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posted by Problematic129
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Summary:
Three years 前 devastating news hit the Loreans, there eighteen 年 old daughter was found dead in the lake. For years police tried to find her killer, but never got anywhere. Soon, everyone gave up, even her parents. But not Destiny, everyday she would try to find police reports similar to her sister. Destiny is no ordinary girl, she has visions and can see things that no one else can, and lately she's been having dreams of her sister about her sister. When it looks like all hope is lost, a young detective comes to her aid, together they uncover the secrets and 未回答 質問 to her sister's death. But the もっと見る closer they get to solving the case, the もっと見る dangerous their lives become.
Prologue
All I remembered was running, または at least, that’s all that mattered at the moment. I was being chased, my predator a few feet from me. Why did I have to be so dumb to walk alone on a creepy night like this?
    All I wanted to see was my sister Destiny, it was her that kept me going. She was my little fourteen 年 old sister and she needed me.
    If I hadn’t taken Destiny away from our parents to live with me, she would have to suffer the shouting and yelling that you’d often hear in my parent’s house.
    “Help!” I yelled to no avail, this was a deserted grassland no one came to, except victims and killers.
    Which I’d soon be.
    I ran into the woods nearby, my breath becoming louder. My muscles screamed and ached, I felt like I couldn’t run no more, but I had too.
    And it was just my luck that I tripped over a small rock and fell, I heard a small crunch. I think I’ve broken my ankle, it burns, but right now all I feel is panic and fear. What do I do?! My killer could be here any second, I have to hide!
    I looked around quickly, but all I saw was trees, but they’d have to do. Despite the protesting ankle, I climbed up the 木, ツリー as quietly and carefully as I could. によって the time I was close enough to get a good view of the ground, but high enough to be obscured によって the leaves, my ankle had this searing pain, but it felt dull enough to ignore. I stayed still and everything was silent for a full moment. But then I heard the sound of foot crunching and leaves, and I saw my killer walk past the tree. All I could see was there head, nothing else, not one single identification of who they were.
    They were all dressed in black, and either that was a black キャップ または hat on the person’s head, または my killer had black hair. But right now I was too disoriented to tell the difference.
    After a few minutes, I carefully got off my tree, and limped in the other direction. After a while I left the woods, I was on some side walk. Yes! Almost there!
    I was just going to step on the street, when something hard collided with my head. But I couldn’t process anything after that except the intense pain in my head, my vision swam, I couldn’t comprehend anything.
    Was I being carried?
    It felt like hours, but was possibly minutes, when my mind started to work again. I blanked for a second, but then I noticed I had a blindfold on, I tried to pry it off, but I was weak. I felt this weird like movement, even though I was sitting, then I realized that we were in a car. Yes! Driving in a car! But my joy at my brightness was short lived, when the car came to an abrupt stop. My head started to thud against my skull, as another intense pain came, but I managed to keep my insanity intact.
    I felt hands, going to my hands, and tying something there. I didn’t know what, but it was pretty hard, my hands ached at the weight of it. Then I was being pushed out of the car and dragged to only god knows where.
    Then my blindfold was off and I was faced to one of the most beautiful lakes I’ve ever seen, with an amazing waterfall. It was then I understood, at least I’d get die somewhere beautiful.
    It was the last thing I saw before I was pushed into the lake, I felt the panicky feeling grip me again as I tried to swim up, but something was holding me down. So I looked down and my eyes widened, my hands were chained together, and the chains led to a very looking heavy weight.
    I couldn’t get out, I was going to drown.
    Destiny! I thought, thinking of my loyal sister, who’d be there to protect her from mom and dad’s infamous fighting, to help her with her homework, to hold her in there arms. Our parents couldn’t, they never did with me, always too pre-occupied. Please, protect her.
    My throat was on fire, my nose felt ready to explode, and my eyes started to burn. I fought and I screamed in the water, being the stubborn person that I was. But that wouldn’t help me not now.
    I kept on moving and fighting until I altogether stopped, and I died. I’ve must’ve looked crazy, I knew I would look crazy. The determined look in my eyes mixed with the emptiness, the last thing on my mind was of my sister.
    
posted by campcheerio123
I woke up to the sound of this: "DESTINY GET YOUR BUTT OUT OF ベッド RIGHT NOW!" I dragged myself out of bed, and walked into the hallway. "YOU HAVE A BLOOD TESTING IN 45 分 AND あなた BETTER BE READY IN 10!" She yelled. I walked back to my room, and began to put my clothes on. I pulled out a pair of dark-wash jeans, and pulled a white t-shirt over my head. Then, I put on a magenta cardigan, that cut off around my hips. It was my favroite 記事 of clothing that I owned. I walked to the bathroom, and sat down on my stool, already tired-out from having to walk all the way across the room. I...
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"Come on Cheren! We'll be late!"

Those words; the voice behind them just makes my ハート, 心 melt. The voice of Touko Whitlea, the girl who I've had a major crush on for... I don't know, maybe 10 years now? I just wondered where she- the tomboyishly cute girl from Nuvema Town- was taking me.
It is her 16th birthday today... yes. Today will be the 日 I confess my 愛 for her.
But what if she didn't get over her last boyfriend, N? God, I hated that guy... who in their right mind would 日付 a guy with neon green hair? It's just not natural! But that's besides the point. She was taking me, only me,...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 7
    Bonding with an enemy
    “She what?!” Grey asks, collapsing in laughter.
    “Stop laughing! I’m being serious!” I whine as I hit him with my pillow.
    “You and me?” He dissolves into another fit.
    “Hey?! I’m not that bad!”
    Grey nods. “But still…wow.”
    “Mutual feeling’s buddy.” I say falling onto my bed.
    After...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 5: Fight!!

The 次 morning, カケス, ジェイ heard cheering. When he went outside he saw a horrible thing. The Kitsune was being forced to fight a giant lizard, while the Kitsune was still very injured.

"No!" カケス, ジェイ yelled as he grabbed a sword and ran toward the トカゲ with his sword.

"What!?" Prince Cole shouted in surprise. The audience started booing as Nick saved the Kitsune.
Then the Guards grabbed the Kitsune and put her in her cage. カケス, ジェイ walked to the Kitsunes cage, and saw the citizens children pulling the Kitsune's tails and Ears as she was chained to the ground while the adults spit at her.

"Why do あなた keep bullying her!?" カケス, ジェイ yelled as they stopped.

"Don't stop!" Cole yelled as he pulled out a ナイフ and started cutting the Kitsune's arm's and legs. Than カケス, ジェイ pushed Cole and Blocked him from hurting her.
I awoke in the middle of the night to Izzy screaming I got out of ベッド as quickly as possible with every 移動する I felt my joint ache "Izzy!" I shouted as quietly as possible. She was trembling and telling someone to stop and leave her alone. I knew that dream.

I shook her and after constantly telling her to wake up she did tears beat from her eyes and she hugged me almost knocking me over in the process. I held her tight and close. As she sobbed quietly into my hair.

"I had that dream again." she told me through a broken sob

"I know it's ok your hear now あなた don't have to suffer it any longer."...
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posted by Dhampires
He's sharp as a tack, heavy as a wrestler yet light as a feather.

Known for his stealthiness he used he's skill to retrieve Carry. Staying at the corner he eyed the place carefully. Seeing it was heavily guarded- two guards guarding the front, two on top, two on long distance at his right and three hidden seperate in the trees. He sighed and thought 'All this just for one girl,' then tried at some humorous 'Carry あなた a sacred pride that I'm sure off.' he sighed and looking down then stranded his eyes to see inside he could see three men standing over Carry, they appeared to be yelling then...
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1. Fantasy

2. Realistic Fiction

3. Globes

4. Rain

5. The Significance of Pens and Pencils

6. Good foods

7. Colors

8. Drama

9. Quotes

10. TV/Comic Characters

11. 天使 on Earth

12. Being a unicorn!

13. Being a Guinea Pig.... ;D

14. Being a Dog. :D

15. Inventions

16. Hybrid/Mutant Animals

17. How to Make Duct Tape Roses

18. Winning a Nobel Peace Prize (What would your speech be!?)

19. Being a Snowman

20. Being Clay/Play Dough/Model Magic

21. Being Socks (YUCK.)

22. Writer's Block (It helps)

23. School

24. Turtles!!!!! (AWESOME!!)

25. Jokes

26. Dogs

27. Lightening

28. Storms

29. Sun

30. Planets

31. Space

32. Awesomeness

33. Horror

34. Biking

35. Nature

36. Monkeys

37. Trees

38. Leaves






Some of these things I prefer to write about while others hate 書く about it. That's fine! All あなた need to brainstorm is a single word and start writing.
posted by Problematic129
Chapter 20
    The girl who had everything
    Why would Dorothy be intimdating to a person as harmless as Serache? Serache doesn’t seem like the type to cause trouble, certainly not from that vision. But my sister wanted to make sure that me and her フレンズ didn’t mingle.
    From seeing the vision’s I could tell why she wouldn’t want me to have to do anything with them. But Serache? It seemed like Serache didn’t like it just as much as the people who were being pranked. And sometimes Dorothy looked like she wanted to be anywhere...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the コメント :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 8
    Learning または murder?
    “Miss Lorean and Miss Jenkins, keep it down!” Our teacher barked.
    Jess rolled her eyes. “It’s Mrs. Jenkins, sir.”
    The class exploded into giggles, and I could’ve sworn Mr. Hiat cracked a smile before smoothing it into an annoyed frown. “Is that so?”
    Jess nodded, batting her eyelashes. I tried to contain my giggles as she stood up and flashed us a ring. “It...
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Chapter Six

      It was exactly what Dakota feared. The figure now huddled in a conner weeping it's eyes out. It was Reese but this side of Reese was something Dakota had never seen before. It was bizarre and horrifying. Reese didn't even notice Dakota staring at her through the tiny window on the door. Reese was probably so insane that she probably did kill Abby whether she knew it または not. Dakota couldn't process her friend または what she thought was her friend. The girl inside of that room was a monster, a trembling, distraught, monster.
      "You are not suppose to be back here miss,"...
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posted by rory2011
日 によって 日 ,the blood covering the streets もっと見る ,I don't know how I got here ,in this 通り, ストリート ,all I remember that I wanted to check out my sister if she's in the house または not ,well ,looks like my feet lead me here again

the sun was covered によって the raining clouds ,the dead bodies were everywhere ,people who survived were screaming to take the bodies away before the rain fall down ,I wanted to help them ,so I helped a woman to take her daughter's dead body away
when we entered to a place looked like a small hospital ,the woman hold her daughter ,I was standing 次 to her watching her crying on...
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Well, this is a song I wrote.

I've heard it wrong
There's been a mistake
There was a time when I won and I knew it

We will go on and on and on and on
There will be no もっと見る mistakes
For the future
We will fight through it all without complaint

We are the winners, my friend
And we'll fight through it all in the end
There's no time to lose it
Cuz we are the winners

Well, I know that it's been a great day
We've done it all
We've been the best we can be and あなた know it
We are the winners, my friend.
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Chapter Eight: Hello, Stranger Please Don't Betray Me

      The guy stood in front of us. We needed to give him answer and fast. He was a spy and he probably knew もっと見る then he was letting on. This make sit hard to trust him. Courtney immediately 発言しました yes. I gave her a glare and shrugged. Raven was nodding her head as while. It made me think. Were they up to something? Did they know the guy? They could have known him because he goes here for school. Actually, he seemed much older then the rest of us. He had boyish features but he certainly was someone who looks much older then 18.
     ...
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