I've been gone for a while. Needed to think about things...but anyway here's a new series!
DISCLAIMER-Dude,you know the deal.
First Chapter-Tony's POV
After much thought,I decided I should just call. It couldn't hurt. I moved to grab my phone and felt a sharp,sudden feeling. Suddenly, the pungent smell of blood flooded my nostrils. Another bloody nose had come about,all I did was move!
Earlier today,McGeek threw a football to me. Not fully watching where I was heading,I ran into the metal pole. Last time I'll go along for him. I had broken my nose. Whipedie fricken' doo!
Gibbs was pissed that we were fooling around,so I got a harsh head slap too.After being rushed to the hospital,my close friend,Ziva drove me home. She just walked me up the stairs and left.
Narrator's POV...
Tony took care of his bloody nose. He then turned off all the lights and paced back and forth.
Tony's POV
Ziva doesn't 愛 me. She doesn't care. She's seeing someone else. I can't make the mistake of killing him again. If it makes her happy,then I'll deal with it. Finally,I just can take it.
I unsteadily pick up my cell. I dial her number.
"Tony?"
"Oh,sorry are あなた with your 'friend'?"
"N..."she tried to beat him to his 次 comment.
"If あなた are,remember protection."
"I'm not actually." she retorted.
"Well,movie night?" he 発言しました in a adoring way.
I heard a long pause on Ziva's end.
"I will be over momentarily." she said.
I turned on all the lights and went into the bathroom. I fixed my hair a little bit and ran to my room. Wait! Why was I doing this. She had a boyfriend...that wasn't me.
Narrator's POV
Anthony heard a sudden knock on the door.
He approached the door with unsteady hands.
"Hi,Zee."
"Are あなた feeling,well?"
"Yeah,just a little sore."
He stepped aside,queing her entrance.She had a paper bag in her hand.
"What is this,my sexy ninja?" he 発言しました with a devlish smile.
"Sexy?" she asked.
"Well,this is awkward,so I will go take a shower." Tony insisted.
Ziva waited until he went into the bathroom,and then quietly went into his room. She fingered through his ベッド side table. She found a few dirty magazines,expired condoms,and a book. Not a regular book either. It was a book he kept as a journal.
DISCLAIMER-Dude,you know the deal.
First Chapter-Tony's POV
After much thought,I decided I should just call. It couldn't hurt. I moved to grab my phone and felt a sharp,sudden feeling. Suddenly, the pungent smell of blood flooded my nostrils. Another bloody nose had come about,all I did was move!
Earlier today,McGeek threw a football to me. Not fully watching where I was heading,I ran into the metal pole. Last time I'll go along for him. I had broken my nose. Whipedie fricken' doo!
Gibbs was pissed that we were fooling around,so I got a harsh head slap too.After being rushed to the hospital,my close friend,Ziva drove me home. She just walked me up the stairs and left.
Narrator's POV...
Tony took care of his bloody nose. He then turned off all the lights and paced back and forth.
Tony's POV
Ziva doesn't 愛 me. She doesn't care. She's seeing someone else. I can't make the mistake of killing him again. If it makes her happy,then I'll deal with it. Finally,I just can take it.
I unsteadily pick up my cell. I dial her number.
"Tony?"
"Oh,sorry are あなた with your 'friend'?"
"N..."she tried to beat him to his 次 comment.
"If あなた are,remember protection."
"I'm not actually." she retorted.
"Well,movie night?" he 発言しました in a adoring way.
I heard a long pause on Ziva's end.
"I will be over momentarily." she said.
I turned on all the lights and went into the bathroom. I fixed my hair a little bit and ran to my room. Wait! Why was I doing this. She had a boyfriend...that wasn't me.
Narrator's POV
Anthony heard a sudden knock on the door.
He approached the door with unsteady hands.
"Hi,Zee."
"Are あなた feeling,well?"
"Yeah,just a little sore."
He stepped aside,queing her entrance.She had a paper bag in her hand.
"What is this,my sexy ninja?" he 発言しました with a devlish smile.
"Sexy?" she asked.
"Well,this is awkward,so I will go take a shower." Tony insisted.
Ziva waited until he went into the bathroom,and then quietly went into his room. She fingered through his ベッド side table. She found a few dirty magazines,expired condoms,and a book. Not a regular book either. It was a book he kept as a journal.
i need help cus i have writers block and i need help chapter 2 was complet crap so some one give me ideas
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter または try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter または try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter