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posted by rory2011
David rode the man's car , the man drove to the police station ,when they arrived ,the man told David to go to ask for officer 12's office in the 秒 floor
David ran towards the office as fast as he can ,when he arrived ,the officer looked at him asking " are あなた Mr. David miller ? " yes ,I'm sir " David 発言しました
" sit down please " the officer 発言しました
David sat on that black ソファー, ソファ near the officer disk
" sir ,could あなた please tell me what's going on with my son Kevin " David 発言しました
" today there was a 火災, 火 in the sugar factory where your son work ,your son is a very good strong guy ,he helped all the worker to get out of the factory in save ,but your son couldn't ,he breathed a lot of that dirt air ,he couldn't 移動する ,we found he's body charred when we extinguished the 火災, 火 ,I'm so sorry " the officer 発言しました
" No " David 発言しました
" I'm so sorry sir " the officer 発言しました
David cried and he almost ロスト his control on himself
" ok ,I'll ask a driver for a taxi car to send あなた back to your ホーム ,just calm down " the officer 発言しました

when David entered the house ,Paul and jack were playing with a ball ,jack throw the ball towards his father , " こんにちは David ...catch this "
David were アナと雪の女王 for a few 秒 ... " he's dead " David 発言しました
" who ? " Paul asked
" Kevin .... the 火災, 火 in his work killed him " David 発言しました
Paul ,Jack and Kat were in shocked ,none of them were ready to hear news like this after Mary killed , Kevin was the power for this family ,and now each one of them know that this family is broken and it can be the same anymore
David stood in his ベッド for days ,then he woke up to see his son Jack has left his school ,Paul spending the nights outside the house ,and Kat studying for her school
when he woke up he found Kat sitting near him
" what are あなた doing here ? " David 発言しました
" I needed a quiet place to study " Kat answered
" you're only in the first grade あなた don't need to study .... leave me alone " David 発言しました
" ok " Kat 発言しました closing the door room behind her
David closed his eyes ,and fall in a deep sleep again

when David woke up ,it was three a. m ,he left his ベッド and his room to check out his boys ,but the surprise where when David didn't find Jack and Paul in their beds ,they weren't in the house for the first place
David woke Kat up
" where are your brothers ? " David 発言しました
" I don't know ,they haven't sleep at ホーム from a long time 前 " Kat 発言しました
" why あなた didn't tell me ..... your brothers could be in problem right now " David 発言しました
" I'm sorry .... but Paul told me to not weak あなた up ,he 発言しました あなた need some rest " Kat 発言しました
" just ...please ... stop , did any of them 発言しました something before they leave " David asked
" No " Kat answered

David walked away ,Kat followed him to the living room
" since how long I've been sleeping ? " David asked
" since three days 前 " Kat answered
" don't あなた have a school tomorrow ? " David asked
" yea " Kat answered
" then go to sleep " David 発言しました
Kat walked for a few steps
" oh ,before あなた go ,bring for me a cup of water " David 発言しました
Paul opened the door house ,David heard the door opening so he walked towards the door to see who was that
" where were you? " David asked
" I was .. " Paul 発言しました
" give me the money " David 発言しました
" what money? " Paul asked
" the money that あなた took from my pocket ,you left for me only ten dollars ,and there was a hundred " David 発言しました angry
" I didn't take all that money ,yes I took twenty dollars but I'll never do this to あなた dad " Paul 発言しました
" give me my money または leave my house " David 発言しました
" ok fine ,I'll give あなた everything I have ,here's a hundred dollar and three dollar for being a good father to me " Paul 発言しました throwing the money on his father
" this family is suck " Paul 発言しました throwing the cup that was in Kat's hand
when David turn his back to the door ,Jack came
" and where have あなた been ?,this is not a hotel Jack " David 発言しました
" I was in my friend's house " Jack 発言しました
" what's that smell ? were あなた smoking ? " David 発言しました getting angrier than ever
" chill out David ....it's the fashion for this 年 " Jack 発言しました
" go to your room right now ,and I don't want to see that ジャンク in your mouth again " David 発言しました
" ok ............. goodnight " Jack 発言しました going to his room
" あなた too Kat ,go to sleep " David 発言しました

David's life changed a lot ,he ロスト his control on his sons ,none of them listen to their father ,David had to come back to the job that he always hated , but he had to make money for 食 and paying the bills ,but that wasn't enough ,Jack always taking his father's hard work for drugs and cigarettes with his young gang

after six years ,the things started to be worse for Jack's life ,he ロスト himself with the drugs ,he started selling and buying large amounts of drugs without thinking what will happen to him ,he just wanted money and live happy for the rest of his life ,David know that ,he tried to stop him but Jack doesn't listen to anybody ,so David left him with his gang and he never talked to him
one 日 ,Jack took what he deserves

Kat made the breakfast for her father and brother before they go to their job
Paul and David were sitting on the 表, テーブル when Jack came to have his breakfast
" good morning David " Jack 発言しました sitting on his chair
" Paul give me some パン " David 発言しました ignoring Jack
" fine don't talk to me ,it's your fault ...... Kat bring for me some パン " Jack 発言しました screaming
" go and bring one によって your own ... this is our 食 " Paul 発言しました
" shut up Paul .... this is my money too ,I can take whatever I want ... dad say something ,Paul being so annoying to me " Jack 発言しました
" Jack have your breakfast and get out of my house " David 発言しました without looking at Jack
felt angry ,he took his ジャケット and walked towards the door ,slapping the door with his strong hands ,it felt like the house has been explodes

( sorry if there any spells errors または grammatical errors )
After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at 書く a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm 書く is in the in the section below. If あなた like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen 年 old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.
I got dressed and slipped my ジャケット with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. こんにちは watch where you’re going! “Sorry あなた Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle 発言しました for あなた to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right あなた will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...
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Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

      Their headquarters was nothing もっと見る then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger 宇宙 and tons もっと見る gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different 閲覧数 of the outside building. One monitor was 表示中 a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me. 
      Darrell stayed によって my side...
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Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
don't forget to コメント :D


Chapter 6




“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are あなた bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris または Patricia...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
17
    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy または anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...
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Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he 発言しました hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his サークル, 円 and drew his...
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posted by Dhampires
The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's ハート, 心 whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~     
9
    Zaria
    We came to an agreement, if anything…unusual happened, we’ll check it out. If it happens to be another thing then we’ll comw to the conclusion that we and the book caused this. So on the 次 day, sadly where school wasn’t cancelled, I’d kept an open eye for anything weird.
    “Status report?” Stilere asks as she walks with me around school.
    “Nothing,” I sigh. “You?”
    “Same.” Stilere shakes her head....
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
8
    Terry
    “Yes, it was very bizarre, indeed, Michael. In the middle of the day, in the town of Spear Springs, a horrible storm occurs, nearly knocking people off their feet, it came out of nowhere ad stopped just as abruptly. And if that’s not weird, in a neighborhood of that same town all the windows of the houses on the block smashed at the same time! It’s really…” I zoned out on what the woman was saying.
    It wasn’t bizarre at all, the storm came from the book, again. Zaria, Alex, Iris,...
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Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

      "You're lying," I 発言しました but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
      "That maybe, but would he really want あなた to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add もっと見る to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
      "You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most 上, ページのトップへ notch...
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posted by 1999jacko
Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a 枕 case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back シート, 座席 of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...
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just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if あなた don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours 前 and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
2
Alex
    “Are あなた okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris 発言しました giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. ドレイク, ドレーク was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to クロス the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that ドレイク, ドレーク was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge によって the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked イチゴ red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm キッス on the check and saying, “I 愛 あなた dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I 愛 あなた two.” As he turned into the 次 road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk ホーム または is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" 発言しました Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" 発言しました Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where あなた are I'm picking あなた and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not ホーム for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My ハート, 心 is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any もっと見る of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and あなた are sinner, commit all, あなた are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take あなた to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. あなた know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your 質問 and comments!