I am rewriting the first book in the Twilight Saga. What are the things that fellow ファン want changed/added/removed?

I got the idea to rewrite the first book after rereading it and noticing how badly written it was. I decided to take a crack at it, but as soon as I sat down to type, I blanked out. I didn't know what the readers would want in a Twilight rewrite--it was a REWRITE, after all, which means revised and better または different from the original. Without knowledge of what readers expected of a redo, I couldn't rewrite it and expect a large audience.

Thus, I came onto ファンポップ to ask. What do fellow Twilight fans, Anti-Twilighters, または Team Switzerlands want to be added, changed, and removed?