys think? I like the idea.. and I just cant wait to read Breaking Dawn! The movie should be good too :)
Heres the cool site I found: www.freewebs.com/twilighttrailer
I think that あなた all know of stephenie's website..... stepheniemeyer.com
Oh! Also- If anyones knows of a good site to see interviews または もっと見る trailer... Tell Me!
Speaking of stephenie's website... did any of あなた see the "quote of the day" thing she's doing!? I 愛 that idea! what do あなた guys think? I like the idea.. and I just cant wait to read Breaking Dawn! The movie should be good too :)
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im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my フレンズ like my 書く but when i do post i would like some criticizing コメント for me to improve with.
Thanks
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