Is this a good drawing of tdi Gwen?????

better than anything i can make! it's beautiful!

It's Awesome she just needs a face....

yea u just need da face :^) cool drawing

Shoulder pads: Gwen has them.

Like I've 発言しました before:

It'd be sooooo much better if it were in the correct section; ya know, images, and not question/answer? -.-

well i mean if あなた want some constructive critisisome she had noodle arms puffy sholders and i think she happens to be missing a face, i mean me personaly i think thats an inportant part but what ever....you probably just got あなた fealings hurt huh?

look just make her morshapely and give her もっと見る personality to her look. But other than that its great!


I HAS DA STEEK!

Alright *whips out a Gwen picture for comparing*
Time for major criticism...
[This might be harsh. Just keep in mind, I'm just stating my opinion.]
Hair is slightly different (no bang in the front), but I guess she could change it..
I think it would be better if あなた added a bit もっと見る definition to the head (more cheek?). Her shoulders seem a bit puffy. Its a bit もっと見る broad in TDI, but puffiness sorta suggests female..I guess. The the sleeves should be slightly longer since it looks..well, puffy. I think she has some kind of..neck ベルト thingy? Her arms looks a bit too stringy. And...I guess since Gwen is a girl, she should have もっと見る form in her body. Like it should be a bit more..curvy. Since あなた made her neck bigger, she should have もっと見る weight to her body to make it もっと見る natural (otherwise, the neck shouldn't be wider than the body).
..Sorry, I guess I'm not too good with words または critiquing -.- Its still a nice quick picture though.

Um...I don't know. Let me draw something quick.
Actually, mines is pretty horrible -.- My マウス was going everywhere..