Help!!!!! I don't know where to change it または keep it all the same!?!?!?!
Ok I'm 書く this book of mine but half my hearts in it! I mean I like having my readers backed with curiosity when I become all business, I'm feeling that I've nearly sucked all the mysterious out of it, and I haven't gotten to Chapter Three. Although it's where I reveal a lot and even though there is still so much もっと見る to come I feel like I should make my readers wait make the curiosity build yet one part wants me change and rethink the organized plan I'm going with while other half wants me to leave it exactly the way it is. Any アドバイス guys?!?!?!?!?!?!