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I need some help. If あなた are a writer, then please do help (:

So I have a MAJOR writers block. I've taken a WHOLE 月 break and I think it's time to start again. The story that I want to update NOW is 'The Past Will Never Change'. It was very unique but I'm having a little trouble. I discussed with one of my フレンズ that I wanted to make the 次 chapter Edward's POV, with an explanation of why he left Bella in NM. So if あなた could read the story and maybe give me tips on how to write that? I'm not really good with sticking to the plot line.

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So I will credit あなた when I post it up here and on FF.net. I'll リスペクト あなた and if あなた could even write a tiny chunk for me, I'll REALLY appreciate it. Thanks (:
 lollipopszx3 posted 1年以上前
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akashaapril said:
I really think あなた should some from edward's pov. then kind of write from both throughout the story, eventually having them meet again. I think that would be pretty good. ummmmm...maybe have jacob and the pack in a little chapter telling what happened to them.
as for 書く a little chunk, I won't do, for the fact that I don't really know whats going on and what あなた have planed, if anything.
but anyways, those are just a few things i would do.
and i know how あなた feel, i get writers block all the time, when i'm writing. so i was glad to help. :)
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posted 1年以上前 
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:D thanks! But I know what I'm doing and I want to get an inside of when Edward left Bella. Then the rest will be in Bella's POV.:D
lollipopszx3 posted 1年以上前
rubytuesday101 said:
あなた have a good story,for the 次 chapter explain about how edward feels and how he has to go to school and do normal things.Then he should meet bella and her son.Thats just idea but i think あなた should keep 書く it's a good story.
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posted 1年以上前 
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Thanks! I might do that for later chapters because I want to 表示する how Bella feels!
lollipopszx3 posted 1年以上前
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