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The genres I write, and the stories I write, always end up requiring lots of battle scenes. The problem is I suck at battle scenes and I can never get inspired!!!! Do あなた have any アドバイス on how to write a good battle scene または just how to get inspired for certain types of scenes like that???
 AislingYJ posted 1年以上前
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dragonsmemory said:
Battle scenes must encompass a wide span of ground, and thus, require several different perspectives. Choose characters from different areas of the battlefield, different ranks, and different sides, and write what they're doing. Once あなた go a little ways with one guy, switch to another.

If あなた need もっと見る help, message me and I'll send あなた an example.
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posted 1年以上前 
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Well, my problem isn't that. See what I've been 書く is Young Justice fanfiction, which is basically superheroes fighting supervillains, I think my problem is that I get really descriptive and can't get the action to sound right..
AislingYJ posted 1年以上前
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Ah...Then listen carefully to my advice. When あなた write the scene, don't think about it, just go. Just roll with whatever thoughts come to your mind. Perhaps if I saw a sample, I might be able to provide something もっと見る concrete, if あなた need it
dragonsmemory posted 1年以上前
Nos_DragonFly said:
First off あなた need a reason so the most common reasons to start a battle either religion または politic's または better text me :) I 愛 battles so much that I started playing strategy games since I was like 7:D.
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posted 1年以上前 
Sylvia_Puffin said:
あなた could try 書く different genres. If あなた don't want to do that, あなた could try 書く the battle scene as a script first, so あなた don't get too descriptive, and then converting it into story form. IDK if that works, it just came to me.
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